History FanFic / MyLittleUnicorn

29th Jul '16 8:59:14 PM N.Harmonik
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* HellholePrison: As shown in the sixth "season", prisoners are tortured and not given food if they don't keep quiet.
29th Jul '16 8:57:08 PM N.Harmonik
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The Unicornicopians settle in and remake Equestria, treat its original citizens as inferior and suppress their culture and language, particularly making them use "everybody" instead of "everypony". All that's missing is a residential school!

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The Unicornicopians settle in and remake Equestria, treat its original citizens as inferior and suppress their culture and language, particularly making them use "everybody" instead of "everypony". All that's missing is a residential school!school and a bunch of foreign diseases!
29th Jul '16 8:56:38 PM N.Harmonik
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* BadFuture: The Dark King comes from a future where [[spoiler: Celestia and Lightning are dead]] and he has conquered nearly the entire universe.

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* BadFuture: The Dark King comes from a future where [[spoiler: Celestia [[spoiler:Celestia and Lightning are dead]] and he has conquered nearly the entire universe.



* DeathByOriginStory: ''Frequently''. As of ''Starfleet Magic IV'', the origin story body count includes [[spoiler: the entire Enticorn race, including]] Lightning's parents, Starla's parents, Buddy Rose's parents and sister, Buddy Rose's Cousin's parents, Titan's mother-in-law, Penny Sillon's grandmother, [[spoiler: Raven's husband]], and technically, [[spoiler: Celestia]] with regards to The Dark King.

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* DeathByOriginStory: ''Frequently''. As of ''Starfleet Magic IV'', the origin story body count includes [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the entire Enticorn race, including]] Lightning's parents, Starla's parents, Buddy Rose's parents and sister, Buddy Rose's Cousin's parents, Titan's mother-in-law, Penny Sillon's grandmother, [[spoiler: Raven's husband]], and technically, [[spoiler: Celestia]] [[spoiler:Celestia]] with regards to The Dark King.



* DisproportionateRetribution:

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* DisproportionateRetribution:DisproportionateRetribution: By the cartload.



** Being stripped of his title and made to clean the palace grounds for cheating in a tournament was adequate punishment for Dusk Shine; being disowned by his parents wasn't.



* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent; the readers (and at least one character) would beg to differ.

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* PoliceState: The narration states that it's benevolent; the readers (and at least one character) two characters) would beg to differ.
23rd Jul '16 12:08:40 PM BossKey
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** According to WordOfGod, [[AvertedTrope there is no overarching]] BigBad in ''VI''.

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** According to WordOfGod, Surprisingly, thus far [[AvertedTrope there is no overarching]] BigBad in ''VI''.


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** A particularly common example is "vanished/disappeared/[[FamilyUnfriendlyDeath exploded]], and was gone."
22nd Jul '16 9:13:28 AM BossKey
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** According to WordOfGod, [[AvertedTrope there is no overarching]] BigBad in ''VI''.



** Starfleet Magic VI states that some of Starfleet's prisoners have been imprisoned for ''centuries'' [[AndIMustScream and are still alive]]. Apparently, being imprisoned by Starfleet implies an automatic life sentence.

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** Starfleet Magic VI states that some of Starfleet's prisoners have been imprisoned for ''centuries'' [[AndIMustScream and are still alive]]. Apparently, being imprisoned by Starfleet implies an automatic life sentence.sentence - or several.


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* MakeThemRot: One of the [[MonsterOfTheWeek one-shot villains]] in ''Starfleet Magic VI'' has this power.


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** They're not too keen about releasing prisoners, either; some of them have been locked up for centuries.


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** Cerise first appears under the name Cerise Wonder, but her second appearance uses Cerise Magenta.
21st Jul '16 5:11:28 PM BossKey
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Mykan later reworked the story [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]] as ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic''. The series is treated as if it were a TV show, with each fanfic being called a "season" and each chapter an "episode". So far, there have been four seasons:

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Mykan later reworked the story [[RecycledInSpace IN SPACE]] as ''My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic''. The series is treated as if it were a TV show, with each fanfic being called a "season" and each chapter an "episode". So far, there have been four seasons:five seasons with a sixth in progress:




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* [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/My-Brave-Pony-Starfleet-Magic-Season-5-559664308 Season V]]
* [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/My-Brave-Pony-Starfleet-Magic-Season-VI-623052411 Season VI]]



** Starfleet Magic VI states that some of Starfleet's prisoners have been imprisoned for ''centuries'' [[AndIMustScream and are still alive]]. Apparently, being imprisoned by Starfleet implies an automatic life sentence.



* HangingJudge: According to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/589093/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-qa#comment/3806165 this comment]], Starfleet sometimes doesn't have trials if they have "[[OrgyOfEvidence more than enough proof]]".

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* HangingJudge: According to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/589093/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-qa#comment/3806165 this comment]], Starfleet sometimes doesn't have trials if they have "[[OrgyOfEvidence more than enough proof]]". This is demonstrated in ''VI'' when they immediately arrest and imprison the Spectros without bothering to hear them out.


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** The Skye that appears as an enemy in ''Starfleet Magic VI'' is not the sister of Ace Ray.
7th Jul '16 4:58:13 PM N.Harmonik
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* AnthropomorphicShift: The author makes a big deal of how Unicornicopians are PettingZooPeople as opposed to the equine in nature. Equestria's population also gets this treatment somewhere along the line.

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* AnthropomorphicShift: The author makes a big deal of how Unicornicopians are PettingZooPeople as opposed to the equine in nature. Equestria's population also gets this treatment somewhere along the line.



** The chapter of season five where [[spoiler:Cadance has a miscarriage]] has been riffed and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2g92YTeckVw reviewed here]]

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** The chapter of season five where [[spoiler:Cadance has a miscarriage]] has been riffed and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2g92YTeckVw reviewed here]]here.]]



** The Grand Ruler and Lightning Dawn are male versions of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Celestia and Twilight Sparkle]], while Starla Shine is based on [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Rarity]]. Lightning's [[spoiler: Enticorn form]] is said to be a combination of a [[Anime/DragonBallZ Super Saiyan]] and an [[WesternAnimation/Ben10AlienForce Anodite]]

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** The Grand Ruler and Lightning Dawn are male versions of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Celestia and Twilight Sparkle]], while Starla Shine is based on [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Rarity]]. Lightning's [[spoiler: Enticorn [[spoiler:Enticorn form]] is said to be a combination of a [[Anime/DragonBallZ Super Saiyan]] and an [[WesternAnimation/Ben10AlienForce Anodite]]
7th Jul '16 7:18:01 AM BossKey
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* AnthropomorphicShift: The author makes a big deal of how Unicornicopians are PettingZooPeople as opposed to the equine in nature. Equestria's population also gets this treatment somewhere along the line.



* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In one chapter, Fluttershy has to go to the hospital, because of her appendix. Ponies don't have one. The author admitted he knows that, but he was too lazy to think up something else to make Fluttershy sick.

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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In one chapter, Fluttershy has to go to the hospital, because of her appendix. Ponies don't have one. The author admitted he knows that, but he was too lazy to think up something else to make Fluttershy sick. In the story, this is {{handwave}}d by AnthropomorphicShift giving the ponies one.



** Perhaps unsurprisingly, Starfleet has shades of this as well. Anyone that tries to question their actions or principles tends to get rebuked immediately.



** Powers aside, there are still plenty of these. One of the most blatant examples is when Mysterious, Dementia, and Rep-Stallion first return after [[spoiler:Titan's defeat at the hands of Grand Ruler]] and receiving a dose of SuperEmpowering, strong enough to get the upper hand against Lightning and company. How are they defeated? By their new powers ''spontaneously fizzling out.''

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** Powers aside, there are still plenty of these. One of the most blatant examples is when Mysterious, Dementia, and Rep-Stallion first return after [[spoiler:Titan's defeat at the hands of Grand Ruler]] and receiving a dose of SuperEmpowering, strong enough to get the upper hand against Lightning and company. How are they defeated? By their new powers ''spontaneously fizzling out.'''' It wouldn't be too much of an exaggeration to claim that this trope accounts for the vast majority of times that the heroes win.



* DramaticEllipsis: Overused thoughout the fanfic and a defining characteristic of the author's fanfics in general.

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* DramaticEllipsis: Overused thoughout throughout the fanfic and a defining characteristic of the author's fanfics in general.


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* InterchangeableAsianCultures: The city of Horn Kong is depicted as a mashup of Chinese names and Japanese imagery.
20th May '16 11:20:19 AM MarkLungo
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** Most of the songs were lifted from other sources, including TodaysSpecial and Series/ShiningTimeStation. He does cite where they came from, narrowly avoiding {{Plagiarism}}.

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** Most of the songs were lifted from other sources, including TodaysSpecial ''Series/TodaysSpecial'' and Series/ShiningTimeStation.''Series/ShiningTimeStation''. He does cite where they came from, narrowly avoiding {{Plagiarism}}.
20th May '16 6:57:34 AM GoldenFootballPlayer
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Due to run-ins with administration on Website/FanFictionDotNet involving copyright infringement, Mykan has moved to Website/DeviantArt and Website/Fimfictiondotnet and is in the process of re-uploading the series.

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Due to run-ins with administration on Website/FanFictionDotNet involving copyright infringement, Mykan has moved to Website/DeviantArt and Website/Fimfictiondotnet Website/FimfictionDotNet and is in the process of re-uploading the series.
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