History FanFic / TheHillOfSwords

15th Jun '16 1:24:18 AM Arcorann
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* MythologyGag: Shirou's references to, for instance, 'Tohsaka Rin Lecture Position #1', which are reminiscent of the specific few character drawings that appear in the visual novel.

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* MythologyGag: Shirou's MythologyGag:
**Shirou's
references to, for instance, 'Tohsaka Rin Lecture Position #1', which are reminiscent of the specific few character drawings that appear in the visual novel. novel.
**Chapter 16:
-->"Worked out," she ground out. "Worked out, he says. He twists the entire thing about in whatever way he wants, and then when it's all done he tells me that he was making it up on the spot. All works out, he says..."
-->I rolled my eyes. "Stop being so melodramatic. Imagine how it would have turned out if you had summoned someone who didn't have the convenient Master/Servant model to base their actions off of. [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero What would it have been like if you just summoned someone who had no experience at all with this kind of thing as a Servant?]] How well do you think they would have reacted to some of the earlier scenes we found ourselves in?"
-->Louise's grimace widened a bit, but her fist gradually stopped shaking. Finally, she let her hand fall back to her side with a sigh. "You know what?" she admitted sounding tired. "You're probably right." She opened her eyes as she rubbed the back of her head awkwardly with her wand. "Towards the beginning there I might have acted a little over the top as a Master."



* WhatMightHaveBeen: Lampshaded in chapter 16:
-->"Worked out," she ground out. "Worked out, he says. He twists the entire thing about in whatever way he wants, and then when it's all done he tells me that he was making it up on the spot. All works out, he says..."
-->I rolled my eyes. "Stop being so melodramatic. Imagine how it would have turned out if you had summoned someone who didn't have the convenient Master/Servant model to base their actions off of. [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero What would it have been like if you just summoned someone who had no experience at all with this kind of thing as a Servant?]] How well do you think they would have reacted to some of the earlier scenes we found ourselves in?"
-->Louise's grimace widened a bit, but her fist gradually stopped shaking. Finally, she let her hand fall back to her side with a sigh. "You know what?" she admitted sounding tired. "You're probably right." She opened her eyes as she rubbed the back of her head awkwardly with her wand. "Towards the beginning there I might have acted a little over the top as a Master."
15th May '16 9:13:53 AM TheSinful
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: When Henrietta brings up that there hasn't been a Void user in centuries, Shirou suggests that because so little is known about Void magic, there might have been several even hundreds of Void users who were mistaken for failures and never learned to utilize their magic.
14th May '16 3:57:29 PM TheSinful
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** [[spoiler:During the DistantFinale, Louise mentions that she had to summon Shirou five separate times.]]
14th May '16 2:47:31 PM TheSinful
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* DirtyBusiness: After [[spoiler:rescuing Tabitha and her mother]], Shirou realizes that the very guards they drugged will likely be sent after them and thus kills everyone in the castle.


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* OrgasmicallyDelicious: Kirche reaction to Shirou's tea is strong enough he wonders if she actually orgasmed from it.
14th May '16 2:34:20 PM TheSinful
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* IdiotBall: Shirou in the latter half of the final battle. [[spoiler: He gets into a sword fight with Sheffield while they are in Unlimited Blade Works (and the sword she is using is one of his). Then, after UBW runs out and he has removed their contracts with Rule Breaker, he beats her to death (losing an eye as she fights back) instead of just getting Derflinger and stabbing her. Or calling all his friends for help.]]

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* IdiotBall: Shirou in IllPretendIDidntHearThat: When the latter half group is smuggling Tabitha and her mother out of Gallia, a guard spots the final battle. [[spoiler: He gets into a sword fight with Sheffield while they are two asleep in Unlimited Blade Works (and the sword she is using is one of his). Then, after UBW runs out and he has removed their contracts with Rule Breaker, he beats her to death (losing an eye as she fights back) instead of just getting Derflinger cart. He promptly covers them up and stabbing her. Or calling all his friends for help.]]declares the cart clear of contraband.


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* IdiotBall: Shirou in the latter half of the final battle. [[spoiler: He gets into a sword fight with Sheffield while they are in Unlimited Blade Works (and the sword she is using is one of his). Then, after UBW runs out and he has removed their contracts with Rule Breaker, he beats her to death (losing an eye as she fights back) instead of just getting Derflinger and stabbing her. Or calling all his friends for help.]]
14th May '16 2:14:38 PM TheSinful
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Louise always dreams about swords and battle, definitely not about kinky threesomes with Kirche.
13th May '16 5:27:42 PM TheSinful
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* StrayShotsHitNothing: Averted. Apparently Shirou's deflected attack against Fouquet hit (and destroyed) a nearby hill.

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* StrayShotsHitNothing: StrayShotsStrikeNothing: Averted. Apparently Shirou's deflected attack against Fouquet hit (and destroyed) a nearby hill.
13th May '16 1:04:37 AM TheSinful
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* GenreSavvy: As Shiro notes, magical weapons get used a ''lot'' and therefore tend to break very quickly. Derflinger on the other hand is an ''extremely'' magical weapon that's still old enough to be covered in rust. Ergo, he must be insanely powerful.
13th May '16 1:01:25 AM TheSinful
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** And Cattleya is a FriendToAllLivingThings, she's got snakes, tigers, and who knows what else in her carriage and they are all docile and unthreatening.

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** And Cattleya is a FriendToAllLivingThings, she's got snakes, tigers, and who knows what else in her carriage and they are all docile and unthreatening.nonthreatening.
* FunnyBackgroundEvent: While Shirou explains the Dragonslayer sword to Louise, Kirche keeps trying to participate in the roleplaying she thinks Shirou and Tabitha were doing.
13th May '16 12:33:41 AM TheSinful
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** Guiche as well. He goes from blowhard fop to badass MagicKnight.

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** Guiche as well. He goes from blowhard fop to badass MagicKnight. It's especially noteworthy when Shirou remarks how surprised he is that Guiche hasn't [[CasanovaWannabe taken advantage of having so many fangirls]] and Guiche is honestly confused as to why he'd do that; it might ruin his relationship with Montmorency.
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