History FanFic / Echoes

8th Mar '17 1:58:27 PM For-the-Prime-Dimension
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* FridgeHorror: The Warlord's origins: [[spoiler: He's a Naruto that abused the shadow clones from day one, eventually becoming nothing more then a hive of clones due to memory overload.]] Meaning that [[spoiler: it is possible for any Naruto to become him should they abuse the shadow clone technique, and there might well be countless Naruto's just waiting to become the [[CompleteMonster absolute]] [[OmnicidalManiac monster]] that we saw.]]
8th Mar '17 1:57:34 PM For-the-Prime-Dimension
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* FridgeHorror: The Warlord's origins: [[spoiler: He's a Naruto that abused the shadow clones from day one, eventually becoming nothing more then a hive of clones due to memory overload.]] Meaning that [[spoiler: it is possible for any Naruto to become him should they abuse the shadow clone technique, and there might well be countless Naruto's just waiting to become the [[CompleteMonster absolute]] [[OmnicidalManiac monster]] that we saw.]]
1st Jan '17 7:08:46 AM thezogg
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* ''The War World Arc'' ('''Ch 50 - present''')

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* ''The War World Arc'' ('''Ch 50 - present''')
Epilogue''')



The [[spoiler:"War World Arc" will conclude the story]], and that there may be a sequel in the works.

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The [[spoiler:"War World Arc" will conclude the story]], and As of January 1, 2017 ''Echoes'' is complete. There might be a sequel, but that there may be a sequel in is unlikely given the works.
author's shift to original fiction.
23rd Dec '16 8:55:52 PM thezogg
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Uchiha clans dysfunctions are put on full display in ''Echoes'' the most extreme example is when their coup ended with [[Shisui implementing a FinalSolution out of sheer hatred of the clan.]]

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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Uchiha clans dysfunctions are put on full display in ''Echoes'' the most extreme example is when their coup ended with [[Shisui [[spoiler: Shisui implementing a FinalSolution out of sheer hatred of the clan.]]
23rd Dec '16 8:54:26 PM thezogg
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** a surprise last minute addition is [[''Kaguya'']] herself, before ones fall she [[ate the Chakra Fruit raw]] because she sought to rebel from her clan out of disgust of their greed and death toll. [[spoiler: It didn't work out, and Kaguya became what she hated.]]

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** a surprise last minute addition is [[''Kaguya'']] [[spoiler: ''Kaguya'']] herself, before ones fall she [[ate [[spoiler: ate the Chakra Fruit raw]] because she sought to rebel from her clan out of disgust of their greed and death toll.toll they caused. [[spoiler: It didn't work out, and Kaguya became what she hated.]]
23rd Dec '16 2:57:53 PM thezogg
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* AlternateSelf: With TheMultiverse being the fics main premise how characters end up very differently is a major theme, with [[TheProtagonist Naruto]], [[BigBad Madara]], [[AscendedExtra Mikoto]], and [[TheUnexpected Zetsu]] getting the most focus.



* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Uchiha clans dysfunctions are put on full display in ''Echoes'' the most extreme example is when their coup ended with [[Shisui implementing a FinalSolution out of sheer hatred of the clan.]]
** When the Ootsutsuki show up how self-destructive a family they are is shown [[spoiler: one version of Kaguya is trying to change but refuses to acknowledge what a bad mother she was. One version of Hamura grew into a bitter misanthrope KnightTemplar because of his brother Black's genocide and Indra's pettiness. Another Hagoromo openly calls Indra and Asura idiots and failures unworthy of their legacy with his Indra ''agreeing'' that he as a vain {{jerkass}} when he shows up reformed as the OnlySaneMan.]]



* BoomerangBigot: Many alternate Uchiha show a very low opinion of their clan, from realizing that they are the greatest contributors to the worlds war torn state or for more selfish reasons. The list consists of Tsukiyomi, Amaterasu, Izanami, Itachi, [[spoiler: Sage Tobi]], with Shisui being the most extreme example, [[spoiler: his bigotry reaches genocidal extremes seeing all Uchiha as parasites.]]
** a surprise last minute addition is [[''Kaguya'']] herself, before ones fall she [[ate the Chakra Fruit raw]] because she sought to rebel from her clan out of disgust of their greed and death toll. [[spoiler: It didn't work out, and Kaguya became what she hated.]]



* MakeWayForTheNewVillains: At around the the fics half way point the original Madara triad falls apart or dies, they're swiftly replaced by Teikoku, a multiversal LegionOfDoom.



* MoreDeadlyThanTheMale: You think Sasuke, Obito, and Madara can be disproportionate and extreme? Wait until you see the devastation Mikoto's pettiness can cause!



* TheStarscream: [[spoiler: Kazama]] makes it very clear to Tsukiyomi that he will kill him either the first chance he gets, or when Tsukiyomi teaches him all he needs to know. Overlaps with him being a BastardUnderstudy. [[spoiler: Izanami]] successfully Starscreamed her [[spoiler:misogynistic Madara]] when he tried to pull a YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness on her. This also helped seal her [[MagnificentBastard Magnificent Bitch]] status.
** It seems to be a common multiversal occurrence for [[spoiler: Fugaku and Mikoto]] to be Minato's and Kushina [[TheStarscream Starscream.]] And he has a frighteningly good track record. Although [[spoiler: Itachi]] usually gives him what he deserves. Though in one universe he got what was coming to him in the form of [[spoiler: his own wife killing him. One version of Mikoto got such a horrible fate that a self-professed misanthrope was disturbed.]] The [[spoiler: Godaime!Itachi]] world subverted this, though.

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* TheStarscream: [[spoiler: Kazama]] makes it very clear to Tsukiyomi that he will kill him either the first chance he gets, or when Tsukiyomi teaches him all he needs to know. Overlaps with him being a BastardUnderstudy. [[spoiler: Izanami]] successfully Starscreamed her [[spoiler:misogynistic [[spoiler: Madara]] when he tried to pull a YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness on her. This also helped seal her [[MagnificentBastard Magnificent Bitch]] status.
** It seems to be a common multiversal occurrence for [[spoiler: Fugaku and Mikoto]] to be Minato's and Kushina [[TheStarscream Starscream.]] And he has they have a frighteningly good track record. Although [[spoiler: Itachi]] usually gives him them what he deserves.they deserve. Though in one universe he got what was coming to him in the form of [[spoiler: his own wife killing him. One version of Mikoto got such a horrible fate that a self-professed misanthrope was disturbed.]] The [[spoiler: Godaime!Itachi]] world subverted this, though.


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** [[spoiler: Black]] calls the [[ItsAllAboutMe Uchiha clan]] a race that loves ''themselves'' too much.
18th Oct '16 8:01:44 AM dlchen145
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* HeroKiller: The three Madara, BIG TIME. Especially Amaterasu, who has the story's highest body count for the moment. [[spoiler:Hell, as {{Badass}} as Zabuza and Jiraiya were in taking him down, he'd also partially weakened himself via his HonourBeforeReason - meaning that had he fought dirty he might have killed them ''both'' and still survived.]]

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* HeroKiller: The three Madara, BIG TIME. Especially Amaterasu, who has the story's highest body count for the moment. [[spoiler:Hell, as {{Badass}} badass as Zabuza and Jiraiya were in taking him down, he'd also partially weakened himself via his HonourBeforeReason - meaning that had he fought dirty he might have killed them ''both'' and still survived.]]
12th Aug '16 12:59:38 PM Willbyr
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* DysfunctionJunction: The Arashi clan. Full stop. They're like a DarkerAndEdgier version of the [[{{One Piece}} Straw Hat Pirates]]. Every one of them has some sort of psychological trauma, suffers from some sort of psychological problem or has a DarkAndTroubledPast. See TheWoobie for details.

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* DysfunctionJunction: The Arashi clan. Full stop. They're like a DarkerAndEdgier version of the [[{{One Piece}} [[Manga/OnePiece Straw Hat Pirates]]. Every one of them has some sort of psychological trauma, suffers from some sort of psychological problem or has a DarkAndTroubledPast. See TheWoobie for details.
18th Jul '16 1:50:29 AM Morgenthaler
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---> EvilGenius - [[spoiler:[[TragicVillain Five.]]]] He is easily [[spoiler:Alpha's]] most competent, loyal, and powerful servant almost killing both Chibaku and Kuebiko. He shares EvilGenius status with the BigBad despite being AxCrazy because he is DangerouslyGenreSavvy, the OnlySaneMan and seems to be the only person in the ANBU to capable of higher brain functions.

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---> EvilGenius - [[spoiler:[[TragicVillain Five.]]]] He is easily [[spoiler:Alpha's]] most competent, loyal, and powerful servant almost killing both Chibaku and Kuebiko. He shares EvilGenius status with the BigBad despite being AxCrazy because he is DangerouslyGenreSavvy, the OnlySaneMan and seems to be the only person in the ANBU to capable of higher brain functions.



--> TheEvilGenius - [[HeroKiller Kakuzu]] - The only member that is actually [[OnlySaneMan sane]]. On top of that he is a DangerouslyGenreSavvy NoNonsenseNemesis CombatPragmatist HeroKiller.

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--> TheEvilGenius - [[HeroKiller Kakuzu]] - The only member that is actually [[OnlySaneMan sane]]. On top of that he is a DangerouslyGenreSavvy NoNonsenseNemesis CombatPragmatist HeroKiller.



** [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Kakuzu]] never considers killing to be too good for his enemies.

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** [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Kakuzu]] Kakuzu never considers killing to be too good for his enemies.
25th May '16 5:52:06 PM Ferot_Dreadnaught
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* BreakThemByTalking: All over the place but the biggest one was in the ''very first chapter'' with Orochimaru [[HannibalHasAPoint pointing out that Kazama has learned nothing while training under Jiraiya.]] It started the whole plot!

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* BreakThemByTalking: All over the place but the biggest one was in the ''very first chapter'' with Orochimaru [[HannibalHasAPoint pointing out that Kazama has learned nothing while training under Jiraiya.]] Jiraiya. It started the whole plot!
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