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* PayEvilUntoEvil / KickTheSonOfABitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil / KickTheSonOfABitch: PayEvilUntoEvil: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In this story, [[JustForPun Reality Ends Sues]].
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* RapunzelHair: At least three of the Sues have hair down to their ankles.
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* SkunkStripe: At least four of the Sues have colored streaks in their hair. These are usually lighter streaks on darker colors, but one character has black streaks on blonde hair.
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The two gods, Morgoth and Varda, play a game. Morgoth creates {{Mary Sue}}s and inserts them into Middle-earth. Varda imposes reality, logic, {{canon}}. Varda wins if the Sue dies. Yes, she dies, trapped by her own stupidity or impossible existence. Sometimes, other gods and great heroes from ''The Silmarillion'' take Varda's place as Morgoth's opponent. There is eventually a silly plot where ''Silmarillion'' characters scheme against Morgoth, and someone steals two Sues from Morgoth.
''The Game of the Gods'' features thirty-three Sues, and hits many of the Mary Sue traits in this fandom. It will amuse fans of Middle-earth who hate bad fan fiction. Part of the fun is understanding how Varda uses details of Middle-earth canon to take down Sues. Readers who don't know Middle-earth may find less amusement.
''The Game of the Gods'' features thirty-three Sues, and hits many of the Mary Sue traits in this fandom. It will amuse fans of Middle-earth who hate bad fan fiction. Part of the fun is understanding how Varda uses details of Middle-earth canon to take down Sues. Readers who don't know Middle-earth may find less amusement.
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The two gods, Morgoth and Varda, play a game. Morgoth creates {{Mary Sue}}s [=OCs=] and inserts them into Middle-earth. Varda imposes reality, logic, {{canon}}. Varda wins if the Sue dies. Yes, she dies, trapped by her own stupidity or impossible existence. Sometimes, other gods and great heroes from ''The Silmarillion'' take Varda's place as Morgoth's opponent. There is eventually a silly plot where ''Silmarillion'' characters scheme against Morgoth, and someone steals two Sues from Morgoth.
''The Game of the Gods'' features thirty-three Sues, and hits manyof the Mary Sue cliched traits in this fandom. It will amuse fans of Middle-earth who hate bad fan fiction. Part of the fun is understanding how Varda uses details of Middle-earth canon to take down Sues. Readers who don't know Middle-earth may find less amusement.
''The Game of the Gods'' features thirty-three Sues, and hits many
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* CosmicChessGame: Morgoth versus Varda. The board is Middle-earth. Morgoth's game pieces are Mary Sues.
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* CosmicChessGame: Morgoth versus Varda. The board is Middle-earth. Morgoth's game pieces are Mary Sues.bad characters.
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* TheDevilIsALoser: Morgoth repeatedly loses the game by getting his Mary Sues killed through a loose grasp of the lore, the cleverness of his opponents, and sheer lack of common sense. Additionally, he is mocked by just about every other character.
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* TheDevilIsALoser: Morgoth repeatedly loses the game by getting his Mary Sues pawns killed through a loose grasp of the lore, the cleverness of his opponents, and sheer lack of common sense. Additionally, he is mocked by just about every other character.
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* HalfHumanHybrid or NonhumanHumanoidHybrid: Most of the Mary Sues are elves: if not all elf, then half elf and half something else. The part-Elvish Sue can enjoy her elven advantages (beauty, strength, and so on) and still count humans, hobbits or dragons among her relatives.
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* HalfHumanHybrid or NonhumanHumanoidHybrid: Most of the Mary Sues Morgoth's pawns are elves: if not all elf, then half elf and half something else. The part-Elvish Sue can enjoy her elven advantages (beauty, strength, and so on) and still count humans, hobbits or dragons among her relatives.
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* ParodySue: Morgoth ''creates'' Mary Sues, but they don't succeed in Middle-earth.
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* ParodySue: Morgoth ''creates'' Mary Sues, them, but they don't succeed in Middle-earth.
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* ShowWithinAShow: Each game is a story. [[TheDevilIsALoser Morgoth is always losing]], so we go through 30 stories, each centered on some Mary Sue.
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* ShowWithinAShow: Each game is a story. [[TheDevilIsALoser Morgoth is always losing]], so we go through 30 stories, each centered on some Mary Sue.bland heroine.
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* RealityEnsues: In this story, [[JustForPun Reality Ends Sues]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In this story, [[JustForPun Reality Ends Sues]].
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* PayEvilUntoEvil/KickTheSonOfABitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil/KickTheSonOfABitch: PayEvilUntoEvil / KickTheSonOfABitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil / KickASonOfTheBitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil / KickASonOfTheBitch: PayEvilUntoEvil/KickTheSonOfABitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil / KickTheSonOfTheBitch: KickASonOfTheBitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil / KickTheSonOfTheBitch: Feanor quickly goes to punching Morgoth, after seeing him. Also, the fic in general.
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** He possesses Arwen and turns her evil, all to spite Varda and Galadriel.
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* YouDidntAsk: Shelob's explanation for why she's SuddenlyVoiced.
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* YouDidntAsk: Shelob's explanation for why she's SuddenlyVoiced.SuddenlySpeaking.
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* PossessionSue: A literal case with the fifth chapter, "Arwen's Artistry". It fails to take into account Galadriel's ability to see into hearts; she drives the darkness from Arwen in seconds.
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* ThirtySuePileup: Invoked by Morgoth, who has boxes of Sue pieces for the game, but downplayed because Morgoth never activates more than one or two Sues at the same time.
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* SickeninglySweethearts: Námo and Vairë. Varda says they're so in love it's disgusting.
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* SummonBiggerFish: [[spoiler:Fëanor's end game. By unleashing Morgoth's omnipotent Vala Sue, he forces the Valar to summon [[{{God}} Eru]] Himself. He then gives the Silmarils back in order to display his redemption, and to ask Eru to make his working model of the universe real so that he and his family could live there.]]
