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* BrokenAesop: The anti-sexist message would be a lot more effective if the characters didn't go around slut-shaming each other willy-nilly.

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* CureYourGays: The degayification camp. The inhabitants are supposed to "learn how to be ungay" by jeering and wolf-whistling Pansy in a cheerleader's outfit.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive / EvilInc: Ron Raper founded the "Sexist Cooper Advertising"


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* CorruptCorporateExecutive / EvilInc: Ron Raper founded the "Sexist Cooper Advertising".


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* CureYourGays: The degayification camp. The inhabitants are supposed to "learn how to be ungay" by jeering and wolf-whistling Pansy in a cheerleader's outfit.

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* CreatorsCultureCarryover: There are quite a lot of references to American culture, especially for a story that takes place in a castle in Scotland. The most egregious is at the talent show, where the buzzers are compared to those on ''Series/AmericasGotTalent'', rather than the ones on its TransatlanticEquivalent, ''Series/BritainsGotTalent''.



* [[TonightSomeoneDies Tonight Someone Dies (And It Might Be Crystal)]]: But it's Lucius.

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* [[TonightSomeoneDies Tonight Someone Dies TonightSomeoneDies (And It Might Be Crystal)]]: Crystal): But it's Lucius.



* WeAllLiveInAmerica: There are quite a lot of references to American culture, especially for a story that takes place in a castle in Scotland. The most egregious is at the talent show, where the buzzers are compared to those on ''Series/AmericasGotTalent'', rather than the ones on its TransatlanticEquivalent, ''Series/BritainsGotTalent''.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Gilderoy convinced Bellatrix to free him and the two somehow managed to defeat Voldemort while the rest of the cast was holding a talent show.

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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Gilderoy convinced Bellatrix to free him him, and the two somehow managed to defeat Voldemort while the rest of the cast was holding a talent show.



** Dumbledore’s cover story for Harry disappearing and Crystal taking his place includes assurance that Harry has not been transformed into a girl, in spite of an entire class seeing exactly that as it happened.

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** Dumbledore’s cover story for Harry disappearing and Crystal taking his place includes assurance that Harry has not been transformed into a girl, in spite of an entire class ''entire class'' seeing exactly that as it happened.
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"Becoming Female" is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[StrawFeminist Venus God]]. Think ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' with "[[StrawMisogynist sexists]]" in place of "preps".

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"Becoming Female" ''Becoming Female'' is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [[StrawFeminist Venus God]]. Think ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' with "[[StrawMisogynist sexists]]" in place of "preps".
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The story pretty much revolves around Crystal's (Harry's female name) attempt to marry Draco, while Ron, ([[RunningGag who is sexist]]), attempts to seduce (and later rape) Crystal. Also, Gilderoy Lockhart inexplicably reappears. After losing control of Malfoy Manor to Lucius (who is also sexist), Draco organises a talent contest to raise money for the wedding. Meanwhile, Ron returns from New York, having changed his name to Ron Raper (did I mention his sexism?). Ultimately, Crystal and Draco get married and Ron Raper is eaten by the giant squid.

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The story pretty much revolves around Crystal's (Harry's female name) attempt to marry Draco, while Ron, Ron ([[RunningGag who is sexist]]), sexist]]) attempts to seduce (and later rape) Crystal. Also, Gilderoy Lockhart inexplicably reappears. After losing control of Malfoy Manor to Lucius (who is also sexist), Draco organises a talent contest to raise money for the wedding. Meanwhile, Ron returns from New York, having changed his name to Ron Raper (did I mention his sexism?). Ultimately, Crystal and Draco get married and Ron Raper is eaten by the giant squid.
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* {{Chickification}}: Happens to all the female characters, including [[SternTeacher Minerva]] [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure McGonagall]], [[DracoInLeatherPants Bellatrix Lestrange]] and [[GenderBender Harry/Crystal Potter]].

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* {{Chickification}}: Happens to all the female characters, including [[SternTeacher Minerva]] [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Minerva McGonagall]], [[DracoInLeatherPants Bellatrix Lestrange]] and [[GenderBender Harry/Crystal Potter]].



* HappinessInSlavery: Parvati seems to like the GoGoEnslavement

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* HappinessInSlavery: Parvati seems to like the GoGoEnslavementGoGoEnslavement.



* [[TonightSomeoneDies Tonight Someone Dies And It Might Be Crystal]]: But it's Lucius.

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* [[TonightSomeoneDies Tonight Someone Dies And (And It Might Be Crystal]]: Crystal)]]: But it's Lucius.
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* BankruptcyBarrel: Narcissa turns up at Hogwarts wearing a barrel, after Lucius kicks her out of the house. Crystal thinks this is bad because, "[[SkewedPriorities the barrel made her look fat and totally clashed with her skin tone]]."

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* BankruptcyBarrel: Narcissa turns up at Hogwarts wearing a barrel, after Lucius kicks her out of the house. Crystal thinks this is bad because, because "[[SkewedPriorities the barrel made her look fat and totally clashed with her skin tone]]."
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It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5822132/1/Becoming_Female here]]. It was followed by a sequel called "Fanfic/BeingFemale."

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It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5822132/1/Becoming_Female here]]. It was followed by a sequel called "Fanfic/BeingFemale."''Fanfic/BeingFemale''.



* TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed: After Dumbledore becomes a nudist, he goes around with only his long beard covering his private parts. Most every time this is brought up, the story uses some silly euphemism to refer to his penis, such as "private wahoo," "joystick," "ding-dong," and "inappropriate wand." Oddly, the word "penis" actually ''is'' used one time. Also, Crystal refers to her vagina as her "pleasure hole."

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* TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed: After Dumbledore becomes a nudist, he goes around with only his long beard covering his private parts. Most every time this is brought up, the story uses some [[UnusualEuphemism silly euphemism to refer to his penis, such as "private wahoo," "joystick," "ding-dong," wahoo", "joystick", "ding-dong", and "inappropriate wand." wand"]]. Oddly, the word "penis" actually ''is'' used one time. Also, Crystal refers to her vagina as her "pleasure hole."hole".

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