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* MyEyesAreUpHere: Lavender uses a breast expansion spell on Seamus during their duel because he has a habit of talking to her chest and "my eyes are a bit higher".
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* RhethoricalRequestBlunder: When Harry, at one time, wakes with a hangover at the Professor's zeppelin, he asks for something to kill his hangover or just kill him. The Professor returns with a potion that he claims would kill a herd of elephants.

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* RhethoricalRequestBlunder: RhetoricalRequestBlunder: When Harry, at one time, wakes with a hangover at the Professor's zeppelin, he asks for something to kill his hangover or just kill him. The Professor returns with a potion that he claims would kill a herd of elephants.

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* AccidentalTruth: When he goes to Austria, Harry goes to the hills near Salzburg and reenacts the "The hills are alive" scene from ''Film/TheSoundOfMusic'', adding the joke "They are eating people". As it turns out, there's a SealedEvilInACan nearby, and the Aurors escorting Harry take his joke as a warning - which turns out to be in time, as the "can" was close to opening.



* BecomingTheMask: At the end of the story [[spoiler: after Harry kills Voldemort, he decides to leave his old life behind and embrace the Mr. Black persona fully.]]

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* BecomingTheMask: At the end of the story [[spoiler: after Harry kills Voldemort, he decides to leave his old life behind and embrace the Mr. Black persona fully.]]fully]].



* BreadEggsMilkSquick: A blood purist newspaper goes out of business due to "rising costs of doing business and the fact that the obituary section is larger than the last three issues ''combined''."

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* BreadEggsMilkSquick: A German blood purist newspaper goes out of business due to "rising costs of doing business and the fact that the obituary section is larger than the last three issues ''combined''."



* MundaneUtility: who could have known that a tanning spell could be used to kill a vampire? Lavender Brown uses this as inspiration to win a duel against Seamus [[spoiler: with a similarly-mundane spell for ''breast expansion''.]]

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* MundaneUtility: who Who could have known that a tanning spell could be used to kill a vampire? Lavender Brown uses this as inspiration to win a duel against Seamus [[spoiler: with a similarly-mundane spell for ''breast expansion''.]]



* NotEnoughToBury: Death Eaters and other Blood Purists get hit with this. [[AssholeVictim Hard]]. [[RunningGag And often]]. In Germany, the coroner has trouble [[LudicrousGibs telling the pieces apart]] after Black gives his Russian battle magic a try, a Death Eater attack team is ran over by a train and damaged beyond recognition, the [[spoiler: Lestranges]] have to be mopped up ''and'' picked clean from the [[TeleporterAccident insides]] of a vending machine, another Death Eater team is {{Eaten Alive}} by [[LandDownUnder Australia's]] [[DeathWorld deadly]] [[EverythingTryingToKillYou wildlife]], and let's not forget the bandits who are eaten by a nundu...

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* NotEnoughToBury: Death Eaters and other Blood Purists get hit with this. [[AssholeVictim Hard]]. [[RunningGag And often]]. In Germany, the coroner has trouble [[LudicrousGibs telling the pieces apart]] after Black gives his Russian battle magic a try, a Death Eater attack team is ran over by a train and damaged beyond recognition, the [[spoiler: Lestranges]] [[spoiler:Lestranges]] have to be mopped up ''and'' picked clean from the [[TeleporterAccident insides]] of a vending machine, another Death Eater team is {{Eaten Alive}} by [[LandDownUnder Australia's]] [[DeathWorld deadly]] [[EverythingTryingToKillYou wildlife]], and let's not forget the bandits who are eaten by a nundu...


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* CatchPhrase: When asked for more details on who he is, Mr. Black will invariably reply: "I'm just a guy on vacation."
** It's even used to identify him during his stop in Australia, as only the real Mr. Black responds like that. Harry does because he just wants a vacation, while [[OneDialogueTwoConversations everyone else]] thinks he's being a HumbleHero.

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* CatchPhrase: CharacterCatchphrase: When asked for more details on who he is, Mr. Black will invariably reply: "I'm just a guy on vacation."
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" It's even used to identify him during his stop in Australia, as only the real Mr. Black responds like that. Harry does because he just wants a vacation, while [[OneDialogueTwoConversations everyone else]] thinks he's being a HumbleHero.



* ComingOfAgeStory: This is a Literature/HarryPotter fic, so that's to be expected.

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* %%* ComingOfAgeStory: This is a Literature/HarryPotter ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fic, so that's to be expected.
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* AccidentalCelebrity: Harry Potter just wanted a vacation, and because he is famous he decides to take the alias "Mr. Black" to go incognito. One summer later, "Mr. Black" is an InUniverse MemeticBadass with a MysteriousPast who makes Death Eaters drop dead left and right via equally mysterious means, and is always aware of ''everything''. Harry is completely oblivious to his AccidentalHero status, as everything was the result of ContrivedCoincidence.
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*** Demonstrated when a student at Hogwarts uses a ''BreastExpansion spell'' on a practice duel against a ''guy'' to throw him for a loop, [[GagBoobs upset his balance]], and win the duel. The girl in question was inspired by Mr. Black's use of a cosmetic spell, of which she knows several (from girly magazines), to deadly effect.

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*** Demonstrated when a student at Hogwarts uses a ''BreastExpansion spell'' on a practice duel against a ''guy'' to throw him for a loop, [[GagBoobs upset his balance]], balance, and win the duel. The girl in question was inspired by Mr. Black's use of a cosmetic spell, of which she knows several (from girly magazines), to deadly effect.
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* YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry: {{Invoked|Trope}} in regards to the enigmatic Mr. Black, and told almost word-by-word by Laetus Lovegood in his paper when he covers the "Black Massacre" in Germany. While the [[KillEmAll magnitude]] of the event was actually out of Black's hands, the [[NeverHurtAnInnocent trigger]] (it involved Death Eaters) for it was very well within the definition of the trope.

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* YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry: {{Invoked|Trope}} in regards to the enigmatic Mr. Black, and told almost word-by-word by Laetus Lovegood in his paper when he covers the "Black Massacre" in Germany. While the [[KillEmAll magnitude]] magnitude of the event was actually out of Black's hands, the [[NeverHurtAnInnocent trigger]] (it involved Death Eaters) for it was very well within the definition of the trope.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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* CoolBike: Thanks to [[BornLucky Harry's insane luck at gambling]], he wins one of these in America. [[MadScientist The Professor]] asks if he can modify it, and Harry agrees - his only specific request is [[FlyingCar to have it fly]], but otherwise he gives the Professor free reign to add anything he wants besides that. The Professor and Henchgirl get [[MadScientist some like-minded friends]], and [[UpToEleven even make a contest out of who can put the most features in]]. After all of that, it can shrink to pocket-size, [[OilSlick drop oil slicks]], [[WeaponizedCar shoot spells]], fly, change license plates, and even has a pooka - a ''[[CoolHorse ghost horse]]'' - bound to it so that it never needs fuel, [[EmpathicWeapon can act by itself if needed]], and occasionally projects the [[AnimalBattleAura image of the pooka itself]].

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* CoolBike: Thanks to [[BornLucky Harry's insane luck at gambling]], he wins one of these in America. [[MadScientist The Professor]] asks if he can modify it, and Harry agrees - his only specific request is [[FlyingCar to have it fly]], but otherwise he gives the Professor free reign to add anything he wants besides that. The Professor and Henchgirl get [[MadScientist some like-minded friends]], and [[UpToEleven even make a contest out of who can put the most features in]].in. After all of that, it can shrink to pocket-size, [[OilSlick drop oil slicks]], [[WeaponizedCar shoot spells]], fly, change license plates, and even has a pooka - a ''[[CoolHorse ghost horse]]'' - bound to it so that it never needs fuel, [[EmpathicWeapon can act by itself if needed]], and occasionally projects the [[AnimalBattleAura image of the pooka itself]].



** Several [[AccidentalMurder accidental deaths]] get attributed to him whenever he is in the area, [[spoiler: by the end he gets credit for events ''[[UpToEleven all around the world]]'']].

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** Several [[AccidentalMurder accidental deaths]] get attributed to him whenever he is in the area, [[spoiler: by the end he gets credit for events ''[[UpToEleven all ''all around the world]]'']].world'']].

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