History FanFic / TheDragonKingsTemple

23rd Jun '16 9:15:38 PM SithkingZero
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** Despite the PG nature of the show showing children having fun with magical powers and having an adventure to defeat the Fire Lord, the fact of the matter is that the war has turned these ordinary children- the oldest of whom is still in their teenage years- into ''child soldiers,'' who have seen the front lines of the battlefield, taken lives, and done things that no one their age has any right to do.
25th Mar '16 11:46:59 PM JakesBrain
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--->Jack O'Neill. "They're ''weapons''. Someone took a couple of kids and raised them as living weapons."

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--->Jack O'Neill. --->'''Jack O'Neill:''' "They're ''weapons''. Someone took a couple of kids and raised them as living weapons."\\
'''Daniel Jackson:''' "[…] these abilities may simply be common in their cultures. If the children are weapons -- well, maybe ''everyone'' is.
"
16th Sep '15 10:28:56 AM Morgenthaler
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* MustBeInvited: Apparently a characteristic of ''janshin''. The yukiuso cannot cross a threshold that belongs to somebody. It is for this reason that it cannot penetrate the SGC Infirmary, Janet's space,[[spoiler:until it is accidentally invited in. This invitation can be withdrawn by sheer willpower and the yukiuso was immediately banish from the threshold.]]



* VampireInvitation: Apparently a characteristic of ''janshin''. The yukiuso cannot cross a threshold that belongs to somebody. It is for this reason that it cannot penetrate the SGC Infirmary, Janet's space,[[spoiler:until it is accidentally invited in. This invitation can be withdrawn by sheer willpower and the yukiuso was immediately banish from the threshold.]]
27th Jul '15 5:16:07 AM Kalaong
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler:Djehutety is the last remnant of what the Goa'uld were before they degenerated into the System Lords.]]

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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler:Djehutety [[spoiler:Djehuty is the last remnant of what the Goa'uld were before they degenerated into the System Lords.]]



* OnlySaneMan: [[spoiler:Djehutey is heavily implied to the last surviving sane Gua'ould in the universe.]]

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* OnlySaneMan: [[spoiler:Djehutey [[spoiler:Djehuty is heavily implied to the last surviving sane Gua'ould Goa'uld in the universe.]]



* Precursors: The Ancients. [[spoiler: and everyone on the Avatar world.]]

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* Precursors: {{Precursors}}: The Ancients. [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and everyone on the Avatar world.]]
3rd May '15 10:35:56 PM cpslck
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* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Zuko’s fire can harm the yukiuso’s, but the opposite is also true. However its blocked by Katara’s ice.

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* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Zuko’s fire can harm the yukiuso’s, but the opposite is also true. However its However, it's blocked by Katara’s ice.



** So does Sokka. This was his exact reason for dismantling a fire lock and the resulting explosion.

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** So does Sokka. This was his exact reason for dismantling a fire lock and the resulting explosion.
* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler: The Renegades entered Asunyti as a next-to-last resort, to save what would become the Avatar Spirit]]



* StuffBlowingUp: Where to start? Dyne's explosives are used to combat the yukiuso, Zuko accidentally blows up a staff weapon when fighting Sanura and Toph destroys an MRI machine. This is excluding the explosion the crystallised naquadah causes.It also seems to be the Fire Nation's attitude towards a problem which Toph points out to Zuko.

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* StuffBlowingUp: Where to start? Dyne's explosives are used to combat the yukiuso, Zuko accidentally blows up a staff weapon when fighting Sanura and Toph destroys an MRI machine. This is excluding the explosion the crystallised naquadah causes. It also seems to be the Fire Nation's attitude towards a problem which Toph points out to Zuko.



---> You think that's a WhamLine? Wait til you read chapter 10: [[spoiler: "…they are Ancients."]]

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---> ** You think that's a WhamLine? Wait til you read chapter 10: [[spoiler: "…they are Ancients."]]
7th Oct '14 9:05:01 PM throwaawy
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* BrickJoke: Janet's first thoughts in chapter one is a desire to find whoever invented [[StunGun zats]] and murder them in the name of the Hippocratic Oath. [[spoiler:At the beginning of chapter twelve....]]

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* BrickJoke: Janet's first thoughts in chapter one is a desire to find whoever invented [[StunGun zats]] and murder them in the name of the Hippocratic Oath. [[spoiler:At At the beginning of chapter twelve....]]twelve... [[spoiler:she finds him.]]
-->''...he raised [his] hands, palms forward in the universal I am unarmed, please don't hurt me gesture...''



* ChekhovsGun: The naquadah battery that Toph crystallises in Chapter 8 makes a reappearance in Chapter 11 as a makeshift grenade.

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* ChekhovsGun: Several.
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The naquadah battery that Toph crystallises in Chapter 8 makes a reappearance in Chapter 11 as a makeshift grenade.grenade.
** Averted with Toph's ability to [[spoiler:utilise earth-healing to 'bone-bend' offensively]]. As the author specifically notes:
-->"...the Blind Bandit plain doesn't roll that way. She wants to deal with someone, she chucks rocks at 'em. So Chekhov can take that gun off the mantelpiece and fire it ''somewhere else''."
18th Aug '14 3:20:47 PM KomodoClassic
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* OneOfUs: Jack drops quite a few tropes by name.
18th Aug '14 3:19:07 PM KomodoClassic
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* CallBack: "Isn't it obvious? Zuko finally coughed up my life-changing field trip!"
21st May '14 7:59:24 AM bradpara
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**[[spoiler:It is also heavily implied that the original purpose of the Avatar himself was to protect the people of Asunyti from off-world threats.]]
17th May '14 9:23:17 PM bradpara
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*TranslationConvention: In the parts of the story told from the POV of the members of the SGC, Toph and Zuko's speech is written as phonetically spelled Japanese. This is not because "real" Asunytian ''is'' Japanese or even related to it in way, but because the author knew Japanese, wanted their language to something more than nonsense syllables, and lacked the time and talent needed to create a {{Conlang}} out of whole cloth.
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