History FanFic / MyLittleUnicorn

27th Aug '16 3:46:25 PM N.Harmonik
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* UnEvilLaugh: Practically all the villains, whether it's Rep-Stallion's "Heh, heh, ah, ah, ah, ah…!” or Titan's "Hmm, hmm, hmm!"
26th Aug '16 9:22:27 PM N.Harmonik
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* CantTakeCriticism: The usual complaint about Mykan; even the people who "used" to like him, find his "fanfics" too opinionated and clichéd.

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* CantTakeCriticism: The usual complaint about Mykan; even the people who "used" to like him, him find his "fanfics" too opinionated and clichéd.



* ChirpingCrickets: Nothing but this and the campfire can be heard when Rainbow proposes the name "Rainbow and the Cool Clouds" for Lightning's band.



* ConvenientMiscarriage: In the fifth "season", [[spoiler:a column collapses onto Cadance, killing her baby when she was only a few weeks away from giving birth]], just so the author can [[spoiler:punish her some more for being happily married]]. According to [[https://twitter.com/TheRealDKMykan/status/572652338453733379 this Tweet]], Mykan originally intended to write [[spoiler:Cadance getting pregnant then miscarrying when a possessed Shining Armor kicks her]].

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* ConvenientMiscarriage: In the fifth "season", [[spoiler:a column collapses onto Cadance, killing her baby when she was only a few weeks away from giving birth]], just so the author can [[spoiler:punish her some more for being happily married]]. According to [[https://twitter.com/TheRealDKMykan/status/572652338453733379 this Tweet]], Mykan originally intended to write [[spoiler:Cadance getting pregnant then miscarrying when a possessed Shining Armor kicks her]].



* StellarName: Starla Shine as well as the [[SarcasmMode creatively named]] Celesto (AKA The Grand Ruler).

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* StellarName: Starla Shine as well as the [[SarcasmMode creatively named]] Celesto (AKA The Grand Ruler).SpitTake: Human!Rarity spits out her milkshake when she learns her pony self is engaged to Spike.
6th Aug '16 6:37:17 PM N.Harmonik
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* FreakyFridayFlip: Lightning Dawn and Twilight Sparkle switch bodies in one chapter.
6th Aug '16 4:44:55 PM N.Harmonik
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* DynamicAkimbo: Lightning strikes this pose when dealing with a biker gang in Starpops.
6th Aug '16 4:27:29 PM N.Harmonik
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** Additionally, Mykan wrote the fic to give the canon characters a dose of the supposed cruelty of reality yet somehow, there are no criminal empires in United Equestria because they're all too afraid of Starfleet and there are programs that allow everyone to have happy lives but with low taxes which is economically unfeasible.



* JustFollowingOrders: When Starla is kidnapped in the midst of her own wedding, Starfleet refuses to go rescue her until Celesto gives the order to.


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* ToBeLawfulOrGood: When Starla is kidnapped in the midst of her own wedding, Starfleet refuses to go rescue her until Celesto gives the order to.
5th Aug '16 4:37:11 PM N.Harmonik
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* JustFollowingOrders: When Starla is kidnapped in the midst of her own wedding, Starfleet refuses to go rescue her until Celesto gives the order to.
1st Aug '16 7:32:35 PM N.Harmonik
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* DeathByOriginStory: ''Frequently''. As of ''Starfleet Magic IV'', the origin story body count includes [[spoiler:the entire Enticorn race, including]] Lightning's parents, Starla's parents, Buddy Rose's parents and sister, Buddy Rose's Cousin's parents, Titan's mother-in-law, Penny Sillon's grandmother, [[spoiler: Raven's husband]], and technically, [[spoiler:Celestia]] with regards to The Dark King.

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* DeathByOriginStory: ''Frequently''. As of ''Starfleet Magic IV'', the origin story body count includes [[spoiler:the entire Enticorn race, including]] Lightning's parents, Starla's parents, Buddy Rose's parents and sister, Buddy Rose's Cousin's parents, Titan's mother-in-law, Penny Sillon's grandmother, [[spoiler: Raven's [[spoiler:Raven's husband]], and technically, [[spoiler:Celestia]] with regards to The Dark King.



* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: By the bucket load. [[spoiler: Discord, Titan and Nightmare Moon get blown up. The deaths of Titan`s henchponies get handwaved with the excuse that they were just artificial beings. Worst example is probably in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II'', where Cadance's brother [[BigBad Fratello]] gets killed by her and then blown up, because [[MoralEventHorizon the author wanted to make her suffer]].]]

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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: By the bucket load. [[spoiler: Discord, [[spoiler:Discord, Titan and Nightmare Moon get blown up. The deaths of Titan`s henchponies get handwaved with the excuse that they were just artificial beings. Worst example is probably in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II'', where Cadance's brother [[BigBad Fratello]] gets killed by her and then blown up, because [[MoralEventHorizon the author wanted to make her suffer]].]]



** Queen Chrysalis [[spoiler: and Fratello]] in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II''.

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** Queen Chrysalis [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and Fratello]] in ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II''.



** [[spoiler: Turns out, the second main antagonist of ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II'' is Cadance's brother Fratello, who we never heard of before. Not to mention that Equestria seemingly has been invaded by robots around 15 years ago, of which no one has a memory of.]]

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** [[spoiler: Turns [[spoiler:Turns out, the second main antagonist of ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic II'' is Cadance's brother Fratello, who we never heard of before. Not to mention that Equestria seemingly has been invaded by robots around 15 years ago, of which no one has a memory of.]]



* SuperMode: Nearly every major protagonist has one. Celesto and Celestia have [[spoiler: The Grand Celestial Ruler]], Lightning has the [[spoiler: Enticorn form]], as well as "Mega Mode", which is shared by his Starfleet teammates, the MLP ponies can transform into the Valkyries of Harmony (as of ''Starfleet Magic IV''), Spike can turn into [[spoiler:The Dragon Knight]], and even [[spoiler:Cadance has a Super Mode as a ninja]].

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* SuperMode: Nearly every major protagonist has one. Celesto and Celestia have [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Grand Celestial Ruler]], Lightning has the [[spoiler: Enticorn [[spoiler:Enticorn form]], as well as "Mega Mode", which is shared by his Starfleet teammates, the MLP ponies can transform into the Valkyries of Harmony (as of ''Starfleet Magic IV''), Spike can turn into [[spoiler:The Dragon Knight]], and even [[spoiler:Cadance has a Super Mode as a ninja]].


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* UntoUsASonAndDaughterAreBorn: Celesto and Celestia become parents to twins Castor and Leilani.
29th Jul '16 8:59:14 PM N.Harmonik
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* HellholePrison: As shown in the sixth "season", prisoners are tortured and not given food if they don't keep quiet.
29th Jul '16 8:57:08 PM N.Harmonik
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The Unicornicopians settle in and remake Equestria, treat its original citizens as inferior and suppress their culture and language, particularly making them use "everybody" instead of "everypony". All that's missing is a residential school!

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The Unicornicopians settle in and remake Equestria, treat its original citizens as inferior and suppress their culture and language, particularly making them use "everybody" instead of "everypony". All that's missing is a residential school!school and a bunch of foreign diseases!
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* BadFuture: The Dark King comes from a future where [[spoiler: Celestia and Lightning are dead]] and he has conquered nearly the entire universe.

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* BadFuture: The Dark King comes from a future where [[spoiler: Celestia [[spoiler:Celestia and Lightning are dead]] and he has conquered nearly the entire universe.



* DeathByOriginStory: ''Frequently''. As of ''Starfleet Magic IV'', the origin story body count includes [[spoiler: the entire Enticorn race, including]] Lightning's parents, Starla's parents, Buddy Rose's parents and sister, Buddy Rose's Cousin's parents, Titan's mother-in-law, Penny Sillon's grandmother, [[spoiler: Raven's husband]], and technically, [[spoiler: Celestia]] with regards to The Dark King.

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* DeathByOriginStory: ''Frequently''. As of ''Starfleet Magic IV'', the origin story body count includes [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the entire Enticorn race, including]] Lightning's parents, Starla's parents, Buddy Rose's parents and sister, Buddy Rose's Cousin's parents, Titan's mother-in-law, Penny Sillon's grandmother, [[spoiler: Raven's husband]], and technically, [[spoiler: Celestia]] [[spoiler:Celestia]] with regards to The Dark King.



* DisproportionateRetribution:

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* DisproportionateRetribution:DisproportionateRetribution: By the cartload.



** Being stripped of his title and made to clean the palace grounds for cheating in a tournament was adequate punishment for Dusk Shine; being disowned by his parents wasn't.



* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent; the readers (and at least one character) would beg to differ.

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* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent; the readers (and at least one character) two characters) would beg to differ.
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