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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: As the couple gets weaker [[spoiler:from radiation sickness]], Jim requests tea from his wife, only to be informed by Hilda that they've run out of water. Trying to find an alternative, Jim suggests drinking milk, only to be told it went bad because the fridge went off. Desperate, he proposes black coffee, only to be reminded again they're out of water. Frustrated, Jim confronts Hilda, shaking her in a moment of panic (in the film, at least), demanding to know "what they're going to drink, for God's sake." The shift in Jim's demeanor is undeniably unsettling, showing he's truly ''scared'' of his and his wife's survival.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: As the couple gets weaker [[spoiler:from radiation from [[spoiler:radiation sickness]], Jim requests asks for tea from his wife, only to be informed by for Hilda that they've run to tell him they're out of water. Trying to find an alternative, Jim suggests drinking milk, only to be told it went bad spoiled because the fridge went off. doesn't have power. Desperate, he proposes suggests black coffee, only to be reminded again they're out of water. Frustrated, Jim confronts Hilda, shaking her in a moment of panic (in the film, at least), demanding to know "what they're going to drink, for God's sake." sake". The shift radical change in Jim's demeanor behavior is undeniably unsettling, showing alarming, as the once-happy Jim shows he's truly ''scared'' ''terrified'' of his and his wife's their survival.
