History FanFic / TheSecondTry

9th May '17 11:43:43 AM Triscon42
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* CruelToBeKind: In chapter six Asuka is angry and depressed and she stubbornly refuses to eat anything [[spoiler:due to her pregnancy.]] Shinji does not know what else to do to reason with her so he resorts to hurting her:

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* CruelToBeKind: In chapter six Asuka is angry falls into a depression and depressed and she stubbornly refuses to eat anything stops eating [[spoiler:due to her pregnancy.]] Shinji does not know what else to do makes several attempts to reason with her, but Asuka always was too stubborn for her so he resorts own good, and he's forced to hurting her:play ''the guilt card''.
28th Apr '17 6:18:05 AM TyeDyeWildebeest
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* FrightInducedBunkmate: Happens when Asuka and Shinji are [[CoitusInterruptus about to have sex]], only for a small earthquake to hit, causing [[spoiler: their daughter Aki]] to run into their room out of fear and ask to sleep with them.
4th Apr '17 9:43:33 PM Gamermaster
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* JealousParent: [[spoiler: Asuka is the Temporary type. She ''really'' didn't want a kid, partially out of fear that it would ruin her relationship with [[LivingEmotionalCrutch Shinji]]. It was to the point that she ''tried to induce a miscarriage via starvation''. Fortunately, seeing the first ultrasound awakened her maternal instinct and she was firmly in {{Good Parent|s}} territory by the time that Aki was born.]]

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* JealousParent: [[spoiler: Asuka is the Temporary type. She ''really'' didn't want a kid, partially out of fear that it would ruin her relationship with [[LivingEmotionalCrutch Shinji]]. It was to the point that she ''tried to induce a miscarriage via starvation''. Fortunately, seeing the first ultrasound awakened her maternal instinct and she was firmly in {{Good Parent|s}} territory by the time that Aki was born.born (though her jealous phase would come back to haunt her during her rematch with [[MindRape Arael]]).]]
2nd Apr '17 9:56:22 PM Gamermaster
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* DeadPersonConversation: Asuka talks with [[spoiler: [[RetGone Aki]]]] during Arael's MindRape as a form of mental protection. [[spoiler:Aki later turned out to be alive ([[TimeyWimyBall even though she wasn't at the time of the conversation]]) which makes this a subversion.]]
30th Mar '17 3:38:52 PM Gamermaster
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-->"What?" he whispered hoarsely, his trembling arms tugging unconsciously on the cuffs around his wrists. "WHAT?? Those words... those words that I had been longing to hear for so long... and you dare," tears formed in his eyes, but he couldn't tell whether from anger or disappointment, "you DARE to say them now? You've never been a father to me. You've sent me away, only called me back to pilot against my will, forcing me through the worst time of my life. Just in the last few hours, you imprisoned me, indirectly threatened to kill me and worst of all used my missing child to torture the woman I love. And you seriously expect me just to be... a good son... and tell you everything you want to know..."

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-->"What?" he whispered hoarsely, his trembling arms tugging unconsciously on the cuffs around his wrists. "WHAT?? Those words... those words that I had been longing to hear for so long... and you dare," tears formed in his eyes, but he couldn't tell whether from anger or disappointment, "you DARE to say them now? You've never been a father to me. You've sent me away, only called me back to pilot against my will, forcing me through the worst time of my life. Just in the last few hours, you imprisoned me, indirectly threatened to kill me and worst of all used [[spoiler:used my missing child child]] to torture the woman I love. And you seriously expect me just to be... a good son... and tell you everything you want to know..."



* BetterThanItSounds:
** The two most commonly used Eva fanfic plots are done together.
** Or: Two teenagers try to hide a relationship and character development that no one would believe they've had even if they showed them.
** Or: Two loving parents attempt to prevent the events that led to their daughter's birth.
12th Mar '17 1:05:26 PM Gamermaster
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* BewareTheQuietOnes: Rei is usually quiet and composed. [[spoiler:Threatens her niece]] and she’ll make you wish you’re dead.

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* BewareTheQuietOnes: Rei is usually quiet and composed. [[spoiler:Threatens [[spoiler:Threaten her niece]] and she’ll make you wish you’re dead.
13th Jan '17 2:23:19 AM Ereiam
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* KnightInSourArmor: Asuka is delighted to save the world after it took everything from her again and then reset itself. She's determined to try and save it anyway.

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* KnightInSourArmor: [[SarcasmMode Asuka is delighted to save the world after it took everything from her again and then reset itself.itself]]. She's determined to try and save it anyway.
8th Jan '17 11:57:28 AM SeptimusHeap
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* FreudWasRight: ''"You know, we've both been 'thrown out' by our mothers. Wonder how people would interpret that."''
4th Dec '16 7:21:34 PM Tuckerscreator
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* FakePeriodExcuse: Indirect example; Misato claims that Asuka is having her period to explain why her Sync Ratio had dropped.
6th Nov '16 1:23:06 AM Theriocephalus
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* NegativeSpaceWedgie: Leliel -a black-and-white-striped floating sphere whose shadow is an alternate dimension and its true body- shows up in the first episode -fittingly named after it-. Shinji [[spoiler:intentionally falls inside it and tries ripping it apart from within like his mother did [[PeggySue the first around,]] but he has no idea of how she did it, so he has to wait till Yui decides to go berserker.]]

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* NegativeSpaceWedgie: Leliel -a Leliel, a black-and-white-striped floating sphere whose shadow is an alternate dimension and its true body- body, shows up in the first episode -fittingly fittingly named after it-. it. Shinji [[spoiler:intentionally falls inside it and tries ripping it apart from within like his mother did [[PeggySue the first time around,]] but he has no idea of how she did it, so he has to wait till Yui decides to go berserker.]]
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