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A ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]]'', in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic was completed with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12418919/1/Halos-in-Space-reflection a one-chapter, ten-word sequel]] in 2017.
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A ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In in Space 2: Aliens attack]]'', in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic was completed with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12418919/1/Halos-in-Space-reflection a one-chapter, ten-word sequel]] in 2017.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKYKXAakmuw Halo: Halos In Space]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKYKXAakmuw Halo: Halos In in Space]]
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!!''Halo: Halos In Space'' provides examples of:
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!!''Halo: Halos In in Space'' provides examples of:
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A ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]], in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic was completed with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12418919/1/Halos-in-Space-reflection a one-chapter, ten-word sequel]] in 2017.
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A ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in [[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]], attack]]'', in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic was completed with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12418919/1/Halos-in-Space-reflection a one-chapter, ten-word sequel]] in 2017.
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!!The series is associated with the following tropes:
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* SapientShip: The sequel has an alien ship that responds to Joe Chief taunting it by telling him not to laugh at it.
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* ExplosiveDecompression: One of the army guys gets sucked out of the ship and explods in space.
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* ExplosiveDecompression: One of the army guys gets sucked out of the ship and explods in space. Exaggerated in the VideoGame/GarrysMod adaptation where [[StuffBlowingUp he blows up into a massive fireball]].
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* DeadFic: It has been two and a half years since the second installment was released. Then again, it took almost three for the third installation of the Full Life Consequences series to come out.
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[[caption-width-right:350:''Aliens we are human people and you are aliens but we don't need to kill things like us.'']]
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* {{Anticlimax}}: After everything Joe Chief went through, the plot is resolved because the aliens didn't have feelings.
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* GainaxEnding: After the epic battle, with Joe Chief trying to reach the alien leader, the plot is resolved because the aliens didn't have feelings.
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It finally ended!
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A ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]], in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic is currently incomplete.
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A ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]], in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic is currently incomplete.
was completed with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12418919/1/Halos-in-Space-reflection a one-chapter, ten-word sequel]] in 2017.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Aliens we are human people and you are aliens but we don't need to kill things like us.]]
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'''Video by Djy1991 and Icton Entertainment:'''
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'''Video by Djy1991 [=Djy1991=] and Icton Entertainment:'''
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* BlackDudeDiesFirst: The Human People Army guy in the first part who fell out and explodd in space.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Nearly every ally Joe Chief comes across gets killed quite randomly, from getting sucked into space to having a ship fall on them to being [[spoiler:shot and killed by a needle gun]].
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Nearly every ally Joe Chief comes across gets killed quite randomly, from getting sucked into space to having a ship fall on skwash them to being [[spoiler:shot and killed by a needle gun]].
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A {{Halo}} fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]], in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic is currently incomplete.
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A {{Halo}} ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic by [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences squirrelking]] starring Joe Chief, who is Master Chief's brother (and who is not a robot and can't fly, [[CanonDefilement unlike Master Chief]]). In the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2977058/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space original fic]], Joe Chief is on a ship one day when he gets attacked by aliens. While he fights them off, more come, along with a flood of water, and he is forced to retreat to the Halo in order to continue the fight against the aliens. It continues in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3717460/1/Halo_Halos_in_Space_2_Aliens_attack Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]], in which Joe Chief fights the aliens on Halo and tries to reach the alien leader. The fic is currently incomplete.
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'''Video by Djy1991 and Icton Entertainment::'''Entertainment:'''
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* [[www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKYKXAakmuw Halo: Halos In Space]]
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QsRJWZ9qwNw Halo: Halos In Space]]
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPRdKNzoyDA&feature=related Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]].
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QsRJWZ9qwNw Halo: Halos In Space]]
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPRdKNzoyDA&feature=related Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]].
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'''It has several machinima versions, including two a Machinima version created by ThatBloodyPirate111:'''
Iction:'''
*[[http://www.[[www.youtube.com/watch?v=QsRJWZ9qwNw com/watch?v=RKYKXAakmuw Halo: Halos In Space]]
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPRdKNzoyDA&feature=related Halo: Halos In Space 2: Aliens attack]].
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* {{Narm}}: One machinima maker starts laughing when [[SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud saying Joe Chief's shield sound effects]]. Also when one of the army guys falls asleep after mourning the death of his brother.
