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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: When we see him in action, it becomes clear that General Spur didn't get his job just because of his friendship with the Princesses.
* BackToBackBadasses: General Spur and Colonel Nuntia during the Battle of Canterlot.
* BackToBackBadasses: General Spur and Colonel Nuntia during the Battle of Canterlot.
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Sadly, due to the author's unfortunate [[AuthorExistenceFailure passing]], the story will now be left incomplete.
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Sadly, due to the author's unfortunate [[AuthorExistenceFailure [[DiedDuringProduction passing]], the story will now be left incomplete.
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* CliffHanger: A painful one, and one that will never be fulfilled due to AuthorExistenceFailure.
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* CliffHanger: A painful one, and one that will never be fulfilled due to AuthorExistenceFailure.because the author DiedDuringProduction
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* DeadFic: As a result of the aforementioned AuthorExistenceFailure.
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* DeadFic: As a result of Because the aforementioned AuthorExistenceFailure.author DiedDuringProduction
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* BadDreams: Pinkie has a rather disturbing one in chapter 6, complete with CatapultNightmare.
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Audience reactions don’t belong on main. And Kick is cruelty irrelevant to their goals, can’t tell if so.
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** [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] and [[spoiler: Ditzy Doo]]'s deaths are also rather sudden and unexpected. One can argue that the shock factor of these deaths actually makes them more effective, as it sells the AnyoneCanDie angle very well.
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** [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] and [[spoiler: Ditzy Doo]]'s deaths are also rather sudden and unexpected. One can argue that the shock factor of these deaths actually makes them more effective, as it sells the AnyoneCanDie angle very well.
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* [[ImAHumanitarian I'm A Ponytarian]]: Nightmare has a taste for ponies -- it seems that as Nightmare Moon, she had a policy of having regular blood sacrifices.
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* [[ImAHumanitarian I'm A Ponytarian]]: ImAHumanitarian: Nightmare has a taste for ponies -- it seems that as Nightmare Moon, she had a policy of having regular blood sacrifices.
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* KickTheDog: Literally ''everything'' Nightmare does is either this or a MoralEventHorizon.
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: In a humorous moment shortly before everything goes to hell, Twilight is shown worrying that this will happen in regards to her breakdown in "Lesson Zero".
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* [[AnyoneCanDie Anypony Can Die]]: That's been made ''very'' clear.
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* [[AnyoneCanDie Anypony Can Die]]: AnyoneCanDie: That's been made ''very'' clear.
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: When Rarity starts showing an interest in Blueblood again (thanks to his CharacterDevelopment) and Spike gets jealous about it, the two have a discussion about it; Spike admits to knowing he and Rarity can't be together for the [[MayDecemberRomance obvious]] [[InterspeciesRomance reasons]], and says that he's happy as long as Rarity's happy.
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: When Rarity starts showing an interest in Blueblood again (thanks to his CharacterDevelopment) and Spike gets jealous about it, the two have a discussion about it; Spike admits to knowing he and Rarity can't be together for the [[MayDecemberRomance obvious]] obvious [[InterspeciesRomance reasons]], and says that he's happy as long as Rarity's happy.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The dragons use almost this exact phrase when describing their outrage at the dragon from "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy Dragonshy]]" agreeing on behalf of the whole race to serve Nightmare in exchange for revenge against the Mane Case for disrupting his sleep.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The dragons use almost this exact phrase when describing their outrage at the dragon from "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy Dragonshy]]" agreeing on behalf of the whole race to serve Nightmare in exchange for revenge against the Mane Case Cast for disrupting his sleep.
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* EldritchAbomination: Nightmare, who's possibly the oldest being in Equestria, and whose true form appears as a living cloud of smoke. However, unlike most examples of this trope, she has a definite gender.
** Actually, according to General Spur, Nightmare actually ''is'' genderless (which is odd, considering it speaks in a female voice and forms the image of a female face when in its true form).
*** On top of everything else, Nightmare is about a billion years old, and is described by Chief Thunderhooves as having existed since before the concept of reason had come into existence.
** Actually, according to General Spur, Nightmare actually ''is'' genderless (which is odd, considering it speaks in a female voice and forms the image of a female face when in its true form).
*** On top of everything else, Nightmare is about a billion years old, and is described by Chief Thunderhooves as having existed since before the concept of reason had come into existence.
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* EldritchAbomination: Nightmare, who's possibly the oldest being in Equestria, and whose true form appears as a living cloud of smoke. However, unlike most examples of this trope, she has a definite gender.
** Actually, according to General Spur, Nightmare actually ''is'' genderless (which is odd, considering it speaksgender, or at least a gender identity (speaks in a female voice and forms the image of a female face when in its true form).
***form) as General Spur states Nightmare has NoBiologicalSex.
** On top of everything else, Nightmare is about [[TimeAbyss a billion yearsold, old]], and is described by Chief Thunderhooves as having existed since before the concept of reason had come into existence.
** Actually, according to General Spur, Nightmare actually ''is'' genderless (which is odd, considering it speaks
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** On top of everything else, Nightmare is about [[TimeAbyss a billion years
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** Similarly, the dragons (who, admittedly, are probably more in the Neutral category) also hate Nightmare and only serve her because the one from "Dragonshy" foolish agreed to on behalf of the whole race, while apparently running their own agenda.
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** Similarly, the dragons (who, admittedly, are probably more in the Neutral category) also hate Nightmare and only serve her because the one from "Dragonshy" foolish foolishly agreed to on behalf of the whole race, while apparently running their own agenda.
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Badass is an index, not a trope
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** [[spoiler: After Canterlot falls,]] Nightmare tortures General Spur to force him to reveal the location where Luna hid Discord's statue -- [[InterrogatedForNothing information he doesn't have]]. [[{{Badass}} He mocks her about it.]]
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** [[spoiler: After Canterlot falls,]] Nightmare tortures General Spur to force him to reveal the location where Luna hid Discord's statue -- [[InterrogatedForNothing information he doesn't have]]. [[{{Badass}} He mocks her about it.]]
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** During the Battle of Canterlot, a flight of pegasi Royal Guards sneak attack the squadron of Diamond Dogs guarding Sweetie Bell in order to free her. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, it's subverted again, as the Dogs see them coming and kill them.]]
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** During the Battle of Canterlot, a flight of pegasi Royal Guards sneak attack the squadron of Diamond Dogs guarding Sweetie Bell Belle in order to free her. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, it's subverted again, as the Dogs see them coming and kill them.]]
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* CliffHanger: A painful one, and one that will never be fulfilled due to AuthorExistenceFailure.
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* DeadLittleSister: Spitfire had an older sister named Snowfire who was one of the Wonderbolts' best members, until she died in a performance accident.
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* DeadFic: As a result of the aforementioned AuthorExistenceFailure.
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* CurbStompBattle: The Battles of Ponyville and Cloudsdale very quickly go in Nightmare's favor. The Battle of Canterlot is somewhat more even-sided [[spoiler: but Nightmare still wins.]]
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** [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]'s death is also rather sudden and unexpected. One can argue that the shock factor of these deaths actually makes them more effective, as it sells the AnyoneCanDie angle very well.
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** [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]'s death is Dash]] and [[spoiler: Ditzy Doo]]'s deaths are also rather sudden and unexpected. One can argue that the shock factor of these deaths actually makes them more effective, as it sells the AnyoneCanDie angle very well.
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* JawDrop: Rarity and Spike's reaction to meeting the new and improved Trixie.
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* JawDrop: Rarity and Spike's reaction to meeting the new and improved Trixie. They close each other's mouths.