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[[http://paradox-modfanmadebackup.wikia.com/wiki/A_Red_Letter_Day A Red Letter Day]] is an entirely self-indulgent {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between ''VideoGame/RedAlert3Paradox'' and Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Creator/{{Peptuck}}'s fic ''Fanfic/{{Renegade|Peptuck}}''.
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[[http://paradox-modfanmadebackup.wikia.com/wiki/A_Red_Letter_Day A Red Letter Day]] is an entirely self-indulgent {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between ''VideoGame/RedAlert3Paradox'' and Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's fic Fanfic/{{Renegade}}.
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[[http://paradox-modfanmadebackup.wikia.com/wiki/A_Red_Letter_Day A Red Letter Day]] is an entirely self-indulgent {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between ''VideoGame/RedAlert3Paradox'' and Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's Creator/{{Peptuck}}'s fic Fanfic/{{Renegade}}.
''Fanfic/{{Renegade|Peptuck}}''.
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* WorldWarWhatever: At one point, Shepard fears accidentally starting World War ''Six''.
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* WorldWarWhatever: At one point, Shepard fears accidentally starting World War ''Six''.''Six''.
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* CurbStompBattle: The First Contract War for humans, Sovereign against the combined fleets.
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* CurbStompBattle: The First Contract War for humans, Contact War, during which humans effortlessly fought off the turians thanks to their technological edge.
** Sovereign against the combined fleets.
** Sovereign against the combined fleets.
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The story has been deleted.
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deleted. [[http://paradox-modfanmadebackup.wikia.com/wiki/A_Red_Letter_Day Can still be found on the back-up wiki.]]
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[[http://wiki.paradoxmod.com/index.php?title=A_Red_Letter_Day A Red Letter Day]] is an entirely self-indulgent {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between RedAlert3Paradox ''VideoGame/RedAlert3Paradox'' and Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's fic Fanfic/{{Renegade}}.
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** Made "Better" because it's implied that there really isn't that much of a difference between the two sides at the most basic level, their main point of contention being "Those guys aren't us."
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** Hell, Shepard even says that certain technologies (specifically, Time Travel) don't make sense to those on the ''inside.'' Kaiden openly admits that one or two people a year go insane from delving too deeply into the mysteries of time.
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** Even better, our computer technologies are laughably primitive in comparison to the Citadel's, and yet we can ''still'' do all of those things with our tech. Case in point? When humans first came to the Citadel to exchange data, they brought ''punch cards and magnetic reels.'' And yet this species is capable of casual time travel, stealth in space, mass cloning...
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[[http://wiki.paradoxmod.com/index.php?title=A_Red_Letter_Day A Red Letter Day]] is an entirely self-indulgent {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between RedAlert3Paradox and Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's fic Renegade.
Fanfic/{{Renegade}}.
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[[http://wiki.paradoxmod.com/index.php?title=A_Red_Letter_Day A Red Letter Day]] is an entirely self-indulgent CrossoverFic {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between RedAlert3Paradox and Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's fic Renegade.
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An entirely self-indulgent CrossoverFic between RedAlert3Paradox and MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's fic Renegade.
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An entirely self-indulgent CrossoverFic between RedAlert3Paradox and MassEffect, Franchise/MassEffect, written by the creator of the former and inspired by Peptuck's fic Renegade.
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* I'mHavingSoulPains: When Shepard invaded the mind of the indoctrinated clone trooper, it did something ''bad'' to her nervous system.
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* I'mHavingSoulPains: ImHavingSoulPains: When Shepard invaded the mind of the indoctrinated clone trooper, it did something ''bad'' to her nervous system.
