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It can be read [[http://penstrokepony.deviantart.com/gallery/30403133 here]] (Website/DeviantArt), [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-better-living-through-science-and.html here]] (Blog/EquestriaDaily) or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22535/Better-Living-Through-Science-and-Ponies here]] (Website/FimfictionDotNet).

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It can be read [[http://penstrokepony.deviantart.com/gallery/30403133 here]] (Website/DeviantArt), (Platform/DeviantArt), [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-better-living-through-science-and.html here]] (Blog/EquestriaDaily) or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22535/Better-Living-Through-Science-and-Ponies here]] (Website/FimfictionDotNet).
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** When [=GLaDOS=] is giving Pinkie Pie her BreakTheCutie moment, she states that the only reason her friends were there was because they were worried she is only a few steps away from becoming a serial killer. One who bakes her victims into FanFic/{{cupcakes}}.

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** When [=GLaDOS=] is giving Pinkie Pie her BreakTheCutie moment, she states that the only reason her friends were there was because they were worried she is only a few steps away from becoming a serial killer. One who bakes her victims into FanFic/{{cupcakes}}.''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles''.
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** Pinkie Pie eagerly has fun with the tests, and when [=GLaDOS=] mentions cake Pinkie says she'll happily zip through the tests now that she knows there's cake waiting. You would think [=GLaDOS=] would love her enthusiasm, but instead she says she didn't tell Pinkie because her friends want nothing to do with her and don't want her at the party, and brings up the time she threw a party with inanimate objects to claim she's mentally unstable. When [[CallBack Pinkie's mane deflates]], [=GLaDOS=] notes this physical change caused by her mood and calls her a mutant freak that's liable to snap and [[FanFic/{{cupcakes}} become a serial killer]].

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** Pinkie Pie eagerly has fun with the tests, and when [=GLaDOS=] mentions cake Pinkie says she'll happily zip through the tests now that she knows there's cake waiting. You would think [=GLaDOS=] would love her enthusiasm, but instead she says she didn't tell Pinkie because her friends want nothing to do with her and don't want her at the party, and brings up the time she threw a party with inanimate objects to claim she's mentally unstable. When [[CallBack Pinkie's mane deflates]], [=GLaDOS=] notes this physical change caused by her mood and calls her a mutant freak that's liable to snap and [[FanFic/{{cupcakes}} [[Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles become a serial killer]].
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* IsItSomethingYouEat: [=GLaDOS=] tries to break Pinkie Pie's spirit by pointing out that her eating habits will eventually lead her to getting Diabetes. Pinkie asks if Diabetes is some kind of cake.

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** VillainousBreakdown: '''[[spoiler:"SHUT UP. SHUT UP. SHUT UP. UP THE SHUT. I WILL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP."]]'''



*VillainousBreakdown: [=GLaDOS=]'s response to Celestia's trolling is one such breakdown. '''[[spoiler:"SHUT UP. SHUT UP. SHUT UP. UP THE SHUT. I WILL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW IF YOU DON'T SHUT UP."]]'''



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** She consistently refers to Celestia as a "tyrant" in the bonus chapter, referencing the Epileptic Tree among ''[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony]]'' fans that Princess Celestia is actually a tyrant posing as a good leader.

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** She consistently refers to Celestia as a "tyrant" in the bonus chapter, referencing the Epileptic Tree among ''[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony]]'' fans that Princess Celestia is actually a tyrant posing as a good leader.
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* [[ActorAllusion Actress Allusion]]: Caroline's last name was never given in the game, but this story mentions it as [=McLain=], the same as her voice actress.



* {{Jossed}}: The first chapter now has a note explaining how it was written before Derpy became canon.



* PromotedFanboy: One of the team members of the Portal Mod team came on board this way. [[NeverLiveItDown You can tell from the comments he left before he joined...]]
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The story picks up where the single-player campaign of ''VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}'' ends, with Chell on the surface wondering what comes next and GLaDOS prepping Atlas and P-Body for co-op testing. Unfortunately, a malfunctioning portal gun (which Wheatley had [[DuctTapeForEverything previously "repaired" with duct tape]]) creates an "uber-portal" that pulls the entire Enrichment Center, Chell included, into another dimension... namely, Equestria.

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The story picks up where the single-player campaign of ''VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}'' ends, with Chell on the surface wondering what comes next and GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] prepping Atlas and P-Body for co-op testing. Unfortunately, a malfunctioning portal gun (which Wheatley had [[DuctTapeForEverything previously "repaired" with duct tape]]) creates an "uber-portal" that pulls the entire Enrichment Center, Chell included, into another dimension... namely, Equestria.

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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [=GLaDOS=] continues to demonstrate she learns from her mistakes. [[spoiler:By the time Chell finds her, she's transplanted her main consciousness into a wireless remote body based on Celestia, so Caroline replacing her main body does nothing until the wireless body is shut down and control is diverted. Furthermore, the alicorn body [=GLaDOS=] builds is armored, has on-board weapons, and being a robot is more than capable of killing Chell or any other pony by brute force. Relying on weapons directly connected to her body also makes it more difficult for Chell to turn her weapons against her.]]


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* TaughtByExperience: [=GLaDOS=] continues to demonstrate she learns from her mistakes. [[spoiler:By the time Chell finds her, she's transplanted her main consciousness into a wireless remote body based on Celestia, so Caroline replacing her main body does nothing until the wireless body is shut down and control is diverted. Furthermore, the alicorn body [=GLaDOS=] builds is armored, has on-board weapons, and being a robot is more than capable of killing Chell or any other pony by brute force. Relying on weapons directly connected to her body also makes it more difficult for Chell to turn her weapons against her.]]
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Clarified something and added a space between \"Epileptic\" and \"Tree\" (in hopes of not having the thing labeled YMMV). Sorry for the double edit.


** She consistently refers to Celestia as a "tyrant", referencing the EpilepticTree among ''[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony]]'' fans that Princess Celestia is actually a tyrant posing as a good leader.

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** She consistently refers to Celestia as a "tyrant", "tyrant" in the bonus chapter, referencing the EpilepticTree Epileptic Tree among ''[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony]]'' fans that Princess Celestia is actually a tyrant posing as a good leader.

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