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* SilverFox: Noted to be a handsome man in his middle ages, and is quite proud of his looks.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: She insinuates that the Harvilles must be bad parents to be able to leave their children in others' care (specifically, Mary's and Charles', though they are actually with her mother-in-law) for a few months. In the ''same letter'', she asks for an invite to Bath and says that she can easily bear a few months away from her own children.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: {{Hypocrite}}:
** She insinuates that the Harvilles must be bad parents to be able to leave their children in others' care (specifically, Mary's and Charles', though they are actually with her mother-in-law) for a few months. In the ''same letter'', she asks for an invite to Bath and says that she can easily bear a few months away from her ownchildren.children.
** Disparages Charles Hayter for his lower birth, even though she married into the gentry.
** She insinuates that the Harvilles must be bad parents to be able to leave their children in others' care (specifically, Mary's and Charles', though they are actually with her mother-in-law) for a few months. In the ''same letter'', she asks for an invite to Bath and says that she can easily bear a few months away from her own
** Disparages Charles Hayter for his lower birth, even though she married into the gentry.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: The 2007 ITV adaptation gives him the first name Harry.
* TheMourningAfter: He's still deeply in mourning for his intended, Fanny Harville, and is ready to stay that way for the rest of his life. Until he meets Anne and Louisa.
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* TheMourningAfter: He's still deeply in mourning for his intended, Fanny Harville, and is ready to stay that way for the rest of his life. Until he meets Anne and Louisa.
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* WidowsWeeds: The male version. He has black crepe around his hat, and everyone who discusses his prospects with Anne notes that their marriage would have take place after "a decent interval".
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* WidowsWeeds: The male version. He has black crepe around his hat, and everyone who discusses his prospects with Anne notes that their marriage would have take taken place after "a decent interval".
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* WidowWoman: Her husband, a knight, passed away some years before the story. The narrator notes that some in the neighborhood expected she and widower Sir Walter would marry, and also that widows get a lot more side-eye for remarrying than widowers. Being a widow with command of her own fortune also gives Lady Russell a considerable degree of independence.
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* DeterminedWidow: Although her husband's death left her impoverished and she fell ill soon afterwards, Mrs. Smith is determined to keep her sprits up. She also maintains her pride as a gentlewoman by making handcrafted items and selling them to provide charity to some poor families in the neighborhood.
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* IllGirl: She was afflicted with severe rheumatism after her husband's death. During the story she is unable to walk, which is an improvement over her previous state of being bedridden.
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* ProfessionalBrownNoser: She flatters and compliments Elizabeth and Sir Walter constantly, because despite their financial troubles, they're still baronets. However, when Mr. Elliot arrives to prevent a marriage that would knock him out of the inheritance, she turns her flattering ways on him instead.
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* ProfessionalBrownNoser: ProfessionalButtKisser: She flatters and compliments Elizabeth and Sir Walter constantly, because despite their financial troubles, they're still baronets. However, when Mr. Elliot arrives to prevent a marriage that would knock him out of the inheritance, she turns her flattering ways on him instead.
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* AloofBigBrother: She barely notices her younger sisters exist. She even persuades Mrs. Clay to remain as a guest in Bath because "[Anne] is nothing to me" in comparison.
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* GoldDigger: She's hoping to flatter Sir Walter into marrying her. However, the narrative doesn't cast her as a villain as she might be in Austen's other books--it's not admirable, but it's also a logical move for a widow with no connections.
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* GoldDigger: She's hoping a widow from an unprosperous marriage, and she hopes to flatter Sir Walter into marrying her. However, the narrative doesn't cast Only Elizabeth and Sir Walter himself fail to see her as a villain as she might be in Austen's other books--it's not admirable, but it's also a logical move for a widow with no connections.intentions.
* MaybeEverAfter: At the end, Mr. Elliot ends her ambitions by seducing her. However, the narrator speculates that she might just become Lady Elliot after all, because he might not be so immune to her flattery and charms either.
* ProfessionalBrownNoser: She flatters and compliments Elizabeth and Sir Walter constantly, because despite their financial troubles, they're still baronets. However, when Mr. Elliot arrives to prevent a marriage that would knock him out of the inheritance, she turns her flattering ways on him instead.
* ProfessionalBrownNoser: She flatters and compliments Elizabeth and Sir Walter constantly, because despite their financial troubles, they're still baronets. However, when Mr. Elliot arrives to prevent a marriage that would knock him out of the inheritance, she turns her flattering ways on him instead.
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* BookWorm: Lady Russel loves reading and is crazy about getting new publications.
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* BookWorm: Lady Russel Russell loves reading and is crazy about getting new publications.
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* NobleBigot: She doesn't ''hate'' people in a different social class than her, she just doesn't give them as much respect as they deserve. When Anne tells her the truth about William, she readily accepts that she was "pretty completely wrong", and does her best to support Wentworth.
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* NobleBigot: She doesn't ''hate'' people in a different social class than her, she just doesn't give them as much respect as they deserve, while giving people of her own rank (like Sir Walter) more than they deserve. When Anne tells her the truth about William, she readily accepts that she was "pretty completely wrong", and does her best to support Wentworth.
* SelfServingMemory: This is on full display in her letter to Anne near the end of the book. First she always thought the Crofts were rude and unworthy tenants, then later in the letter (written after the Crofts had visited her) the Crofts have always been the pleasantest people.
* ShipperWithAnAgenda: She wants Wentworth to marry Henrietta Musgrove because then Mary won't have a sister-in-law who's married to a country curate.
* ShipperWithAnAgenda: She wants Wentworth to marry Henrietta Musgrove because then Mary won't have a sister-in-law who's married to a country curate.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: When Fanny Harville died, Captain Wentworth asked for permission to leave his ship so he could break it to Benwick. Then he went anyway without waiting for the reply and stayed with Benwick for a week, which Captain Harville implies was a SuicideWatch.
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* TrueCompanions: With his brother captains Harville and Benwick. Wentworth says that he would make a journey of any length if any weather to any request of Harville's and feels a deep sympathy for Benwick's heartbreak.
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* TrueCompanions: With his brother captains Harville and Benwick. Wentworth says that he would make a journey of any length if in any weather to any request of Harville's and feels a deep sympathy for Benwick's heartbreak.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Over his deceased sister Fanny. He seems to genuinely resent that Benwick decided to marry someone else so soon, and insists that she would not have forgotten him so soon if their positions had been reversed.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Over his deceased sister Fanny. He seems to genuinely resent He's displeased that Benwick decided is engaged to marry someone else so soon, soon after Fanny's death, and insists that she would not have forgotten him so soon if their positions had been reversed.
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* NumberTwo: He was Wentworth's first lieutenant on the ''Laconia'' before peace was declared. (It's possible, given what's said of that ship's adventures, that Harville was promoted to commend Wentworth--a common practice, since the captains themselves couldn't be promoted to admiral except by moving up the chain of seniority.)
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* TrueCompanions: With Wentworth and Benwick. They formed a strong bond with each other in war and would do anything for the others. Harville is immediately ready to give hospitality not only to Wentworth, but to anyone Wentworth considers a friend.
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* {{Foil}}: To Anne. Like her, he's suffered a loss of love that he feels deeply. However, Anne suspects (correctly) that his nature is not one of perpetual grief, and that he would have formed an attachment to any woman who listened with sympathy to his story.
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* NumberTwo: He was Wentworth's first lieutenant on the ''Laconia'' before peace was declared. (It's possible, given what's said of that ship's adventures, that Harville was promoted to commend Wentworth--a common practice, since the captains themselves couldn't be promoted to admiral except by moving up the chain of seniority.)
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Till Captain shows up again, Anne suffers from this trope a lot. She has done so for eight years. She's never met Captain Wentworth's equal and refused Charles Musgrove's offer. Justified by the fact that she never got beyond her social circle in the country.
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Till Captain Wentworth shows up again, Anne suffers from this trope a lot. She has done so for eight years. She's never met Captain Wentworth's equal and refused Charles Musgrove's offer. Justified by the fact that she never got beyond her social circle in the country.
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!!Admiral and Mrs. Sophie Croft
The childless couple that rents out Kellynch. Admiral Croft is friendly and genuine; his wife is the same but with a better head for business. She's also Wentworth's sister, which is how he gets reintroduced to Anne.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Wentworth jokes that his brother-in-law frequently oversets whenever he tries to manage something designed for land and hopes Sophie won't have to climb out of a ditch again.
The childless couple that rents out Kellynch. Admiral Croft is friendly and genuine; his wife is the same but with a better head for business. She's also Wentworth's sister, which is how he gets reintroduced to Anne.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Wentworth jokes that his brother-in-law frequently oversets whenever he tries to manage something designed for land and hopes Sophie won't have to climb out of a ditch again.
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!!Admiral and Mrs. Sophie Mrs Croft
The childless couple that rents out Kellynch. Admiral Croft is friendly and genuine; his wife is the same but with a better head for business.She's also Sophy happens to be Wentworth's sister, which is how he gets reintroduced to Anne.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Wentworth jokes that his brother-in-law frequently oversets whenever he tries to manage something designed for land and hopesSophie Sophy won't have to climb out of a ditch again.
The childless couple that rents out Kellynch. Admiral Croft is friendly and genuine; his wife is the same but with a better head for business.
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Wentworth jokes that his brother-in-law frequently oversets whenever he tries to manage something designed for land and hopes
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* SelfMadeMan: He won about £25,000 in prize money during the war against Napoleon. In today's money, that will be slightly in excess of eight hundred thousand pounds (a veritable fortune in those days, where the prices of goods are but a feel pennies here and there).
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* SelfMadeMan: He won about £25,000 in prize money during the war against Napoleon. In today's money, that will be slightly in excess of eight hundred thousand pounds (a veritable fortune in those days, where the prices of goods are but a feel few pennies here and there).
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!! Mrs. Smith
An old school friend of Anne's who is in Bath for medical treatment. Anne's reunion with her proves to be very important.
* CoolBigSis: When they were both at school, then-Miss Hamilton was a kind friend to Anne, who was lonely and homesick and grieving for her recently-deceased mother.
* DeterminedWidow: Although her husband's death left her impoverished and she fell ill soon afterwards, Mrs. Smith is determined to keep her sprits up. She also maintains her pride as a gentlewoman by making handcrafted items and selling them to provide charity to some poor families in the neighborhood.
* GossipyHens: With Nurse Rooke, but to a practical purpose. Nurse Rooke's network of knowledge helps Mrs. Smith to dispose of her wares to the most profit, as people who are recently recovered from illness tend to be very generous in charity.
* IllGirl: She was afflicted with severe rheumatism after her husband's death. During the story she is unable to walk, which is an improvement over her previous state of being bedridden.
* InspirationallyDisadvantaged: Subverted. Although Mrs. Smith is able to find means of being cheerful and make the most of her situation, she corrects Anne's assumptions in this line and tells her that the sickroom is where you are more likely to find weakness of spirit than nobility.
* RichesToRags: She and her husband lived beyond their means (and at Mr. Elliot's encouragement) and had already suffered several "embarrassments" before Mr. Smith died. When he did, Mrs. Smith discovered that he was more deeply indebted than she realized, leaving her almost destitute.
* StepfordSmiler: She does her best to happily congratulate Anne on (she believes) the forthcoming Elliot-Elliot wedding and says that she really didn't think she had any other choice.
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* WidowWoman: Her husband, a knight, passed away some years before the story. The narrator notes that some in the neighborhood expected she and widower Sir Walter would marry, and also that widows get a lot more side-eye for remarrying than widowers. Being a widow with command of her own fortune also gives Lady Russell a considerable degree of independence.
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The youngest Elliot sister. While she isn't quite as bad as Elizabeth, she's still self-centered and irritable.
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The youngest Elliot sister. While she isn't quite as bad as Elizabeth, she's still self-centered and irritable.
irritable, quick to "believe herself ill-used".
* TheLoad: She is useless in a crisis because she tends to instantly fall into hysterics. When her son breaks his collarbone, one of Anne's tasks is to keep Mary from a total freakout. At Lyme, her and Henrietta's loud panicking over Lousia's fall confuses onlookers as to which young lady is actually hurt.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: She is an obnoxious sister and daughter-in-law to the Musgroves for her snippiness and snobbery.
* ParentalNeglect: She usually speaks of her children in terms of complaint, spoils them, and ignores them when it suits her. Even when her eldest son is injured, Mary happily gives over all responsibility for his care to Anne with the justification that Anne's lack of maternal feeling makes her a better nurse.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: She is an obnoxious sister and daughter-in-law to the Musgroves for her snippiness and snobbery.
* ParentalNeglect: She usually speaks of her children in terms of complaint, spoils them, and ignores them when it suits her. Even when her eldest son is injured, Mary happily gives over all responsibility for his care to Anne with the justification that Anne's lack of maternal feeling makes her a better nurse.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: In the first part of the book he never addresses Anne directly, but his pleasant conversations to the Musgroves are full of barbs that are meant for her. For example, his remark that he was so eager to go to sea because he had no wife to keep him ashore... ''Anne.''
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: In the first part of the book he never addresses Anne directly, but his pleasant conversations to the Musgroves are full of barbs that are meant for her. For example, his remark that he was so eager to go to sea in 1806 because he had no wife to keep him ashore... ''Anne.''
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Wentworth gets to return to the scene of his heartbreak rich, respected, and desired, and can lord his new status over Anne, whose reward for breaking the engagement was to become faded and careworn. For a little while, Wentworth enjoys his passive-aggressive remarks and his open flirtation with the younger, prettier Musgrove sisters in front of her, but it starts to sour even before the visit to Bath when he sees just ''how'' much her spirit has suffered in the past eight years. As it turns out, it's not terribly satisfying [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown kicking someone who's already down]].
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Wentworth gets to return to the scene of his heartbreak rich, respected, and desired, and can lord his new status over Anne, whose reward for breaking the engagement was to become faded and careworn. For a little while, Wentworth enjoys his passive-aggressive remarks and his open flirtation with the younger, prettier Musgrove sisters in front of her, but it starts to sour even before the visit to Bath when he sees just ''how'' much her spirit has suffered in the past eight years. As it turns out, it's not terribly satisfying satisfying [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown kicking someone who's already down]].
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* SilkHidingSteel: Mrs. Croft has spent most of her married life at her husband's side, even while he's at sea fighting the French Navy, and she's never even been seasick. She's an excellent, well-mannered lady, but she slaps her brother down when he starts in on women not being suited for the hardships of life at sea. (A pretty silly remark in all consequence since he knows perfectly well she's lived on one.)
* WomenAreWiser: Mrs. Croft is noted as having more business sense than her husband.
* WomenAreWiser: Mrs. Croft is noted as having more business sense than her husband.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Mrs. Croft has spent most of her married life at her husband's side, even while he's at sea fighting the French Navy, and she's never even been seasick. She's an excellent, well-mannered lady, but she slaps her brother down when he starts in on women not being suited for the hardships of life at sea. (A pretty silly remark in all consequence since he knows perfectly well she's lived on one.aboard ship.)
* WomenAreWiser: Mrs. Croft is noted as having more business sense than herhusband.
husband. During the carriage-ride with them, Anne observes how Mrs. Croft frequently takes hold of the reins herself to help the Admiral and speculates that this is a good reflection of how they manage their affairs in general.
* WomenAreWiser: Mrs. Croft is noted as having more business sense than her
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* ElegantClassicalMusician: Anne Elliot is an elegant, slender woman with cultured mind. She plays the piano exceptionally well and has great taste in music. However, she could share it with only two people — her late mother and her former fiancé Captain Wentworth.
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* ElegantClassicalMusician: Anne Elliot is an elegant, slender woman with a cultured mind. She plays the piano exceptionally well and has great taste in music. However, she could share it with only two people — her late mother and her former fiancé Captain Wentworth.
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* IRegretNothing: [[spoiler:She eventually decides that in spite of the pain it caused her and Wentworth, she was right to bow to others' opinions by not marrying him when they were young]].
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* IRegretNothing: [[spoiler:She eventually decides that in spite of the pain it caused her and Wentworth, she was right to bow to others' opinions by not marrying him when they were young]].young.]]
* NiceGirl: Acquaintances remark that although Elizabeth is more beautiful- in a traditional, showy kind of way- Anne is the sister they actually like ''being around''. Remember that the novel is set in a time when people often had no other entertainments than talking to each other.
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* OldMaid: She's twenty-seven and not married yet. That was a dangerous age when a woman was close to being considered unfit to marry.
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* OldMaid: She's twenty-seven and not married yet. That was a dangerous age age, when a woman was close to being considered unfit to marry.
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* NobleBigot: She doesn't ''hate'' people in a different social class than her, she just doesn't give them as much respect as they deserve. When Anne tells her the truth about William, she readily accepts that she was "pretty completely wrong", and does her best to support Wentworth.
-->But she was a very good woman, and if her second object was to be sensible and well-judging, her first was to see Anne happy. She loved Anne better than she loved her own abilities […]
-->But she was a very good woman, and if her second object was to be sensible and well-judging, her first was to see Anne happy. She loved Anne better than she loved her own abilities […]
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Wentworth gets to return to the scene of his heartbreak rich, respected, and desired, and can lord his new status over Anne, whose reward for breaking the engagement was to become faded and careworn. For a little while, Wentworth enjoys his passive-aggressive remarks and his open flirtation with the younger, prettier Musgrove sisters in front of her, but it starts to sour even before the visit to Bath when he sees just ''how'' much her spirit has suffered in the past eight years.
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Wentworth gets to return to the scene of his heartbreak rich, respected, and desired, and can lord his new status over Anne, whose reward for breaking the engagement was to become faded and careworn. For a little while, Wentworth enjoys his passive-aggressive remarks and his open flirtation with the younger, prettier Musgrove sisters in front of her, but it starts to sour even before the visit to Bath when he sees just ''how'' much her spirit has suffered in the past eight years.
years. As it turns out, it's not terribly satisfying [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown kicking someone who's already down]].
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* LoveDodecahedron: She's involved in one. Charles Musgrove loved her, but married her sister. She loves Captain Wentworth who used to love her as well but now thinks he might love Louisa or Henrietta. Captain Benwick is obviously infatuated with her and she doesn't find him too shabby either. Her cousin William wants her as well and she's tempted to return the affection.
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* LoveDodecahedron: She's involved in one. Charles Musgrove loved her, but married her sister. She loves Captain Wentworth who used to love her as well but now thinks he might love Louisa or Henrietta. Captain Benwick is obviously infatuated with her and she doesn't find him too shabby either. Her cousin William wants her to marry Anne as well and for a brief moment she's tempted to return the affection.affection. Her sister Elizabeth wants to marry their cousin William as well, but he ends up with Penelope Clay.
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* OldMaid: She's twenty-seven and not married yet. That was a dangerous age, when a woman was close to being considered unfit to marry.
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* OldMaid: She's twenty-seven and not married yet. That was a dangerous age, age when a woman was close to being considered unfit to marry.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: She insinuates that the Harvilles must be bad parents to be able to leave their children in others' care (specifically, Mary's and Charles') for a few months. In the ''same letter'', she asks for an invite to Bath and says that she can easily bear a few months away from her own children.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: She insinuates that the Harvilles must be bad parents to be able to leave their children in others' care (specifically, Mary's and Charles') Charles', though they are actually with her mother-in-law) for a few months. In the ''same letter'', she asks for an invite to Bath and says that she can easily bear a few months away from her own children.
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Mary's sister-in-law. Louisa is confident and lively and becomes quite attached to Wentworth, who declares himself wanting to marry a confident and lively woman.
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Mary's sister-in-law. Louisa is confident and lively and becomes quite attached to Wentworth, who declares himself wanting to marry a confident and confident, resolute, lively woman.
woman with a strong mind and sweetness of manner.
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* FallingIntoHisArms: Invoking this becomes one of her favorite things to do: jumping off of steps so that Wentworth will catch her. When she tries it from the Cobb at Lyme, she runs up to a ''very'' high spot, ignoring his protests. He's unable to catch her and she sustains a severe head injury that leaves her unconscious for at least a day.
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* FallingIntoHisArms: Invoking this becomes one of her favorite things to do: jumping off of steps so that Wentworth will catch her. When she tries it from the Cobb at Lyme, she runs up to a ''very'' high spot, ignoring his protests. He's unable to catch her and she sustains a severe head injury that leaves her unconscious for at least a day.day, she nearly dies and though she recovers, she's not as healthy and well as she used to be.
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* HarpOfFemininity: Plays the harp. In one scene, the Musgrove sisters' harp is especially delived to a dinner party at her brother's so she could play the harp.
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* HarpOfFemininity: Plays the harp. In one scene, the Musgrove sisters' harp is especially delived delivered to a dinner party at her brother's so she could play the harp.
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* SecondLove: Not for Wentworth, but ''Benwick.''
* SpiritedYoungLady: Unlike other Austen ladies of this mold, though, Louisa sometimes has more spirit than sense.
* SpiritedYoungLady: Unlike other Austen ladies of this mold, though, Louisa sometimes has more spirit than sense.
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* SecondLove: Not She's a potential second love interest for Wentworth, Captain Wentworth who previously loved Anne (and as it turns out, never stopped loving her), but ''Benwick.''
Louisa ends up marrying Captain Benwick. She's his second love as well. He was engaged to Fanny Harville who died while he was at sea.
* SpiritedYoungLady: Unlike other Austen ladies of this mold, though, Louisa sometimes has more spirit than sense. \n She's forthright and firm, and open in her liking for Wentworth, but insists on making a dangerous jump from stone steps against the urging of everyone present and sustains a serious head injury. After she recovers, her brother says that she's not as lively as she used to be.
-->'''Charles:''' [S]he is altered; there is no running or jumping about, no laughing or dancing; it is quite different. If one happens only to shut the door a little hard, she starts and wriggles like a young dab-chick in the water; and Benwick sits at her elbow, reading verses, or whispering to her, all day long.
* SpiritedYoungLady: Unlike other Austen ladies of this mold, though, Louisa sometimes has more spirit than sense.
-->'''Charles:''' [S]he is altered; there is no running or jumping about, no laughing or dancing; it is quite different. If one happens only to shut the door a little hard, she starts and wriggles like a young dab-chick in the water; and Benwick sits at her elbow, reading verses, or whispering to her, all day long.
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* WidowsWeeds: The male version. He has black crepe around his hat, and everyone who discusses his prospects with Anne notes that their marriage would have take place after "a decent interval."
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* WidowsWeeds: The male version. He has black crepe around his hat, and everyone who discusses his prospects with Anne notes that their marriage would have take place after "a decent interval."interval".
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misuse — New Old Flame is "a gentle Retcon to allow a previously unmentioned love-of-their-life to pop up for a main character in an episode."
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* NewOldFlame: To Captain Wentworth. They used to be engaged and the chemistry is still there, despite the fact that Captain Wentworth chooses to ignore her at first.
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* KissingCousins: He flirts with Anne by saying he hopes her name never changes. Normal for the time.
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* KissingCousins: He flirts with Anne by saying he hopes her name never changes. Normal for the time.time, but still, they are not first cousins.
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* IWasQuiteALooker: She was very pretty when she was younger -- a teenager and in her early twenties. Her loss of love cost her her bloom and she's considered rather plain, but elegant. Her looks improve considerably when she gets happier.
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* HarpOfFemininity: Plays the harp. In one scene, the Musgrove sisters' harp is especially delived to a dinner party at her brotehr's so she could play the harp.
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* HarpOfFemininity: Plays the harp. In one scene, the Musgrove sisters' harp is especially delived to a dinner party at her brotehr's brother's so she could play the harp.
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* {{Expy}}: To some extent, of [[Literature/PrideAndPrejudice Mr. William Collins]]. Both are a cousin of the heroine (Mr. Collins for Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Elliot for Anne) and set to inherit the heroine's father's estate due to the HeirClubForMen; as such, they are presented as a viable option for matrimony for the heroine. Here, the resemblance ends, as Mr. Elliot is much more charismatic than Mr. Collins.
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* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Competes with her less-confident sister Henrietta for Wentworth's attention, though Louisa soon takes the lead.
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* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Competes with her less-confident sister Henrietta for Wentworth's attention, though Louisa soon takes the lead.
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* HiddenDepths: Anne is highly regarded by all sensible people who know her, and she is very accomplished. Her taste and knowledge of literature and music is well known to all, but people in her company at a concert in Bath are extremely impressed by the fact that she has a command of Italian and is able to translate a song into elegant English for them. She is also very modest about it.
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* HiddenDepths: Anne is highly regarded by all sensible people who know her, and she is very accomplished. Her taste and knowledge of literature and music is well known to all, but people in her company at a concert in Bath are extremely impressed by the fact that she has a command of Italian and is able to translate a song into elegant English for them. She is also very modest about it.