History FanFic / DarkSecrets

17th Sep '17 1:25:05 PM nombretomado
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* HowDoIUsedTense: The writer's troubles with the past progressive tense are the source of much [[{{Narm}} unintentional hilarity]] as characters seem to be undertaking physically impossible combinations of tasks.



* NarratingTheObvious: "Are you sure?" He asked, making sure [[HowDoIUsedTense this is what she wanted]].

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* NarratingTheObvious: "Are you sure?" He asked, making sure [[HowDoIUsedTense [[UsefulNotes/HowDoIUsedTense this is what she wanted]].



--> "Are you sure?" He asked, making sure [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment this]] [[HowDoIUsedTense is what she wanted.]]

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--> "Are you sure?" He asked, making sure [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment this]] [[HowDoIUsedTense [[UsefulNotes/HowDoIUsedTense is what she wanted.]]
22nd Mar '17 10:47:35 AM DustSnitch
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** The author only occasionally remembers that there's magic in the {{Potterverse}}, having Draco mend Jaiden's injured foot with {{Muggle}} first aid when healing potions were mentioned two chapters ago, Ron attacking her several times without using so much as a single curse, and the central conflict resolved with a KnifeFight.

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** The author only occasionally remembers that there's magic in the {{Potterverse}}, ''Harry Potter'' characters can use magic, having Draco mend Jaiden's injured foot with {{Muggle}} first aid when healing potions were mentioned two chapters ago, Ron attacking her several times without using so much as a single curse, and the central conflict resolved with a KnifeFight.
15th Jan '17 11:32:27 AM WaterBlap
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* SadlyMythtaken: Voldemort invokes the [[UsefulNotes/ClassicalMythology Greek god Hades]] to bring Ron back from the dead, despite the complete non-appearance of gods Greek or otherwise in ''Literature/HarryPotter''.

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* SadlyMythtaken: Voldemort invokes the [[UsefulNotes/ClassicalMythology [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Greek god Hades]] to bring Ron back from the dead, despite the complete non-appearance of gods Greek or otherwise in ''Literature/HarryPotter''.
10th Jan '17 3:44:41 PM szaleniec1000
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* ChekhovsClassroom: Subverted: The healing potion Jaiden makes in Snape's Potions class could have been useful at many points in the story, but is never mentioned again.


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* SoftGlass: Zig-zagged in the shower scene, as Ron is able to punch right through the glass with no apparent harm but Jaiden cuts herself on the fragments.
9th Aug '16 6:38:57 AM szaleniec1000
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* GratuitousRape: The [=AdultFanFiction=] version adds a second, considerably more graphic rape sequence to the scene in which Ron first breaks into Jaiden's quarters.
9th Aug '16 6:25:35 AM szaleniec1000
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* ShowDontTell: Frequently averted - one chapter closes with the line "[[ThatMakesMeFeelAngry They had begun to fall in love with each other.]]"
8th Aug '16 5:59:48 AM szaleniec1000
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: In the sequel, Jaiden is convinced that nobody will believe that she's seeing evil!Ron's ghost, despite the existence of ghosts being a known fact in the Potterverse.
6th Aug '16 12:51:57 PM szaleniec1000
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* FailedASpotCheck: [[RonTheDeathEater Ron is a Death Eater]], complete with the Dark Mark on his arm, but somehow none of the boys he shares a dormitory with, including Harry, notice.
4th Aug '16 3:42:25 PM szaleniec1000
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* DarkSecret: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Naturally]]: Ron's is that he's [[RonTheDeathEater a Death Eater]].
4th Aug '16 2:41:36 PM szaleniec1000
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* CluelessAesop: The fic tries to tackle weighty issues like rape, abuse and suicide, but the writing is nowhere near up to it.
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