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* KillEmAll: Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her Soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8134552/ Respect]]'' is a CrossOver FanFic between ''Anime/SmilePrettyCure'' and ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'', written by [[@/FringeBenefits BHS]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8134552/ Respect]]'' is a 2012 CrossOver FanFic between ''Anime/SmilePrettyCure'' and ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'', written by [[@/FringeBenefits BHS]].
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkiesTheMorningLights]]'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Literature/Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkiesTheMorningLights]]'', ''FanFic/ShatteredSkiesTheMorningLights'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Literature/Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkies Shattered Skies]]'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Literature/Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkies Shattered Skies]]'', ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkiesTheMorningLights]]'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Literature/Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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The short answer: [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie, SanitySlippage, and HeWhoFightsMonsters, to name a few.]]
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The short answer: [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie, SanitySlippage, and HeWhoFightsMonsters, to name a few.]]
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Anyone trapped in Yayoi's sketchbook is not going to be free any time soon. The only real way out is for her to kill you.]]
* [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]: [[spoiler:First [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
* [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]: [[spoiler:First [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Anyone Anyone trapped in Yayoi's sketchbook is not going to be free any time soon. The only real way out is for her to kill you.]]
you.
*[[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And Then Yayoi Was A Witch]]: [[spoiler:First AndThenJohnWasAZombie: First [[SheWhoFightsMonsters symbolically]], and then literally. More specifically, Yayoi becomes Izabel, the Artist Witch seen early in episode 10 of Madoka.]]
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Arisu was the first person Yayoi trapped and later killed. Considering how much torment she put Yayoi through, there is little sympathy for her.]]
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Arisu Arisu was the first person Yayoi trapped and later killed. Considering how much torment she put Yayoi through, there is little sympathy for her.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Mami Tomoe arrives just in time to stop Yayoi[=/=]Sunder from making Cure Happy her latest on her list of victims, and it was all at the [[EvenEvilHasStandards behest of Kyubey]].]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Mami Mami Tomoe arrives just in time to stop Yayoi[=/=]Sunder from making Cure Happy her latest on her list of victims, and it was all at the [[EvenEvilHasStandards behest of Kyubey]].]]
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Homura and Madoka at the end. It is the scene where Homura (in her {{Moe}}mura form) first found out about the Puellae Magi.]]
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Homura Homura and Madoka at the end. It is the scene where Homura (in her {{Moe}}mura form) first found out about the Puellae Magi.]]
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* DarkMagicalGirl: [[spoiler:Yayoi becomes this after her FaceHeelTurn. She had a tormented life before the contract and it only got worse as she discovered her powers and what they ''couldn't'' do. Finally, she snapped and and her sense of justice vanished only to be replaced with a cold outlook on life. Her past feelings continue to haunt her, though.]]
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* DarkMagicalGirl: [[spoiler:Yayoi Yayoi becomes this after her FaceHeelTurn. She had a tormented life before the contract and it only got worse as she discovered her powers and what they ''couldn't'' do. Finally, she snapped and and her sense of justice vanished only to be replaced with a cold outlook on life. Her past feelings continue to haunt her, though.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After Yayoi [[DealWithTheDevil makes a contract with Kyubey]], one of the first things she does is get revenge on Arisu and her posse in the middle of their newest attempt to bully her.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Yayoi, by the end. She has all but snapped from everything she had done by then and was now actively destroying everything in her path, including her former friends who she was supposed to fight with as a Precure.]]
* FriendlessBackground: [[spoiler:Arisu is described as being the type who would have lots of friends. In reality, her cruel demeanor prevents her from ever having any. Indeed, she is described as not having friends, but subordinates.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Yayoi, by the end. She has all but snapped from everything she had done by then and was now actively destroying everything in her path, including her former friends who she was supposed to fight with as a Precure.]]
* FriendlessBackground: [[spoiler:Arisu is described as being the type who would have lots of friends. In reality, her cruel demeanor prevents her from ever having any. Indeed, she is described as not having friends, but subordinates.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After After Yayoi [[DealWithTheDevil makes a contract with Kyubey]], one of the first things she does is get revenge on Arisu and her posse in the middle of their newest attempt to bully her.]]
her.
* FaceHeelTurn:[[spoiler:Yayoi, Yayoi, by the end. She has all but snapped from everything she had done by then and was now actively destroying everything in her path, including her former friends who she was supposed to fight with as a Precure.]]
Precure.
* FriendlessBackground:[[spoiler:Arisu Arisu is described as being the type who would have lots of friends. In reality, her cruel demeanor prevents her from ever having any. Indeed, she is described as not having friends, but subordinates.]]
* FaceHeelTurn:
* FriendlessBackground:
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: First, Arisu's bullying reaches a peak and Yayoi contracts with Kyubey to get the power to take revenge. Then she discovers the limits of her powers and accidentally kills Arisu. Next, her attempts at hero work only serve to drive her increasingly insane as she traps more and more people in her sketchbook. Finally, she has a massive MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes, from Mami, that she had become the very thing she hated: A bully and a villain. This all leads to her vanishing and eventually turning into the Witch Izabel.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: First, Arisu's bullying reaches a peak and Yayoi contracts with Kyubey to get the power to take revenge. Then she discovers the limits of her powers and accidentally kills Arisu. Next, her attempts at hero work only serve to drive her increasingly insane as she traps more and more people in her sketchbook. Finally, she has a massive MyGodWhatHaveIDone when she realizes, from Mami, that she had become the very thing she hated: A bully and a villain. This all leads to her vanishing and eventually turning into the Witch Izabel.]]
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* GhostTown: [[spoiler:Nanairogaoka becomes this, thanks to Yayoi[=/=]Sunder trapping most of the population in her sketchbook.]]
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* GhostTown: [[spoiler:Nanairogaoka Nanairogaoka becomes this, thanks to Yayoi[=/=]Sunder trapping most of the population in her sketchbook.]]
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* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Girl]]: Cure March described Yayoi[=/=]Sunder as being nearly impossible to hurt and that only Cure Happy was capable of at least damaging her. Otherwise, they were on the run with nowhere to hide, and with an insane girl, who was supposed to be their friend, wanting them dead.
* JerkAss: Arisu, in spades. To wit, she and her posse forced Yayoi to watch as they destroy one of her sketches while giving her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech after toying around and overall tormenting her while she's begging for them to stop. ''And this is just the first scene.''
* JerkAss: Arisu, in spades. To wit, she and her posse forced Yayoi to watch as they destroy one of her sketches while giving her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech after toying around and overall tormenting her while she's begging for them to stop. ''And this is just the first scene.''
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* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Girl]]: ImplacableMan: Cure March described Yayoi[=/=]Sunder as being nearly impossible to hurt and that only Cure Happy was capable of at least damaging her. Otherwise, they were on the run with nowhere to hide, and with an insane girl, who was supposed to be their friend, wanting them dead.
*JerkAss: Arisu, in spades.{{Jerkass}}: Arisu. To wit, she and her posse forced Yayoi to watch as they destroy one of her sketches while giving her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech after toying around and overall tormenting her while she's begging for them to stop. ''And this is just the first scene.''
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:[[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] Joker, many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, Cure March, ''the freaking town'', to name a few. Anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].]]
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her Soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her Soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:[[AssholeVictim [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] Joker, many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, Cure March, ''the freaking town'', to name a few. Anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].]]
sketchbook]].
* KillEmAll:[[spoiler:Yayoi[=/=]Sunder Yayoi[=/=]Sunder eventually traps everyone but Miyuki, Mami, and Kyubey inside her sketchbook. When her Soul Gem darkens and she seemingly explodes in a burst of lightning, all that was left of her was her pen and sketchbook. It was mentioned earlier that the book only keeps her victims alive as long as Yayoi is holding it...]]
* KillEmAll:
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* {{Mook}}s: The Familiars reprise this role for the Witches. [[spoiler:Yayoi discovers that she can make these in the form of Sketches by drawing them in her sketchbook. These were the failed results of her attempts to draw her victims back to life and are described as mindless copies.]]
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* {{Mook}}s: The Familiars reprise this role for the Witches. [[spoiler:Yayoi Yayoi discovers that she can make these in the form of Sketches by drawing them in her sketchbook. These were the failed results of her attempts to draw her victims back to life and are described as mindless copies.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:When she realizes she killed Arisu in cold blood. She gets this several more times as she slowly slips into evil.]]
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* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler:This is how Yayoi kills Arisu. This was unintended because Yayoi was only trying to erase Arisu's mouth to shut her up.]]
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* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler:This This is how Yayoi kills Arisu. This was unintended because Yayoi was only trying to erase Arisu's mouth to shut her up.]]
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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Yayoi does this when she sees the unconscious female High School student in the barrier. She only realizes the girl is dead after the Barrier fades.]]
* RichBitch: Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man and is a cruel JerkAss.
* SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:Yayoi, again. It becomes evident as she becomes increasingly paranoid about Arisu's father's attempts to find his daughter. This leads her to imprison every cop who comes to her house and eventually her own concerned mother.]]
* [[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]: [[spoiler:From superhero fangirl and bully victim, to MagicalGirl, to bully and notorious villain.]]
* RichBitch: Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man and is a cruel JerkAss.
* SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:Yayoi, again. It becomes evident as she becomes increasingly paranoid about Arisu's father's attempts to find his daughter. This leads her to imprison every cop who comes to her house and eventually her own concerned mother.]]
* [[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]: [[spoiler:From superhero fangirl and bully victim, to MagicalGirl, to bully and notorious villain.]]
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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Yayoi Yayoi does this when she sees the unconscious female High School student in the barrier. She only realizes the girl is dead after the Barrier fades.]]
fades.
* RichBitch: Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man and is a cruelJerkAss.
{{Jerkass}}.
* SanitySlippage:[[spoiler:Yayoi, Yayoi, again. It becomes evident as she becomes increasingly paranoid about Arisu's father's attempts to find his daughter. This leads her to imprison every cop who comes to her house and eventually her own concerned mother.]]
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*[[HeWhoFightsMonsters She Who Fights Monsters]]: [[spoiler:From HeWhoFightsMonsters: From superhero fangirl and bully victim, to MagicalGirl, to bully and notorious villain.]]
* RichBitch: Arisu. She is the daughter of a wealthy man and is a cruel
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* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler:It officially began when she accidentally killed Arisu. It only got worse from there as her sanity slipped and her paranoia grew.]]
* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AlphaBitch if she wasn't.
* ThouShaltNotKill: [[spoiler:Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.]]
* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AlphaBitch if she wasn't.
* ThouShaltNotKill: [[spoiler:Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.]]
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* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler:It It officially began when she accidentally killed Arisu. It only got worse from there as her sanity slipped and her paranoia grew.]]
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%%* StudentCouncilPresident: Arisu. She wouldn't be the AlphaBitch if she wasn't.
* ThouShaltNotKill:[[spoiler:Accidentally Accidentally [[AvertedTrope averted]] with Yayoi's revenge against Arisu.]]
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* WeaselMascot: Kyubey, as per ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' tradition.
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After Yayoi [[DealWithTheDevil makes a contract with Kyubey]], one of the first things she does is get revenge on Arisu and her posse in the middle of their newest attempt to bully her.]]
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* TheSoCalledCoward: What Yayoi really wanted. She wanted to be respected for who she was. Being called a crybaby eventually becomes a BerserkButton for her, [[spoiler:as Cure March found out when she was trying to talk Yayoi into becoming good again.]]
* TheSoCalledCoward: What Yayoi really wanted. She wanted to be respected for who she was. Being called a crybaby eventually becomes a BerserkButton for her, [[spoiler:as Cure March found out when she was trying to talk Yayoi into becoming good again.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After Yayoi [[DealWithTheDevil makes a contract with Kyubey]], one of the first things she does is get revenge on Arisu and her posse in the middle of their newest attempt to bully her.]]
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkies Shattered Skies]]'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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Also see ''[[FanFic/StarsAbove Stars Above]]'' and ''[[FanFic/ShatteredSkies Shattered Skies]]'', both unrelated MagicalGirl [[CrossOver CrossOvers]] by the same author, and ''{{Tasakeru}}'', ''{{Literature/Tasakeru}}'', his original series.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly Joker. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by then.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: It was mentioned in passing that one of her victims was a harlequin who worked alongside Wolfrun for the Bad End Kingdom. He is clearly Joker. Arisu doesn't count since she was killed before Yayoi hadn't started turning evil by then.
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* ShockAndAwe: As in her [[SmilePrettyCure canon series]], Yayoi has powers over electricity in her Puella Magi form.
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* ShockAndAwe: As in her [[SmilePrettyCure [[Anime/SmilePrettyCure canon series]], Yayoi has powers over electricity in her Puella Magi form.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] Joker, many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, Cure March, ''the freaking town'', to name a few. Anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].
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* KilledOffForReal: [[AssholeVictim [[spoiler:[[AssholeVictim Arisu and her posse]], [[AntiVillain Wolfrun, Majorina, Akaoni,]] Joker, many robbers, cops, [[KickTheDog her own mother]], Cure Sunny, Cure Beauty, Candy, Cure March, ''the freaking town'', to name a few. Anyone who wound up trapped in her [[PhantomZonePicture sketchbook]].]]
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* AssholeVictim: Arisu was the first person Yayoi trapped and later killed. Considering how much torment she put Yayoi through, there is little sympathy for her.
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* AssholeVictim: Arisu [[spoiler:Arisu was the first person Yayoi trapped and later killed. Considering how much torment she put Yayoi through, there is little sympathy for her.]]
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* AndIMustScream: Anyone trapped in Yayoi's sketchbook is not going to be free any time soon. The only real way out is for her to kill you.
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* AndIMustScream: Anyone [[spoiler:Anyone trapped in Yayoi's sketchbook is not going to be free any time soon. The only real way out is for her to kill you.]]
