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* HornyDevils: Legion wants Mewtwo to love him, [[PrecisionFStrike dammit!]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WordOfGod says chapter eleven wasn't originally going to be from [[spoiler: Mew's point of view]], but there was a given option of rewriting the entire chapter [[spoiler: to literally project Mewtwo into the past and not in her head]] on request if it proved too confusing to the reader.
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** The shoulder angel and devil seemed to have been inspired by [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk's shoulder entities.]]
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** The shoulder angel and devil seemed to have been inspired by [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk's shoulder entities.]]
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* SeductionProofMarriage: An inversion. [[spoiler:Even though they are mates, Legion in Mew's body attempts multiple times to seduce Mewtwo by rubbing it in that he's physically attracted to her. Yet despite numerous close calls, he always finds a way to fight back.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: Chapter fourteen [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming for good reason]]. Chapter eighteen may also count.
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* BreatherEpisode: Chapter fourteen [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming for good reason]].fourteen. Chapter eighteen may also count.
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-> ''” ...I killed and controlled life by my own agency. I bring nothing but destruction. Were I to have a mate, even a child, neither of them would last very long by my hands. I am a cursed being doomed to desire but not receive. What I did to Mew was as such. My desire was not returned, at least not in the way I hoped it would. That, my friend, is my human side…”''
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-> ''” ...''" ...I killed and controlled life by my own agency. I bring nothing but destruction. Were I to have a mate, even a child, neither of them would last very long by my hands. I am a cursed being doomed to desire but not receive. What I did to Mew was as such. My desire was not returned, at least not in the way I hoped it would. That, my friend, is my human side…”''
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But that is when [[ItHasOnlyJustBegun the story really begins.]]
''Forsaken'' is a Franchise/{{Pokemon}} FanFic written by {{Tropers/lilpurplebird}}, revolving around the [[SliceOfLife lives of the Legendaries]] as they attempt to recover and fix up the world. They go through their own personal trials of life, and then are put to the test by an outside force that has chosen the dead world for its own evil purposes, doing so through Mew and Mewtwo.
''Forsaken'' is a Franchise/{{Pokemon}} FanFic written by {{Tropers/lilpurplebird}}, revolving around the [[SliceOfLife lives of the Legendaries]] as they attempt to recover and fix up the world. They go through their own personal trials of life, and then are put to the test by an outside force that has chosen the dead world for its own evil purposes, doing so through Mew and Mewtwo.
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But that is when [[ItHasOnlyJustBegun the story really begins.]]
begins]].
''Forsaken'' is aFranchise/{{Pokemon}} ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' FanFic written by {{Tropers/lilpurplebird}}, revolving around the [[SliceOfLife lives of the Legendaries]] as they attempt to recover and fix up the world. They go through their own personal trials of life, and then are put to the test by an outside force that has chosen the dead world for its own evil purposes, doing so through Mew and Mewtwo.
''Forsaken'' is a
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* AmicablyDivorced: Darkrai and Cresselia, though more like “amicably separated”.
* ApocalypseHow: Class 4
* ApocalypseHow: Class 4
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* AmicablyDivorced: Darkrai and Cresselia, though more like “amicably separated”.
*"amicably separated".
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* ATasteOfTheLash: A ''crystalline'' lash at that. Poor Manaphy [[spoiler: and Mewtwo]]
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* ATasteOfTheLash: A ''crystalline'' lash at that. Poor Manaphy [[spoiler: and Mewtwo]]Mewtwo]].
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* BerserkButton: Mewtwo ''really'' doesn't like it when Mew is in harm's way or being threatened in any way, shape, or form.
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Mewtwo ''really'' doesn't like it when Mew is in harm's way or being threatened in any way, shape, or form.
** Mewtwo ''really'' doesn't like it when Mew is in harm's way or being threatened in any way, shape, or form.
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* BigBad: Legion
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Ho-oh and Kyogre froze and burned Jediah and his followers after TakenForGranite courtesy of Azelf.]] Deconstructed with Lugia who got lost.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Ho-oh and Kyogre froze and burned Jediah and his followers after TakenForGranite courtesy of Azelf.]] Deconstructed with Lugia who got lost.
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* BigDamnHeroes:
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* BloodLust: Legion all the way.
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* BreakTheCutie: Good ''Lord''.
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** ChekhovsSkill: [[spoiler: The water had to be transferred mouth-to-mouth to keep from spilling.]]
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* CloudCuckoolander: Entei may be this.
* [[spoiler: ConvenientMiscarriage]] with traumatic results.
* [[spoiler: ConvenientMiscarriage]] with traumatic results.
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* DownerBeginningDownerBeginning: The world is destroyed at the start of the story -- can't get more downer than that.
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* EyeScream: Rayquaza ending up losing an eye fighting off meteors. He gets better.
** Deoxys made an offhand remark he once [[SelfHarm gouged out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]] Given his [[AllMenArePerverts character]], this was PlayedForLaughs.
** Deoxys made an offhand remark he once [[SelfHarm gouged out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]] Given his [[AllMenArePerverts character]], this was PlayedForLaughs.
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* EyeScream: EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler:Mew has a faint one from her C-section.]]
* EyeScream:
** Rayquazaending ends up losing an eye fighting off meteors. He gets better.
** Deoxysmade an offhand remark remarks offhandedly that he once [[SelfHarm gouged out his own eyes]] [[BrainBleach for witnessing human sex.]] sex]]. Given his [[AllMenArePerverts character]], this was PlayedForLaughs.
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** Deoxys
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* InnocenceLost
* IntimateHealing: [[Anime/PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOut this]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy
* IntimateHealing: [[Anime/PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOut this]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She doesn’t take it well.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy
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* IntimateHealing: [[Anime/PrincessMononoke Mewtwo does]] [[ShoutOut this]] with a starved Mew, which eventually leads to a [[SacredFirstKiss kiss]]. She
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* ManChild: It’s not Entei’s fault. Even Mew had her reasons for her immaturity.
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* MeaningfulName: Mew’s real name reflects both her personality and desires.
** [[spoiler: Darkrai and Cresselia’s son is named [[AdamAndOrEve Adam]].]]
* [[spoiler: MedicalRapeAndImpregnate]]
** [[spoiler: Darkrai and Cresselia’s son is named [[AdamAndOrEve Adam]].]]
* [[spoiler: MedicalRapeAndImpregnate]]
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* MeaningfulName: Mew’s MeaningfulName:
** Mew's real name reflects both her personality and desires.
** [[spoiler: Darkrai andCresselia’s Cresselia's son is named [[AdamAndOrEve Adam]].{{Adam|AndOrEve}}.]]
* [[spoiler: MedicalRapeAndImpregnate]]%%* MedicalRapeAndImpregnate
** Mew's real name reflects both her personality and desires.
** [[spoiler: Darkrai and
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* NeckSnap: Happens with a psychic blow to the head described as a loud pop. It's when the neck is set back into place that it snaps. And it's bloody.
** [[spoiler:It was also how "Sir" died.]]
* NobodyPoops: Later averted
** [[spoiler:It was also how "Sir" died.]]
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* NeckSnap: Happens with a psychic blow to the head described as a loud pop. It's when the neck is set back into place that it snaps. And it's bloody.
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* PottyFailure: Poor Entei.
* PrayerIsALastResort
* PrecisionFStrike: “''Falling my ''''' ass, ''''' we're not doing shit about it!''”
--->'''[[spoiler: Legion]]''': "Fuck me. ''Hard.''"
* PreClimaxClimax / SexyDiscretionShot: [[spoiler: Maybe.]]
* PottyFailure: Poor Entei.
* PrayerIsALastResort
* PrecisionFStrike: “''Falling my ''''' ass, ''''' we're not doing shit about it!''”
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* PreClimaxClimax / SexyDiscretionShot: [[spoiler: Maybe.]]
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* ScarsAreForever: Mew has deep scars on her wrists, face, [[spoiler: and neck and throat]] from Legion's impact.
** EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler: She also has a faint one from her C-section.]]
** EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler: She also has a faint one from her C-section.]]
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* ScarsAreForever: Mew has deep scars on her wrists, face, [[spoiler: and neck [[spoiler:neck and throat]] from Legion's impact.
** EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler: She also has a faint one from her C-section.]]impact.
** EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler: She also has a faint one from her C-section.]]
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** [[TheSimpsons A blink-and-you'll-miss-it where Mew burns a bra in her hand.]]
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* [[UnhandThemVillain Unhand Her, Villain!]]: Mewtwo to Legion a good few times. He refuses at first, but then later complies [[spoiler: by slicing Mew's throat open and having her body drop off the cliff.]]
* VillainousBreakdown: Mewtwo’s tested Legion’s patience far too many times…
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* [[UnhandThemVillain Unhand Her, Villain!]]: Mewtwo to Legion a good few times. He refuses at first, but then later complies [[spoiler: by slicing Mew's throat open and having her body drop off the cliff.]]
* VillainousBreakdown: Mewtwo’s tested Legion’s patience far too many times…
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* VillainousBreakdown: Mewtwo’s tested Legion’s patience far too many
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* YankTheDogsChain: Too many to name, or else you'd be here all day.
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* YankTheDogsChain: Too many to name, or else you'd be here all day.day.
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* LoveEpiphany: Mewtwo had one of these, revealed in a flashback.
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* LoveEpiphany: Mewtwo had one of these, revealed in a flashback. [[spoiler: Mew had feelings for a long time, but she fully accepted it once she was "[[OnlyMostlyDead dead]]".]]
