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* AlternateContinuity: WordOfGod is that "Dear Sweetie Belle" takes place about a week before [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E5SisterhoovesSocial "Sisterhooves Social"]] would have, and events diverge from there.
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* AlternateContinuity: WordOfGod is that "Dear Sweetie Belle" takes place about a week before [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E5SisterhoovesSocial "Sisterhooves Social"]] would have, and events diverge from there. [[invoked]]
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* AllJustADream: Most of "The Sin of Envy", [[spoiler:induced by a demon to soften up Rarity for a coming test]].
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* AllJustADream: Most of "The Sin of Envy", [[spoiler:induced [[spoiler: induced by a demon to soften up Rarity for a coming test]].
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* DeadFic: Was [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/921887/eulogy declared dead]] midway through it's planned penultimate story ''On Swift Wings'' due to the author losing interest in the series and no longer having the time to work on it, announcing ''On Swift Wings'' last two chapters would be outlines for the rest of the series.
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* DeadFic: Was [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/921887/eulogy declared dead]] midway through it's its planned penultimate story ''On Swift Wings'' due to the author losing interest in the series and no longer having the time to work on it, announcing it; the last two chapters of ''On Swift Wings'' last two chapters would be serve as outlines for the rest of the series.
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* DeusExitMachina: [[WordOfGod This is why]] [[spoiler:[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Discord abandons the Equestrian dimension]]]] at the end of ''What's Done in the Dark...''. [[invoked]]
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* DeusExitMachina: [[WordOfGod This is why]] [[spoiler:[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere [[spoiler: [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Discord abandons the Equestrian dimension]]]] at the end of ''What's Done in the Dark...''. [[invoked]]
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* SequelHook: ''Dear Scootaloo'' has [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle vowing to find her father.]]
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* SequelHook: ''Dear Scootaloo'' has [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle vowing to find her father.]]father]].
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* SuperPoweredEvilSide: Twilight's research indicates that all alicorns are vulnerable to this if they swing too far to an extreme of [[AnthropomorphicPersonification the ideal or magic they are meant to personify]], explaining Nightmare Moon. It is also implied Celestia went through this during Luna's exile. [[spoiler: Cadance forms one, the Crystal Empress, once she learns of Shining Armor and Luna's affair.]]
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* SuperPoweredEvilSide: Twilight's research indicates that all alicorns are vulnerable to this if they swing too far to an extreme of [[AnthropomorphicPersonification the ideal or magic they are meant to personify]], explaining Nightmare Moon. It is also implied Celestia went through this during Luna's exile. [[spoiler: Cadance forms one, the Crystal Empress, once she learns of Shining Armor and Luna's affair.]]]] [[invoked]]
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** Shortly thereafter, [[spoiler:Chrysalis]] jumps in front of [[spoiler:Shining Armor's]] final strike at [[spoiler:Carapace- but it's played with in that she did it not simply to save him but to strip him and her surviving drones of their changeling forms with her death, after he drained her of love]].
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** Shortly thereafter, [[spoiler:Chrysalis]] jumps in front of [[spoiler:Shining [[spoiler: Shining Armor's]] final strike at [[spoiler:Carapace- but it's played with in that she did it not simply to save him but to strip him and her surviving drones of their changeling forms with her death, after he drained her of love]].
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When Sweetie Belle's parents are suddenly killed and she is sent to live with her sister Rarity, she comes home one day to find a lengthy letter from her new guardian- one which casts an entirely new light on their relationship. As word spreads, Sweetie's fellow Cutie Mark Crusaders Applebloom and Scootaloo receive messages of their own from Applejack and Rainbow Dash, which cast new light on the pasts and families of all the ponies involved and show that the Crusaders have a connection going back long before [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E12CallOfTheCutie Diamond Tiara's cuteceañera]]. But Sweetie finds herself with an entirely new mission, one far trickier than searching for a cutie mark.\\
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When Sweetie Belle's parents are suddenly killed and she is sent to live with her sister Rarity, she comes home one day to find a lengthy letter from her new guardian- one which casts an entirely new light on their relationship. As word spreads, Sweetie's fellow Cutie Mark Crusaders Applebloom Apple Bloom and Scootaloo receive messages of their own from Applejack and Rainbow Dash, which cast new light on the pasts and families of all the ponies involved and show that the Crusaders have a connection going back long before [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E12CallOfTheCutie Diamond Tiara's cuteceañera]]. But Sweetie finds herself with an entirely new mission, one far trickier than searching for a cutie mark.\\
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* DeathOfAChild: In "Dear Scootaloo". While Scoots herself [[SavedByCanon obviously survives to the present]], three other foals are mentioned to have perished from smoke inhalation after Feather Duster's attack on the Cloudsdale Home for Wayward Pegasi.
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* DeadFic: Was [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/921887/eulogy declared dead]] midway through it's planned penultimate story ''On Swift Wings'' due to the author losing interest in the series and no longer having the time to work on it, announcing ''On Swift Wings'' last two chapters would be outlines for the rest of the series.
* DeathOfAChild: In "Dear Scootaloo". While Scoots herself [[SavedByCanon obviously survives to the present]], three other foals are mentioned to have perished from smoke inhalation after Feather Duster's attack on the Cloudsdale Home for Wayward Pegasi.
* DeathOfAChild: In "Dear Scootaloo". While Scoots herself [[SavedByCanon obviously survives to the present]], three other foals are mentioned to have perished from smoke inhalation after Feather Duster's attack on the Cloudsdale Home for Wayward Pegasi.
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** ''On the Wings of War''
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** ''On the Wings of War''''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/359873/on-swift-wings On Swift Wings]]''
