Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 96 (click to see context) from:
** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[note]]"Why So Serious" in Chinese[[/note]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... "Will you be wanting the sundae, maam?" .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... "Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not."
to:
** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[note]]"Why So Serious" in Chinese[[/note]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... "Will you be wanting the sundae, maam?" ....ma’am?" .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... "Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not."
Changed line(s) 137 (click to see context) from:
** [[Film/IronMan "Let's face it, this not the worst thing you caught me doing, yah?"]]
to:
** [[Film/IronMan [[Film/IronMan1 "Let's face it, this not the worst thing you caught me doing, yah?"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Catchphrase has been disambiguated.
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
** At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
to:
** At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Maximum Power]], and later her summon uses the Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Surprisingly Good English is now in the Sugar Wiki namespace, and links to it can only go on Sugar Wiki pages.
Changed line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) from:
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura ([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=180855 also available at SpaceBattles]]) is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''Anime/MyHime'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows TheStationsOfTheCanon[=/=]BroadStrokes without adhering tightly.
to:
Deleted line(s) 150 (click to see context) :
* SurprisinglyGoodEnglish: If Ywiu's really serious about something, she drops into proper Queen's English.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 107 (click to see context) from:
** “Is this some [[Franchise/MetalGear Tactical Espionage Action]] you’re involved in....?”
to:
** “Is "Is this some [[Franchise/MetalGear [[VideoGame/MetalGear Tactical Espionage Action]] you’re you're involved in....?”?"
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 104 (click to see context) from:
** [[StreetFighter “Oh-ho-ho! This is delicious!” ... “Yes! Yes!”]]
to:
** [[StreetFighter [[Franchise/StreetFighter “Oh-ho-ho! This is delicious!” ... “Yes! Yes!”]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Changed line(s) 60 (click to see context) from:
** "Lucky you not some sick bird, else sure big problem one!" [[spoiler: In the original, Takumi was pretty much a GenderFlip IllGirl.]]
to:
** "Lucky you not some sick bird, else sure big problem one!" [[spoiler: In the original, Takumi was pretty much a GenderFlip IllGirl.ill.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Mondegreen is no longer a trope; dewicking
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
** Sommerhoffnung's recalled conversation with Timo at the end of the second chapter. [[spoiler: Supposedly a {{Mondegreen}} of the lyrics of "Mezame".]]
to:
** Sommerhoffnung's recalled conversation with Timo at the end of the second chapter. [[spoiler: Supposedly a {{Mondegreen}} mondegreen of the lyrics of "Mezame".]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 58 (click to see context) from:
* MythologyGag: Sommerhoffnung's default outfit is based on that of Dark [=HiME=] Natsuki from the ''Manga/MaiOtome'' manga.
to:
* MythologyGag: Sommerhoffnung's default outfit is based on that of Dark [=HiME=] Natsuki from the ''Manga/MaiOtome'' ''Manga/MyOtome'' manga.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 128 (click to see context) from:
** [[VideoGame/MortalKombat "Finish him!"]]
to:
** [[VideoGame/MortalKombat [[Franchise/MortalKombat "Finish him!"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 115 (click to see context) from:
** Ken-ba-ne likes the term [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} nineball]].
to:
** Ken-ba-ne likes the term [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} [[Franchise/TouhouProject nineball]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
strikethrough formatting only works on the wiki. All such formatting attempts have been removed.
Changed line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) from:
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura ([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=180855 also available at SpaceBattles]]) is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''Anime/MaiHime'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows TheStationsOfTheCanon[=/=]BroadStrokes without adhering tightly.
to:
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura ([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=180855 also available at SpaceBattles]]) is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''Anime/MaiHime'' ''Anime/MyHime'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows TheStationsOfTheCanon[=/=]BroadStrokes without adhering tightly.
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
** At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
to:
** At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
Changed line(s) 20,23 (click to see context) from:
* ButNotTooForeign: Sommerhoffnung is half-[[strike: German]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople Gothofurtoan]], quarter-Ch[[IstanbulNotConstantinople (o)]]inese and quarter-[[strike: Japanese]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople Electopian]], and there are others also similarly mixed.
* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''Manga/GetBackers [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a ''[[strike:Manga/{{Bleach}}]] Whitener'' character?"
* ChristianityIsCatholic: Averted. "You must remember that, while Catholicism is indeed the denomination of the [[strike: French]] Rancaskan Church, the Church of [[strike: Scotland]] Thaneland that the campus' chapel is subsumed under belongs to the Presbyterian subset of the Protestant denomination."
* CreatorProvincialism: Possibly the only reason why the setting was moved to [[strike: Singapore]] [[IstanbulNotConstantinople Merliona]].
* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''Manga/GetBackers [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a ''[[strike:Manga/{{Bleach}}]] Whitener'' character?"
* ChristianityIsCatholic: Averted. "You must remember that, while Catholicism is indeed the denomination of the [[strike: French]] Rancaskan Church, the Church of [[strike: Scotland]] Thaneland that the campus' chapel is subsumed under belongs to the Presbyterian subset of the Protestant denomination."
* CreatorProvincialism: Possibly the only reason why the setting was moved to [[strike: Singapore]] [[IstanbulNotConstantinople Merliona]].
to:
* ButNotTooForeign: Sommerhoffnung is half-[[strike: German]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople half-[[IstanbulNotConstantinople Gothofurtoan]], quarter-Ch[[IstanbulNotConstantinople (o)]]inese and quarter-[[strike: Japanese]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople quarter-[[IstanbulNotConstantinople Electopian]], and there are others also similarly mixed.
* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''Manga/GetBackers [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a''[[strike:Manga/{{Bleach}}]] Whitener'' ''Whitener'' character?"
* ChristianityIsCatholic: Averted. "You must remember that, while Catholicism is indeed the denomination of the[[strike: French]] Rancaskan Church, the Church of [[strike: Scotland]] Thaneland that the campus' chapel is subsumed under belongs to the Presbyterian subset of the Protestant denomination."
* CreatorProvincialism: Possibly the only reason why the setting was moved to[[strike: Singapore]] [[IstanbulNotConstantinople Merliona]].
* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''Manga/GetBackers [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a
* ChristianityIsCatholic: Averted. "You must remember that, while Catholicism is indeed the denomination of the
* CreatorProvincialism: Possibly the only reason why the setting was moved to
Changed line(s) 40 (click to see context) from:
** GratuitousGerman: Sommerhoffnung ''is'' half-[[strike: German]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople Gothofurtoan]], but she lapses into it pretty often. Musterteklang too.
to:
** GratuitousGerman: Sommerhoffnung ''is'' half-[[strike: German]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople half-[[IstanbulNotConstantinople Gothofurtoan]], but she lapses into it pretty often. Musterteklang too.
Changed line(s) 97 (click to see context) from:
** VideoGame/{{No More| Heroes}} [[strike: [[VideoGame/NoMoreHeroes Heroes]]]] [[WritingAroundTrademarks Villains]]
to:
** VideoGame/{{No More| Heroes}} [[strike: [[VideoGame/NoMoreHeroes Heroes]]]] [[WritingAroundTrademarks Villains]]
Changed line(s) 100 (click to see context) from:
** ".... [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann wear garish pointy orange shades with no apparent frames]].... Kamina and [[strike: Simon]] Peter"
to:
** ".... [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann wear garish pointy orange shades with no apparent frames]].... Kamina and [[strike: Simon]] Peter"
Changed line(s) 158 (click to see context) from:
* WaxingLyrical: When Sommerhoffnung names Draysoph and her guns, she sings lyrics from the relevant bands. The mystery speaker in chapter four sings ''Don't Say A Word'' from [[strike: Sonata Arctica]] Concerto Sahara when leaving [[spoiler: Spadotto]].
to:
* WaxingLyrical: When Sommerhoffnung names Draysoph and her guns, she sings lyrics from the relevant bands. The mystery speaker in chapter four sings ''Don't Say A Word'' from [[strike: Sonata Arctica]] Concerto Sahara when leaving [[spoiler: Spadotto]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Black Best Friend was renamed Token Black Friend in TRS. Removing examples that are low context or are otherwise not about a Satellite Character who is there to add diversity.
Deleted line(s) 19 (click to see context) :
%%* BlackBestFriend: Spadotto and Veerasamy, though the latter is technically [[strike: Indian]] Curriyan.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Also YMMV's
Changed line(s) 85 (click to see context) from:
** "[[Franchise/StarWars It's]] [[MemeticMutation a]] [[VideoGame/GuiltyGear Bridget]]."
to:
** "[[Franchise/StarWars It's]] [[MemeticMutation a]] [[VideoGame/GuiltyGear a Bridget]]."
Changed line(s) 87 (click to see context) from:
** "[[Series/TheOReillyFactor Fuck it!]] [[MemeticMutation We'll do it live!]]"
to:
** "[[Series/TheOReillyFactor Fuck it!]] [[MemeticMutation it! We'll do it live!]]"
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Commenting out zero context examples and removing 2nd of 2 tropes on a single line, as well as an errant wick to Epileptic Trees.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample entries are not allowed on wiki pages. All such entries have been commented out. Add context to the entries before uncommenting them.
Deleted line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) :
Currently stands at eight chapters, but updates have been... very sporadic.
Deleted line(s) 12 (click to see context) :
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
to:
* ActorAllusion: ActorAllusion:
** At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
** At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
Changed line(s) 18,19 (click to see context) from:
* AerithAndBob: So much.
* BlackBestFriend: Spadotto and Veerasamy, though the latter is technically [[strike: Indian]] Curriyan.
* BlackBestFriend: Spadotto and Veerasamy, though the latter is technically [[strike: Indian]] Curriyan.
to:
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* DeadpanSnarker: Ken-ba-ne is clearly trying to be this.
to:
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
* DontYouDarePityMe: Musterteklang is interpreted as being of this sort.
to:
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* InTheBack: How [[spoiler: Asuoui kills the gang leader.]]
to:
Changed line(s) 53 (click to see context) from:
* LemonyNarrator: Sometimes.
to:
Changed line(s) 57,58 (click to see context) from:
* MuggingTheMonster: The gangsters who target Ywiu.
* MusicalAssassin: Mei-ya-nuo-kou-qi's power.
* MusicalAssassin: Mei-ya-nuo-kou-qi's power.
to:
Changed line(s) 64 (click to see context) from:
* NotUsingTheZWord[=/=]WritingAroundTrademarks: The fanfic. The author's efforts to avoid invoking the canonical names can get {{Narm}}ful.
to:
* NotUsingTheZWord[=/=]WritingAroundTrademarks: NotUsingTheZWord: The fanfic. The author's efforts to avoid invoking the canonical names can get {{Narm}}ful.
Changed line(s) 69 (click to see context) from:
* OutOfTheInferno: Done by Ywiu in the fifth chapter.
to:
Changed line(s) 85 (click to see context) from:
** "[[StarWars It's]] [[MemeticMutation a]] [[VideoGame/GuiltyGear Bridget]]."
to:
** "[[StarWars "[[Franchise/StarWars It's]] [[MemeticMutation a]] [[VideoGame/GuiltyGear Bridget]]."
Changed line(s) 99 (click to see context) from:
** [[EpilepticTrees Seizure-afflicted Shrubberies]]
to:
** [[EpilepticTrees Seizure-afflicted Shrubberies]]Shrubberies
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
This is respectively, YMMV, Trivia, and Flame Bait.
Deleted line(s) 24 (click to see context) :
* CrackPairing: [[spoiler: Ymia and Eywon are CaptainErsatz of Reinforce Eins and Yuuno from ''Nanoha'', so...]]
Deleted line(s) 48 (click to see context) :
* {{Hatedom}}: If the reviews on FF.Net are any indication, there are those who cannot accept the author's style.
Changed line(s) 136 (click to see context) from:
** The emcee said something about the next performance, something about the band [[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Abismal]] [[AbysmalDawn Dusk]]?
to:
** The emcee said something about the next performance, something about the band [[Disney/{{Aladdin}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}} Abismal]] [[AbysmalDawn Dusk]]?
Deleted line(s) 162 (click to see context) :
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Author's notes for chapter eight mention that Nyarsrof was meant to have a smaller role and Ymia and Eywon were not supposed to exist.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 120 (click to see context) from:
** [[ComicBook/XWingSeries "To win, you must fight with heart and brains and your entire being!"]]
to:
** [[ComicBook/XWingSeries [[Literature/XWingSeries "To win, you must fight with heart and brains and your entire being!"]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* InertiaIsAHarshMistress: Mentioned as a problem Ken-ba-ne experiences.
to:
* InertiaIsAHarshMistress: InertiaIsACruelMistress: Mentioned as a problem Ken-ba-ne experiences.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 90 (click to see context) from:
** [[KingdomHearts Empire Minds]]
to:
** [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Empire Minds]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
->''[[ViewersAreGeniuses Intelligent]], [[ReferenceOverdosed Reference-filled]] [[Franchise/DevilMayCry SSStylish Hard Action]]''
to:
->''[[ViewersAreGeniuses Intelligent]], [[ReferenceOverdosed Reference-filled]] [[Franchise/DevilMayCry [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry SSStylish Hard Action]]''
Changed line(s) 86 (click to see context) from:
** [[Franchise/DevilMayCry "Envy is a nasty little bunch of things. Can't be launched without Real Impact and the usage of Swordsmaster takes away from your evasive ability."]] As well as more glaring invocations of DMC moves.
to:
** [[Franchise/DevilMayCry [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry "Envy is a nasty little bunch of things. Can't be launched without Real Impact and the usage of Swordsmaster takes away from your evasive ability."]] As well as more glaring invocations of DMC moves.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Changed line(s) 156 (click to see context) from:
* ThisCannotBe: [[OneOfUs Used word-for-word]] by [[spoiler: He-mu-la after Hei-gu-la-shi chooses to give up her powers rather than let Rondeng die.]]
to:
* ThisCannotBe: [[OneOfUs Used word-for-word]] word-for-word by [[spoiler: He-mu-la after Hei-gu-la-shi chooses to give up her powers rather than let Rondeng die.]]
Changed line(s) 159 (click to see context) from:
* ViewersAreGeniuses: How many of the more disguised/subtle {{Shout Out}}s will the average reader recognise? Lampshade Hung in OneOfUs fashion at the end of the fifth chapter via author's notes.
to:
* ViewersAreGeniuses: How many of the more disguised/subtle {{Shout Out}}s will the average reader recognise? Lampshade Hung in OneOfUs TV Tropes fashion at the end of the fifth chapter via author's notes.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
to:
* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[Creator/YukariTamura Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[Manga/BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
Changed line(s) 113 (click to see context) from:
** [[strike: [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Giga Drill]] [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Starlight Breaker]]]][[note]]not coincidentally also a reference to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwKEQSYnYnY this video]], given that Warp Obscura and [=MaxAndEmilytate=] are friends[[/note]] Pico Wrench Moonlight Fixer
to:
** [[strike: [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Giga Drill]] [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Starlight Breaker]]]][[note]]not coincidentally also a reference to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwKEQSYnYnY this video]], given that Warp Obscura and [=MaxAndEmilytate=] are friends[[/note]] The Pico Wrench Moonlight FixerFixer references both the Giga Drill Break from ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' and the Starlight Breaker from ''Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 92 (click to see context) from:
** [[{{Hellsing}} "Releasing control arts restriction levels...."]]
to:
** [[{{Hellsing}} [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} "Releasing control arts restriction levels...."]]