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* MindControlEyes: Sakura gets these when [=KuroSakura=] brainwashes her.

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* YouGotSpunk: Kuroito says this to Sakura after she resists his advances.
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* {{Narm}}: ''The [wind] opened its huge mouth and swallowed her whole.''; ''[Ume] looked like a queen in her lacy night underwear.''; ''"Now lose you the bra!!!"''

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* CainAndAbel: Sakura and her sister [=KuroSakura=]
* TheCasanova: Kuroito

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* TheIngenue: Sakura
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Sakura

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* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: Chapter 23 of the first story...
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* ThePowerOfLove: Sakura's powers run on it.

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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Katsuko

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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: A lot of the [=OCs=]
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-->"You caused me pain!" the oni-chi snarled. "I DON'T LIKE THAT!!!"

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-->"You caused me pain!" pain!" the oni-chi snarled. "I DON'T LIKE THAT!!!"
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* OutOfCharacter: All of the {{canon}} characters speak (fangirl) Japanese… despite the fact that none of them live in Japan or are of Japanese descent.

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* OutOfCharacter: All of the {{canon}} characters speak (fangirl) Japanese… Japanese... despite the fact that none of them live in Japan or are of Japanese descent.



-->"You caused me pain!" the oni-chi snarled. "I DON'T LIKE THAT!!!"

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-->"You caused me pain!" pain!" the oni-chi snarled. "I DON'T LIKE THAT!!!"
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* DomesticAbuse: Ume has a ridiculously abusive husband who's in the mafia, owns everything the pair has and hits her in public.

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* GenderBlenderName: A female teacher is named ''Isamu''.


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* TwoFirstNames: Ume Isamu, and the fic's use of Isamu as a surname. In reality, it's a masculine first name.
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* AttemptedRape -- When Sakura is tricked into getting a job as a stripper at Club Dreamers, the owner ''tries to play with her'' after she admits that she's been told (by Kaze-san) that no one is to touch her nether regions. The club explodes and she is sent floating through the sky (wearing a [[ModestyBedsheet modesty silk curtain or sheet depending on the chapter]]) amidst an aurora before he can do anything further.
* BlackEyesOfEvil -- Kuroito, Kawa (though he's a "ghost-chan" created by Katsuko and not evil), Zen, Vita
* {{Brainwashed}} -- [=KuroSakura=] likes to do this to Sakura.
* BroughtDownToNormal -- Katsuko tells Spike that Sakura has "great power. However, all of it has been locked away for some reason.
* CainAndAbel -- Sakura and her sister [=KuroSakura=]
* TheCasanova -- Kuroito
* {{Cat Girl}}s -- Katsuko's mansion has an entire staff of multi-colored catgirl (or, as the story calls them "neko girls") {{meido}}s.
* ChildProdigy -- Katsuko, a 10 year old genius.
* ChivalrousPervert -- Despite his "love 'em and leave 'em" attitude and his bedroom being nothing but wall-to-wall porn, Kurito still finds it in his heart to hide a 14 year old runaway from her father, who put her on the streets to make money. (He does admit though that the girl turned him on when he first saw her and isn't sad when the police find her because he still has "the hot memories of her!". Keep in mind, Kuroito is a 35,000 year old oni who physically looks 27.)
* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.
* DontLikeDontRead -- Guess what the author said when a reviewer called Sakura a Mary Sue.
* FangirlJapanese -- You pretty much have to have at least a basic understanding of Japanese to understand this story. As random words will often be replaced with their Japanese counterpart for no reason. (And there is no translation section most of the time.) Some examples include:
-->“Pure bullshit is nani it is! Snort”

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* AttemptedRape -- AttemptedRape: When Sakura is tricked into getting a job as a stripper at Club Dreamers, the owner ''tries to play with her'' after she admits that she's been told (by Kaze-san) that no one is to touch her nether regions. The club explodes and she is sent floating through the sky (wearing a [[ModestyBedsheet modesty silk curtain or sheet depending on the chapter]]) amidst an aurora before he can do anything further.
* BlackEyesOfEvil -- BlackEyesOfEvil: Kuroito, Kawa (though he's a "ghost-chan" created by Katsuko and not evil), Zen, Vita
* {{Brainwashed}} -- {{Brainwashed}}: [=KuroSakura=] likes to do this to Sakura.
* BroughtDownToNormal -- BroughtDownToNormal: Katsuko tells Spike that Sakura has "great power. However, all of it has been locked away for some reason.
* CainAndAbel -- CainAndAbel: Sakura and her sister [=KuroSakura=]
* TheCasanova -- TheCasanova: Kuroito
* {{Cat Girl}}s -- CatGirl: Katsuko's mansion has an entire staff of multi-colored catgirl (or, as the story calls them "neko girls") {{meido}}s.
* ChildProdigy -- ChildProdigy: Katsuko, a 10 year old genius.
* ChivalrousPervert -- ChivalrousPervert: Despite his "love 'em and leave 'em" attitude and his bedroom being nothing but wall-to-wall porn, Kurito Kuroito still finds it in his heart to hide a 14 year old runaway from her father, who put her on the streets to make money. (He does admit though that the girl turned him on when he first saw her and isn't sad when the police find her because he still has "the hot memories of her!". Keep in mind, Kuroito is a 35,000 year old oni who physically looks 27.)
* ADayInTheLimelight -- ADayInTheLimelight: Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.
* DontLikeDontRead -- DontLikeDontRead: Guess what the author said when a reviewer called Sakura a Mary Sue.
* FangirlJapanese -- FangirlJapanese: You pretty much have to have at least a basic understanding of Japanese to understand this story. As story, as random words will often be replaced with their Japanese counterpart for no reason.reason, and most of the time it's used incorrectly. (And there is no translation section most of the time.) Some examples include:
-->“Pure -->"Pure bullshit is nani it is! Snort”Snort"



-->Hentai thoughts ran through Jet’s head.

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-->Hentai thoughts ran through Jet’s Jet's head.



* FeelNoPain -- Sakura, due to being a tenshi-chi. She can still feel emotional pain, however.
* {{Filler}} -- A good chunk of the story has nothing to do with Sakura's search for Amadeus and is just about the various characters goofing around and going about their daily lives.
* FlatCharacter -- T.J., Soot, Bemmer, Mandy, Molly Shioya, and Daisuke. T.J. and Soot show up out of nowhere coming out of The Bebop's bathroom in Chapter 3 with no physicial descriptions and no explaination of how they got there or why they were there to begin with. The rest also show up with little explaination and seem to just be there to goof off in the background while the main story is going on.

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* FeelNoPain -- FeelNoPain: Sakura, due to being a tenshi-chi. She can still feel emotional pain, however.
* {{Filler}} -- {{Filler}}: A good chunk of the story has nothing to do with Sakura's search for Amadeus and is just about the various characters goofing around and going about their daily lives.
* FlatCharacter -- FlatCharacter: T.J., Soot, Bemmer, Mandy, Molly Shioya, and Daisuke. T.J. and Soot show up out of nowhere coming out of The Bebop's bathroom in Chapter 3 with no physicial descriptions and no explaination of how they got there or why they were there to begin with. The rest also show up with little explaination and seem to just be there to goof off in the background while the main story is going on.



* {{Narm}}: ''The [wind] opened its huge mouth and swallowed her whole.''; ''[Ume] looked like a queen in her lacy night underwear.''; ''“Now lose you the bra!!!”''

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* {{Narm}}: ''The [wind] opened its huge mouth and swallowed her whole.''; ''[Ume] looked like a queen in her lacy night underwear.''; ''“Now ''"Now lose you the bra!!!”''bra!!!"''



* OurAngelsAreDifferent -- According to the creator: "Easily mistaken as tenshis, tenshi-chis are made from tenshis themselves. They are weaker, gentle, and look more humans with wings. There are four types: light, fire, water, and love. Tenshi-chis act like humans only purer." They also die if they enter Hell, revert to a chibi from when they're weak, cannot feel physical pain (only emotional), eat little meat and are killed by sweets, are "under the virgin curse if they sleep with someone", have 7 chakras (on the arms, legs, stomach, chest, and nape (except Sakura, who has her 7th elsewhere)), have one shin heart, and are always born the first 2 days of January.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent -- Likewise, "oni-chi" are made from oni. "They are wild cruel, and just like tenshi-chis in appearance and strength. There are four types: dark, earth, air, and hate. Oni-chis love the night." They can't enter Heaven, eat a lot, get their energy from the moon, also have 7 chakras, have one "meek" heart, often fight in wars, and are born 2 years after tenchi-chi.
* OutOfCharacter -- All of the {{canon}} characters speak (fangirl) Japanese... despite the fact that none of them live in Japan or are of Japanese descent.

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* OurAngelsAreDifferent -- OurAngelsAreDifferent: According to the creator: "Easily mistaken as tenshis, tenshi-chis are made from tenshis themselves. They are weaker, gentle, and look more humans with wings. There are four types: light, fire, water, and love. Tenshi-chis act like humans only purer." They also die if they enter Hell, revert to a chibi from when they're weak, cannot feel physical pain (only emotional), eat little meat and are killed by sweets, are "under the virgin curse if they sleep with someone", have 7 chakras (on the arms, legs, stomach, chest, and nape (except Sakura, who has her 7th elsewhere)), have one shin heart, and are always born the first 2 days of January.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent -- OurDemonsAreDifferent: Likewise, "oni-chi" are made from oni. "They are wild cruel, and just like tenshi-chis in appearance and strength. There are four types: dark, earth, air, and hate. Oni-chis love the night." They can't enter Heaven, eat a lot, get their energy from the moon, also have 7 chakras, have one "meek" heart, often fight in wars, and are born 2 years after tenchi-chi.
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* OutOfCharacter -- OutOfCharacter: All of the {{canon}} characters speak (fangirl) Japanese... Japanese… despite the fact that none of them live in Japan or are of Japanese descent.



* RedEyesTakeWarning -- Francesca, Kaze-san (Again, not evil.)

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* RedEyesTakeWarning -- RedEyesTakeWarning: Francesca, Kaze-san (Again, not evil.)



--> “You caused me pain!” the oni-chi snarled. “I DON’T LIKE THAT!!!”
* VisionsOfAnotherSelf -- Spike dreams of his past life with Sakura. Sakura also dreams about her childhood.
* WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys -- Apparently, there's a video camera manufacteror that is okay with sending Daisuke's high school film club unreleased and untested models of their products.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears -- Katsuko
* YouGotSpunk -- Kuroito says this to Sakura after she resists his advances.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair -- A lot of the [=OCs=]

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--> “You -->"You caused me pain!” pain!" the oni-chi snarled. “I DON’T "I DON'T LIKE THAT!!!”
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* VisionsOfAnotherSelf -- VisionsOfAnotherSelf: Spike dreams of his past life with Sakura. Sakura also dreams about her childhood.
* WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys -- WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys: Apparently, there's a video camera manufacteror manufacturer that is okay with sending Daisuke's high school film club unreleased and untested models of their products.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears -- WiseBeyondTheirYears: Katsuko
* YouGotSpunk -- YouGotSpunk: Kuroito says this to Sakura after she resists his advances.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair -- YouGottaHaveBlueHair: A lot of the [=OCs=]

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* IKEAErotica -- Most of the [[http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/sarahcatspy/Virgin.html lemon scenes]]. For example:
--> [[spoiler:Spike began to pull in and out of her slowly. At first, Sakura felt nothing. Once a chaka is destroy, the tenshi-chi is numb to feel anything for a few seconds. Spike was perfectly aware of this little fact but he still kept pulling in and out. But then, Sakura began to feel another new sensation. It was called pleasure.]]
* ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou -- Kuroito's attitude toward anyone who rejects his advances. The most notable being Sakura.
* TheIngenue -- Sakura
* IncorruptiblePurePureness -- Sakura
* LaserGuidedAmnesia -- The only thing Sakura's amnesia really erased was any information dealing with Amadeus. She still remembers her name and the fact that she is a tenshi-chi from Heaven.
* TheMatchmaker -- Cherry, who is trying to get Spike and Sakura together. (Sort of justified since she is a "cupid-chan" or cupid-in-training.)
* MindControlEyes -- Sakura gets these when [=KuroSakura=] brainwashes her.
* {{Narm}} -- ''The [wind] opened its huge mouth and swallowed her whole.''; ''[Ume] looked like a queen in her lacy night underwear.''; ''“Now lose you the bra!!!”''
* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization -- Chapter 23 of the first story...

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* IKEAErotica -- GenderBlenderName: A female teacher is named ''Isamu''.
* IKEAErotica:
Most of the [[http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/sarahcatspy/Virgin.html lemon scenes]]. For example:
--> [[spoiler:Spike -->[[spoiler:Spike began to pull in and out of her slowly. At first, Sakura felt nothing. Once a chaka is destroy, the tenshi-chi is numb to feel anything for a few seconds. Spike was perfectly aware of this little fact but he still kept pulling in and out. But then, Sakura began to feel another new sensation. It was called pleasure.]]
* ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou -- ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou: Kuroito's attitude toward anyone who rejects his advances. The most notable being Sakura.
* TheIngenue -- TheIngenue: Sakura
* IncorruptiblePurePureness -- IncorruptiblePurePureness: Sakura
* LaserGuidedAmnesia -- LaserGuidedAmnesia: The only thing Sakura's amnesia really erased was any information dealing with Amadeus. She still remembers her name and the fact that she is a tenshi-chi from Heaven.
* TheMatchmaker -- TheMatchmaker: Cherry, who is trying to get Spike and Sakura together. (Sort of justified since she is a "cupid-chan" or cupid-in-training.)
* MindControlEyes -- MindControlEyes: Sakura gets these when [=KuroSakura=] brainwashes her.
* {{Narm}} -- {{Narm}}: ''The [wind] opened its huge mouth and swallowed her whole.''; ''[Ume] looked like a queen in her lacy night underwear.''; ''“Now lose you the bra!!!”''
* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization -- NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: Chapter 23 of the first story...



* ThePowerOfLove -- Sakura's powers run on it.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld -- Almost all of the [=OCs=]

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* ThePowerOfLove -- ThePowerOfLove: Sakura's powers run on it.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld -- ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Almost all of the [=OCs=]
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* {{Plagiarism}} -- The first chapter is a direct rip-off of Manga/{{Wish}}'s opening scene. The only difference is Sakura is attacked by a cat instead of a crow. The author also uses two quotes from Stan Rice.
** The above-mentioned AttemptedRape? A couple of filed-off serial numbers away from the "porn site" sequence in ''Chobits''.



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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''Anime/CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''Anime/CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' ''Manga/{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.



* {{Plagiarism}} -- The first chapter is a direct rip-off of {{Wish}}'s opening scene. The only difference is Sakura is attacked by a cat instead of a crow. The author also uses two quotes from Stan Rice.

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* {{Plagiarism}} -- The first chapter is a direct rip-off of {{Wish}}'s Manga/{{Wish}}'s opening scene. The only difference is Sakura is attacked by a cat instead of a crow. The author also uses two quotes from Stan Rice.
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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' '''Anime/CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.
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* EyesOfGold -- Sakura (though they're described as being "amber" colored), Cherry ("gold"), [=KuroSakura=] (who is a twin of Sakura lookswise), and Pancha
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* {{Casanova}} -- Kuroito

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* {{Casanova}} TheCasanova -- Kuroito
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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s Creator/{{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''Manga/{{Chobits}}''.

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* ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt -- Chapter 23 of the first story...


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''Tenshi Trail'' is a series of {{fanfic}}s written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1011992/Midnight_Angel_Noizchild Noizchild]]. While the series is stated to take place in the '''CowboyBebop'' universe, it has a noticable {{shoujo}} feel to it and borrows elements heavily from {{CLAMP}}'s works, most notably ''{{Wish}}'' and ''{{Chobits}}''.
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* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.



* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.



* MarySue -- Sakura, more specifically, a PuritySue and a RelationshipSue for Spike. She's so beautiful that every time she enters a room or changes clothes, she is described as looking as beautiful as a "tenshi" or "megami" and men always get turned on by looking at her. (Descriptions of her, of which there are many, describe how gorgeous her curves and legs are. (Her skins as described as feeling like "velvet and rose petals". Her face is "like an expensive china doll".) She is even described in an "ad" for the story as being "wanted by thousands of men".) She has enough power to destroy all of the creation, and as a result, everyone in Heaven, Hell, and everywhere in-between wants to possess her. She (and the people she attracts) are allowed to stay on The Bebop without doing a lot of work. (Despite the fact that the crew is usually shown in the actual series to be in dire need of money and food.) She does end up getting a job in one chapter. But she is instantly hired as a nurse in a hospital, without an interview and no credentials or experience, after volunteering for a kids' party there. And yet, she's still completely innocent and sweet while being alluring and sexy at the same time. In the future, she ends up marrying Spike and having a daughter named Miya.
** Jet also get one in the form of Ume Isamu, a calligraphy teacher (called "everyone's favorite [[DidNotDoTheResearch senshi]]" in her profile) who is described as being so beautiful, sweet (but a vixen), gentle, and charming that her male students want to fuck her, her female students look up to her, and she can turn gay men straight. She was forced into marrying her abusive mafia husband and was suicidal before she eloped with Jet. Also a PuritySue RelationshipSue combo.



* SoBadItsGood -- ''CowboyBebop'' is often described as an {{anime}} for people who don't like anime. This story pretty much adds in all of the elements that people who like ''Bebop'' but don't like anime ''don't'' want to read about. Then there's the whole Mary Sue and Fangirl Japanese thing.



* UnnecessaryMakeover -- Faye gives Sakura one. (She wanted to make her more "sexy" instead of cute.)

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* UnnecessaryMakeover VisionsOfAnotherSelf -- Faye gives Spike dreams of his past life with Sakura. Sakura one. (She wanted to make also dreams about her more "sexy" instead of cute.)childhood.



* VisionsOfAnotherSelf -- Spike dreams of his past life with Sakura. Sakura also dreams about her childhood.
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* ADayInTheLimelight -- Jet gets a chapter to himself in Chapter 8.

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