History FanFic / DungeonKeeperAmi

11th Sep '17 8:03:03 AM ChaosWolf
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Poor Mercury, who had just raised the bottle back to her lips, splashed herself in the face and promptly had another coughing fit. With a face as red as a tomato, she stuttered "Y-yes, but I can't believe you- I wouldn't-" Suddenly, her eyes narrowed. "Wait, this is revenge for me surprising you, isn't it?"\\

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Poor Mercury, who had just raised the bottle back to her lips, splashed herself in the face and promptly had another coughing fit. With a face as red as a tomato, she stuttered "Y-yes, but I can't believe you- I wouldn't-" Suddenly, her eyes narrowed. "Wait, this is revenge for me surprising you, isn't it?"\\it?"
21st Aug '17 4:19:26 PM Malady
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* WingedHumanoid: Fairies, Angels, and Dark Angels, all have wings of one kind or another.
** As said in ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355816 A New Arrival]]'', Angels have "white, feathery wings".
13th Aug '17 8:22:58 PM Racheakt
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[...]\\
"Begone, brainless buffoon," he sighed '''"Note to self: do not chose any more vampires candidates purely on looks."'''

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--> "Begone, brainless buffoon," he buffoon,"he sighed '''"Note "Note to self: do not chose any more vampires candidates purely on looks."'''"
25th Jul '17 6:12:22 PM Malady
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* TheGoodChancellor / StandardRoyalCourt: Ami's advisers all fall under this to some extent. Lampshaded by Jered after Mercury becomes Empress- he thinks some [[StandardRoyalCourt royal titles are in order]].

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* TheGoodChancellor / StandardRoyalCourt: TheGoodChancellor: Ami's advisers all fall under this to some extent. Lampshaded by Jered after Mercury becomes Empress- he thinks some [[StandardRoyalCourt royal titles are in order]].



* Jadite is primarily Mercury's military adviser alongside Cathy. Also something of a bodyguard.

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* Jadite ** Jadeite is primarily Mercury's military adviser alongside Cathy. Also something of a bodyguard.



* ImagineSpot: Eline in 'Umbra's Report', immediately following her capture. [[spoiler: She pictures Mercury as a towering, lecherous, naked amazon]]. It is hilarious.

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* ImagineSpot: Eline in 'Umbra's Report', ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-4#post-6355755 Umbra's Report]]'', immediately following her capture. [[spoiler: She pictures Mercury as a towering, lecherous, naked amazon]]. It is hilarious.



* InTheNameOfTheMoon: Played straight by the fairies in the chapter "Fairy Attack," as well as by Sailor Moon herself.

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* InTheNameOfTheMoon: Played straight by the fairies in the chapter "Fairy Attack," ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-2#post-6355710 Fairy Attack]]'', as well as by Sailor Moon herself.



* KilledMidSentence: From [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/8444079/ Hunt's End]]:
--> “But you haven’t even heard yet what I’m offering,” she said as she stepped towards him. “You want me gone, I don’t want to be here-”\\

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* KilledMidSentence: Happens more than once, and at least twice:
** From ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355774 Resignation]]'':
---> "You fool have doomed us b-" [[spoiler:Zarekos's]] terrified screech ended abruptly as a gauntleted fist flattened his face, which bent under the force until his skull caved in.
**
From [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/8444079/ Hunt's End]]:
--> ---> “But you haven’t even heard yet what I’m offering,” she said as she stepped towards him. “You want me gone, I don’t want to be here-”\\



** Ami's special [[spoiler: youma-empowered]] imps are described as quite similar to [[Series/FraggleRock Doozers]] in appearance.
** Cathy and Jered might be a subtle reference to ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVI''. Cathy is an ActionGirl who uses swords, and is the conscience of the group prior to joining Mercury (she is the last to sign up and is the most reluctant in doing so). Jered is a LoveableRogue, and a KleptomaniacHero, he encourages Cathy to join. They are, for most of the first two arcs, the only OfficialCouple (as Well as a BattleCouple). They are both blond. These are all traits of Celes Chere and Locke Cole.

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** Ami's special [[spoiler: youma-empowered]] [[spoiler:youma-empowered]] imps are described as quite similar to [[Series/FraggleRock Doozers]] in appearance.
** Cathy and Jered might be a subtle reference to ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVI''. Cathy is an ActionGirl who uses swords, and is the conscience of the group prior to joining Mercury (she is the last to sign up and is the most reluctant in doing so). Jered is a LoveableRogue, and a KleptomaniacHero, he encourages Cathy to join. They are, for most of the first two arcs, the only OfficialCouple (as Well well as a BattleCouple). They are both blond.blond(e). These are all traits of Celes Chere and Locke Cole.



* SkeletonsInTheCoatCloset: Death priests wear animal skulls on their clothing, that help them in their magic, helping them revive, and things like that.

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* SkeletonsInTheCoatCloset: Mentioned every so often, usually in regards to death priests:
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Death priests wear animal skulls on their clothing, that help them in their magic, helping them revive, and things like that.that.
** Cathy assumes that she and everyone else has to wear that aesthetic to conform with the dungeon's themes, after that is required to keep its corruption from altering the clothing.



--> it says, 'DANGER, READ THIS FIRST' in huge red letters," the priestess quoted. "'Contents: 31 ravenous vampires'."
--> Amadeus choked on his drink and spewed the reddish liquid from his nostrils. Once he had regained control over his breathing, he asked incredulously "Say what?"

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--> it says, 'DANGER, READ THIS FIRST' in huge red letters," the priestess quoted. "'Contents: 31 ravenous vampires'."
-->
"\\
Amadeus choked on his drink and spewed the reddish liquid from his nostrils. Once he had regained control over his breathing, he asked incredulously "Say what?"



--> Marbles? CAREFUL!"
--> A moment after the warning, arms flailed and armour rattled as the tiny orbs got underfoot, causing soldiers to trip and fall, who in turn tripped up more of the pursuers. From one instant to another, the group of hunters was a mess of angry bodies sprawled over each other.

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--> Marbles? CAREFUL!"
-->
CAREFUL!"\\
A moment after the warning, arms flailed and armour rattled as the tiny orbs got underfoot, causing soldiers to trip and fall, who in turn tripped up more of the pursuers. From one instant to another, the group of hunters was a mess of angry bodies sprawled over each other.



** Chapter 149:

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** ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355816 Chapter 149:149: A New Arrival]]'':



** Chapter 150: Carmilla had her shoes glued to the floor, and the orc monitoring the imp and goblin testing got glued to his chair.

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** ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355817 Chapter 150: Healer's Prognosis]]'': Carmilla had her shoes glued to the floor, and the orc monitoring the imp and goblin testing got glued to his chair.chair.
* StandardRoyalCourt: Ami's advisers all fall under this to some extent. Lampshaded by Jered after Mercury becomes Empress- he thinks some royal titles are in order.
** Cathy fills the role of Captain of the Guard.
** Jered fills the role of Treasurer and occasionally spy.
** Jadeite is primarily Mercury's military adviser alongside Cathy. Also something of a bodyguard.
** Tiger is a (self titled) princess...
** Snyder is something of an adviser on various deities, and so fills the role of court priest.
** Erasmus used to be the Court Wizard before his death; Torian fills that role now.



--> Ami had both of her hands raised high over her head as she struggled to pronounce the unfamiliar syllables of the spell. A clean circle of ground had expanded in front of her, pushing a ring-shaped wave of clogging blood outward as it grew in diameter. The magical circle's perimeter burst into icy flame, and thirteen evenly-spaced flickering runes appeared in the burning curtain.
--> ...
--> Ami's voice reached a crescendo as she refused to let herself be distracted by the plight of her comrades. In response, lines of fire pulsed and drew a pentagram in the centre of the summoning circle. Suddenly, the entire room coloured with the bright orange tones of an active furnace when a tornado of flame exploded from the ground, sending large chunks of the summoning circle flying.

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--> Ami had both of her hands raised high over her head as she struggled to pronounce the unfamiliar syllables of the spell. A clean circle of ground had expanded in front of her, pushing a ring-shaped wave of clogging blood outward as it grew in diameter. The magical circle's perimeter burst into icy flame, and thirteen evenly-spaced flickering runes appeared in the burning curtain.
--> ...
-->
curtain.\\
[...]\\
Ami's voice reached a crescendo as she refused to let herself be distracted by the plight of her comrades. In response, lines of fire pulsed and drew a pentagram in the centre of the summoning circle. Suddenly, the entire room coloured with the bright orange tones of an active furnace when a tornado of flame exploded from the ground, sending large chunks of the summoning circle flying.



* SurpriseJump: In Chapter 150: Healer's Prognosis:
--> “You! Let go of that imp right now!”
--> “Gyah!” Camilla jumped half her own height into the air at the sound of Ami's angry voice, coming from right behind the young fairy.

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* SurpriseJump: In ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355817 Chapter 150: Healer's Prognosis:
Prognosis]]'':
--> “You! Let go of that imp right now!”
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now!”\\
“Gyah!” Camilla jumped half her own height into the air at the sound of Ami's angry voice, coming from right behind the young fairy.



--> An imp dropped down out of thin air, startling the red demon who was leaning bored against the wall. Immediately, the bug-eyed creature started hacking away at the unfinished rock in a frenzy, sending up a cloud of dust that billowed into the narrow corridor. After tunnelling through barely half a metre of rock, it broke through into the chamber behind, sending a spray of crumbling debris and stone spilling on the expensive carpet below.
--> The occupant of the room was sitting in a high-backed armchair with red cushions, and was staring at the intruder with wide eyes.\\

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--> An imp dropped down out of thin air, startling the red demon who was leaning bored against the wall. Immediately, the bug-eyed creature started hacking away at the unfinished rock in a frenzy, sending up a cloud of dust that billowed into the narrow corridor. After tunnelling through barely half a metre of rock, it broke through into the chamber behind, sending a spray of crumbling debris and stone spilling on the expensive carpet below.
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below.\\
The occupant of the room was sitting in a high-backed armchair with red cushions, and was staring at the intruder with wide eyes.\\



* ThisIsNotAFloor: Ami inverts this interestingly in the episode "[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-3#post-6355736 Convoluted Rescue Plan, Go!]]" The floor is made invisible, but her opponents assume it has been destroyed. Leads to a [[WeNeedADistraction distraction]].
* ThisIsUnforgivable: What amounts to this happens during the [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355794 invasion of Dreadfog Island]], when [[spoiler: Empress Mercury learns that the undead priests of the Crowned Death have plucked out the eyes of 8,000 captive innocents they intend to sacrifice -- including children -- so that they couldn't cause trouble. Ami is ''not pleased.'']]

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* ThisIsNotAFloor: Ami inverts this interestingly in the episode "[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-3#post-6355736 Convoluted Rescue Plan, Go!]]" The floor is made invisible, but her opponents assume it has been destroyed. Leads to a [[WeNeedADistraction distraction]].
* ThisIsUnforgivable: What amounts to this happens during the [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-6#post-6355794 invasion of Dreadfog Island]], when [[spoiler: Empress [[spoiler:Empress Mercury learns that the undead priests of the Crowned Death have plucked out the eyes of 8,000 captive innocents they intend to sacrifice -- including children -- so that they couldn't cause trouble. Ami is ''not pleased.'']]



** [[spoiler: Averted in the case of Ami's psychological torture. She largely bluffs them, and the mistress creates the impression that she did unspeakable things to them.]]
* TrojanHorse: Monteraine acts as one while infiltraiting one of Morrigan's Dungeons, with Ami herself playing the Greek.

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** [[spoiler: Averted [[spoiler:Averted in the case of Ami's psychological torture. She largely bluffs them, and the mistress creates the impression that she did unspeakable things to them.]]
* TrojanHorse: Monteraine acts as one while infiltraiting infiltrating one of Morrigan's Dungeons, with Ami herself playing the Greek.



--> [...]
--> Undeterred, the old woman proceeded to whack her on the head with her staff over and over again, cursing her with language so coarse her cheeks grew hot.

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--> [...]
-->
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Undeterred, the old woman proceeded to whack her on the head with her staff over and over again, cursing her with language so coarse her cheeks grew hot.



* TheWikiRule: [[http://dkami.wikia.com/wiki/Dungeon_Keeper_Ami_Wiki Here it is.]]
25th Jul '17 5:54:12 PM Malady
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->''Ami's eyebrows shot up as everyone kept staring at her with bated breath. "What?" she asked into the silence, crossing her arms in front of her chest defensively.''
->''"Aren't- Aren't you going to convince them by revealing your grotesque and horrifying true form now?" Snyder asked, a hint of disappointment quivering in his voice.''
->''The three goblin heads peering around the door frame nodded. "Yes. Is traditional."''
->''Ami blinked at the expectant expressions surrounding her, then closed her mouth with an audible snap. She turned her head and threw a pleading look at the Reaper, who just snickered at her predicament. "But I'm human! I really look like this!"''

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->''Ami's eyebrows shot up as everyone kept staring at her with bated breath. "What?" she asked into the silence, crossing her arms in front of her chest defensively.''
->''"Aren't-
''\\
''"Aren't-
Aren't you going to convince them by revealing your grotesque and horrifying true form now?" Snyder asked, a hint of disappointment quivering in his voice.''
->''The
''\\
''The
three goblin heads peering around the door frame nodded. "Yes. Is traditional."''
->''Ami
"''\\
''Ami
blinked at the expectant expressions surrounding her, then closed her mouth with an audible snap. She turned her head and threw a pleading look at the Reaper, who just snickered at her predicament. "But I'm human! I really look like this!"''


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* ThirdEye: As said in [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355773 Assault on Wemos]], the idol on the Avatar Islands has one, sorta of. And it's magical and meant to [[spoiler:help ascend someone to godhood]]:
--> At its very top, the former ruler of the continent floated in the centre of the huge pentagram decorating the idol's bald forehead almost like a glowing third eye.
25th Jul '17 4:59:17 PM Malady
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* CurseCutShort: The "shit" from "flies over shit" said by Baron Leopold in [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355769 Beryl's Plan] when asking about what's drawing Keepers to the Avatar Islands:

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* CurseCutShort: The "shit" from "flies over shit" said by Baron Leopold in [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355769 Beryl's Plan] Plan]] when asking about what's drawing Keepers to the Avatar Islands:
25th Jul '17 4:56:08 PM Malady
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* CurseCutShort: The "shit" from "flies over shit" said by Baron Leopold in [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355769 Beryl's Plan] when asking about what's drawing Keepers to the Avatar Islands:
--> "Good. One less Keeper in the world. Have you found out yet what's attracting them to that desolate place? They are over it like flies over-" The Baron fell silent and nodded a greeting as he passed two halberd-wielding guards, causing them to salute.



--> "Cathy, can you cut my hair please?" She asked, producing a pair of scissors from thin air.
--> "I'm not much of a barber," the blonde cautioned.
--> "Well, I don't think the imps could do a good job, and I'd prefer not to have any of my other subordinates get too close to me with sharp tools."

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--> "Cathy, can you cut my hair please?" She asked, producing a pair of scissors from thin air.
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air.\\
"I'm not much of a barber," the blonde cautioned.
-->
cautioned.\\
"Well, I don't think the imps could do a good job, and I'd prefer not to have any of my other subordinates get too close to me with sharp tools."
25th Jul '17 4:52:27 PM Malady
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* SealedEvilInACan: The world's adamantite deposits are the can sealing away the evil of a deceased Dark God. [[spoiler:The dwarfs try to use a similar idea to get rid of particularly dangerous Keepers by tricking them into a warded airtight adamantite chamber and locking them in.]]

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* SealedEvilInACan: SealedEvilInACan:
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The world's adamantite adamantine deposits are the can sealing away the evil of a deceased Dark God. [[spoiler:The God.
*** The
dwarfs try [[spoiler:try to use a similar idea to get rid of particularly dangerous Keepers by tricking them into a warded airtight adamantite adamantine chamber and locking them in.]]]]
*** Horned Reapers are also buried away by Reapers, because a Keeper getting rid of them in any other way is bound for retribution from the Dark Gods.
* SerenadeYourLover: One of the things [[spoiler:General Jadeite]] learned from reading romance novels, and a discarded plan to get [[spoiler:Mercury]] to fall more in love with him, as said in [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355769 Beryl's Plan]]:
--> Somehow, he didn't think she would be impressed if he serenaded her from below a balcony.
25th Jul '17 4:47:09 PM Malady
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* IWantThemAlive: The Light, after realizing Ami is not pure evil.

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* IncompatibleOrientation: One of Drunk Ami's fears about her relationship with [[spoiler:General Jadeite]], as said in her thoughts from [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-5#post-6355769 Beryl's Plan]]:
--> A horrible thought almost made her gasp out loud. Could it be that he was gay? She needed another drink! A moment later, she settled back against him, her thirst slaked. This required some careful observation.
* IWantThemAlive: The Light, after realizing Ami is not pure evil. Also [[spoiler:Crowned Death]], after some point.
25th Jul '17 10:23:46 AM Malady
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: When Ami has to choose what to wear in ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355839 Vanity Issues]]'', and her advisors are offering choices:
--> "I'm. Not. Wearing. That." Ami stated with finality.
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