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30th Aug '15 6:59:55 PM Willbyr
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[[caption-width:247:The "cover" for the first story, featuring Sakura]]

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[[caption-width:247:The [[caption-width-right:247:The "cover" for the first story, featuring Sakura]]
30th Aug '15 6:59:46 PM Willbyr
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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''Anime/CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''Anime/CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' ''Manga/{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.



* {{Plagiarism}} -- The first chapter is a direct rip-off of {{Wish}}'s opening scene. The only difference is Sakura is attacked by a cat instead of a crow. The author also uses two quotes from Stan Rice.

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* {{Plagiarism}} -- The first chapter is a direct rip-off of {{Wish}}'s Manga/{{Wish}}'s opening scene. The only difference is Sakura is attacked by a cat instead of a crow. The author also uses two quotes from Stan Rice.
18th Apr '15 8:40:51 PM nombretomado
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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' '''Anime/CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.
3rd Dec '12 4:57:26 PM Oreochan
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* EyesOfGold -- Sakura (though they're described as being "amber" colored), Cherry ("gold"), [=KuroSakura=] (who is a twin of Sakura lookswise), and Pancha
22nd Nov '12 7:33:23 PM Aiguille
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* {{Casanova}} -- Kuroito

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* {{Casanova}} TheCasanova -- Kuroito
19th Oct '12 10:46:23 PM nombretomado
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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.
7th Jul '12 12:40:39 AM Nocturna
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* ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt -- Chapter 23 of the first story...


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* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization -- Chapter 23 of the first story...
3rd Jan '12 1:49:04 PM Oreochan
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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''{{Chobits}}''.
''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.
13th Aug '11 8:44:29 PM ZashikiWarashi
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* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.



* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.



* MarySue -- Sakura, more specifically, a PuritySue and a RelationshipSue for Spike. She's so beautiful that every time she enters a room or changes clothes, she is described as looking as beautiful as a "tenshi" or "megami" and men always get turned on by looking at her. (Descriptions of her, of which there are many, describe how gorgeous her curves and legs are. (Her skins as described as feeling like "velvet and rose petals". Her face is "like an expensive china doll".) She is even described in an "ad" for the story as being "wanted by thousands of men".) She has enough power to destroy all of the creation, and as a result, everyone in Heaven, Hell, and everywhere in-between wants to possess her. She (and the people she attracts) are allowed to stay on The Bebop without doing a lot of work. (Despite the fact that the crew is usually shown in the actual series to be in dire need of money and food.) She does end up getting a job in one chapter. But she is instantly hired as a nurse in a hospital, without an interview and no credentials or experience, after volunteering for a kids' party there. And yet, she's still completely innocent and sweet while being alluring and sexy at the same time. In the future, she ends up marrying Spike and having a daughter named Miya.
** Jet also get one in the form of Ume Isamu, a calligraphy teacher (called "everyone's favorite [[DidNotDoTheResearch senshi]]" in her profile) who is described as being so beautiful, sweet (but a vixen), gentle, and charming that her male students want to fuck her, her female students look up to her, and she can turn gay men straight. She was forced into marrying her abusive mafia husband and was suicidal before she eloped with Jet. Also a PuritySue RelationshipSue combo.



* SoBadItsGood -- ''CowboyBebop'' is often described as an {{anime}} for people who don't like anime. This story pretty much adds in all of the elements that people who like ''Bebop'' but don't like anime ''don't'' want to read about. Then there's the whole Mary Sue and Fangirl Japanese thing.



* UnnecessaryMakeover -- Faye gives Sakura one. (She wanted to make her more "sexy" instead of cute.)

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* UnnecessaryMakeover VisionsOfAnotherSelf -- Faye gives Spike dreams of his past life with Sakura. Sakura one. (She wanted to make also dreams about her more "sexy" instead of cute.)childhood.



* VisionsOfAnotherSelf -- Spike dreams of his past life with Sakura. Sakura also dreams about her childhood.
28th Mar '11 8:16:36 PM mechanicalgirl222
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* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.
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