History FanFic / FateRevenantSword

29th Dec '15 6:34:04 PM Pastykake
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Now, he has to try his hardest to [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong change the outcome of the War]], and save everyone from Gilgamesh, the King of Heroes and [[BigBad Kirei Kotomine]].

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Now, he has to try his hardest to [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong change the outcome of the War]], and save everyone from Caster, Gilgamesh, the King of Heroes and [[BigBad Kirei Kotomine]].Kotomine.


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* SinisterMinister: Kotomine is a priest of the Catholic church with evil intentions.
29th Dec '15 6:28:22 PM Pastykake
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* MagicContractRomance: Shirou and Saber.

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* MagicContractRomance: Shirou has summoned Saber and Saber.in the Fate route of ''Fate/stay night'', they fall in love. Having gone through that already, Shirou is already in love with Saber and hopes to woo her into falling for him again.



* TookALevelInBadass: Shirou, who gets good enough to [[spoiler:[[CanonDefilement beat Gilgamesh]] in a one-on-one swordfight.]]

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* TookALevelInBadass: Shirou, who gets good enough to [[spoiler:[[CanonDefilement beat Gilgamesh]] in a one-on-one swordfight.]]sword fight]].
* TranquilFury: Shirou feels this when he sees Caster holding [[spoiler:Illya and Taiga]] hostage.
28th Dec '15 1:54:09 PM Pastykake
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* PeggySue: Though not by very far, Shirou gets sent back in time to repeat part of his life with his future knowledge intact.
28th Dec '15 1:51:45 PM Pastykake
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Shirou gets sent back in time because he voices a desire to "go back"..
* BigFancyHouse: Shirou's, naturally, and the Tohsaka and Matou mansions, too.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Shirou gets sent back in time because he voices a desire says, "I can't stay here. I need to "go back"..
go back." He's telling himself aloud that he can't stay on the hill staring at where Saber disappeared because he has to go take care Illya and Rin, but Angra Mainyu chooses to interpret it as a wish to be sent back in time.
* BigFancyHouse: Shirou's, naturally, Shirou has an entire traditional Japanese estate, and the Tohsaka and Matou mansions, too.have Western-style mansions.
27th Dec '15 10:21:05 PM Pastykake
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->"[[MakeAWish I need to go back.]]"
->"[[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor If that is what you wish, Champion.]]"

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->"[[MakeAWish I ->''"I need to go back.]]"
->"[[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor If
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"If
that is what you wish, Champion.]]"
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This is a TimeTravel story, where Shirou unwittingly [[MakeAWish makes a wish]] [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor on the Holy Grail]] at the end of the anime, just after Saber [[CueTheSun vanishes into the dawn]]. He is suddenly [[ResetButton hurled back in time]] by a [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated not-quite-destroyed]] Holy Grail, to the [[WhenItAllBegan beginning of the Fifth Holy Grail War]].

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This is a TimeTravel story, where Shirou unwittingly [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor unwittingly]] [[MakeAWish makes a wish]] [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor on the Holy Grail]] Grail at the end of the anime, just after Saber [[CueTheSun vanishes into the dawn]]. He is suddenly [[ResetButton suddenly]] [[PeggySue hurled back in time]] by a [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated not-quite-destroyed]] Holy Grail, to the [[WhenItAllBegan beginning of the Fifth Holy Grail War]].



* ActionGirl: Rin, who does her canon role, and Saber, who is a [[GenderFlip female version]] of King Arthur.
* ArtifactOfDoom: [[spoiler:The Holy Grail.]]
* [[spoiler: AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: Shirou, after making a pact with the Fae, became Apeiron Lepida Leitoyrgei, King of the Forsaken.]]

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* ActionGirl: Rin, who does fills her canon role, and Saber, who is a [[GenderFlip female version]] of King Arthur.
* ArtifactOfDoom: [[spoiler:The The Holy Grail.]]
Grail.
* [[spoiler: AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: Shirou, [[spoiler:Shirou]], after making a pact with the Fae, became Apeiron [[spoiler:the Fae]], becomes [[spoiler:Apeiron Lepida Leitoyrgei, King of the Forsaken.]]



* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The premise of the story itself.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The premise of the story itself.Shirou gets sent back in time because he voices a desire to "go back"..



* BittersweetEnding: The beginning of the story itself, and then the fact that you know it's going to end the same way. [[spoiler:Or at least the Normal End and Epilogue and the True Epilogue of the Good End end this way. The Good Epilogue of the Good End [[EarnYourHappyEnding means what it says]].]]

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* BittersweetEnding: The beginning of the story itself, story, and then the fact that you know it's going to end the same way. [[spoiler:Or at least the Normal End and Epilogue and the True Epilogue of the Good End end this way. The Good Epilogue of the Good End [[EarnYourHappyEnding means what it says]].]]



* ByThePowerOfGrayskull[=/=]CallingYourAttacks: The Noble Phantasms used by Servants require their names to be shouted.

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* ByThePowerOfGrayskull[=/=]CallingYourAttacks: ByThePowerOfGrayskull / CallingYourAttacks: The Noble Phantasms used by Servants require their names to be shouted.invoked.



* [[spoiler: CrazyPrepared: Shirou's pact with the Fae is made to help fight Gilgamesh [[{{HSQ}} ON HIS LEVEL]].]]

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* [[spoiler: CrazyPrepared: Shirou's [[spoiler:Shirou's pact with the Fae Fae]] is made to help fight Gilgamesh [[{{HSQ}} [[HolyShitQuotient ON HIS LEVEL]].]]



* FieldOfBlades: Shirou and Archer's Unlimited Blade Works.

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* FieldOfBlades: Shirou and Archer's Unlimited Blade Works.Works is one.



* InfinityPlusOneSword: Gilgamesh's Ea [[spoiler:and Shirou's Escalvatine. Both of those weapons are EX ranked Anti-World Noble Phantasms.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Shinji, as usual.
* MagicContractRomance: Shirou and Saber, naturally.
* MagicWand: The Azoth Dagger.
* MentalWorld: Unlimited Blade Works.

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* InfinityPlusOneSword: Gilgamesh's Ea [[spoiler:and Shirou's Escalvatine. Both of those weapons are EX ranked EX-ranked Anti-World Noble Phantasms.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Shinji, Shinji is one, as usual.
* MagicContractRomance: Shirou and Saber, naturally.
Saber.
* MagicWand: The Azoth Dagger.
Dagger can function as one.
* MentalWorld: Unlimited Blade Works.Works is a reality marble--the user's inner world made manifest in reality.



*** If his recent ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' Crossover fic ''Miracle of Zero: Kingdom of the Forsaken'' is concerned as it takes place during this route, [[spoiler:sometime before the familiar summoning, Rin Tousaka [[RapeAsDrama gets raped]] by the Association and [[KilledOffForReal later gets killed right in front of]] Shirou. [[EvilFeelsGood Needless to say]] his reaction is extremely over the top and it also added into his list of greatest failures. How can he be a hero of justice if he cannot save someone close to him?]]
** [[HappyEnding Good End]]: [[spoiler:Shirou and Saber defeat Gilgamesh and Kotomine respectively, and Saber destroys the Grail and [[IChooseToStay ends up wishing to remain with Shirou]].]]

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*** If his recent ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' Crossover fic ''Miracle of Zero: Kingdom of the Forsaken'' is concerned as it takes place during this route, [[spoiler:sometime before the familiar summoning, Rin Tousaka [[RapeAsDrama gets raped]] by the Association and later [[KilledOffForReal later gets killed right in front of]] Shirou. [[EvilFeelsGood Needless to say]] his reaction is extremely over the top and it also added into his list of greatest failures. How can he be a hero of justice if he cannot save someone close to him?]]
** [[HappyEnding Good End]]: [[spoiler:Shirou and Saber defeat Gilgamesh and Kotomine Kotomine, respectively, and Saber destroys the Grail and [[IChooseToStay ends up wishing to remain with Shirou]].]]



* ThePowerOfTheSun: [[spoiler:Escalvatine has a fragment of the sun inside it, however that actually works.]]

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* ThePowerOfTheSun: [[spoiler:Escalvatine has a fragment of the sun Sun inside it, however that actually works.]]
13th Jul '14 6:49:03 AM ElvenQueen
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The books Shirou gets from Rin involve making contracts with [[spoiler:Ghost Liners, Servants, Divine Spirits, and ''[[DeusExMachina/Elementals]]''.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The books Shirou gets from Rin involve making contracts with [[spoiler:Ghost Liners, Servants, Divine Spirits, and ''[[DeusExMachina/Elementals]]''.''Elementals''.]]
13th Jul '14 6:48:18 AM ElvenQueen
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The books Shirou gets from Rin involve making contracts with [[spoiler:Ghost Liners, Servants, Divine Spirits, and [[DeusExMachina''Elementals'']].]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The books Shirou gets from Rin involve making contracts with [[spoiler:Ghost Liners, Servants, Divine Spirits, and [[DeusExMachina''Elementals'']].''[[DeusExMachina/Elementals]]''.]]
4th Jan '14 9:24:27 AM GoldenDarkness
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* PoesLaw: This fic may in fact be a clever satire of a MarySue fic which is disguised by the sheer length of the final product.
3rd Jan '14 11:53:55 PM fullmetalkeyblade
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* PoesLaw: This fic may in fact be a clever satire of [[MarySue]] fic which is disguised by the sheer length of the final product.

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* PoesLaw: This fic may in fact be a clever satire of [[MarySue]] a MarySue fic which is disguised by the sheer length of the final product.
3rd Jan '14 10:29:50 PM ZeroSennin
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7948998/1/Fate_Revenant_Sword Fate/Revenant Sword]]'' is an [[TrollFic objectively bad]] ''Fate/Stay Night'' fanfic by James D. Fawkes, a [[Troll]] and notoriously bad author on Fanfiction.net well known for an inflated sense of self importance.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7948998/1/Fate_Revenant_Sword Fate/Revenant Sword]]'' is an [[TrollFic objectively bad]] a ''Fate/Stay Night'' fanfic by James D. Fawkes, a [[Troll]] and notoriously bad author writer on Fanfiction.net well known for an inflated sense of self importance.
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Now, he has to try his hardest to [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong change the outcome of the War]], and save everyone from [[WorfEffect Gilgamesh, the King of Heroes]] and [[BigBad Kirei Kotomine]].

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Now, he has to try his hardest to [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong change the outcome of the War]], and save everyone from [[WorfEffect Gilgamesh, the King of Heroes]] Heroes and [[BigBad Kirei Kotomine]].



* {{Jerkass}}: [[AuthorAvatar Shinji]], as usual.

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* {{Jerkass}}: [[AuthorAvatar Shinji]], Shinji, as usual.



*** If his recent ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' Crossover fic ''Miracle of Zero: Kingdom of the Forsaken'' is concerned as it takes place during this route, [[spoiler:sometime before the familiar summoning, Rin Tousaka [[RapeAsDrama gets]] [[AuthorAppeal raped]] by the Association and [[KilledOffForReal later gets killed right in front of]] [[MarySue Shi]][[WideEyedIdealist rou]]. [[EvilFeelsGood Needless to say]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms his reaction is]] [[IDidntMeantoTurnYouOn more than justified]] and it also added into his list of greatest failures. How can he be a hero of justice if he cannot save someone close to him?]]

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*** If his recent ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' Crossover fic ''Miracle of Zero: Kingdom of the Forsaken'' is concerned as it takes place during this route, [[spoiler:sometime before the familiar summoning, Rin Tousaka [[RapeAsDrama gets]] [[AuthorAppeal gets raped]] by the Association and [[KilledOffForReal later gets killed right in front of]] [[MarySue Shi]][[WideEyedIdealist rou]]. Shirou. [[EvilFeelsGood Needless to say]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms his reaction is]] [[IDidntMeantoTurnYouOn more than justified]] is extremely over the top and it also added into his list of greatest failures. How can he be a hero of justice if he cannot save someone close to him?]]
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