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* Although it never comes to fruition, the fact that Alan (a mere teenager) was going to file a lawsuit against Globtech is nothing to sneeze at.
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* Although it never comes to fruition, fruition due to circumstances, the fact that Alan (a mere teenager) was going to file a lawsuit against Globtech is nothing to sneeze at.
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* Although it never comes to fruition, the fact that Alan (a mere teenager) was going to file a lawsuit against Globtech is nothing to sneeze at.
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-->'''Archer:''' (with a [[DeathGlare cross glower]], voice dripping with TranquilFury) [[SayMyName Major Chip Hazard]].
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-->'''Archer:''' (with a [[DeathGlare cross glower]], ([[DeathGlare Glowering]], voice dripping with TranquilFury) [[SayMyName Major Chip Hazard]].
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*** What's more, it doubles as a scathing insult as to how, compared to the Gorgonites who grew beyond their programming, Major Chip Hazard and the Commando Elite are just that: [[ExactWords toys too stupid to do anything besides their programming]].
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-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]], removes the dagger) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentRemark The same as yours]]. (Attempts to use the dagger against Major Chip Hazard)
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-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]], removes the dagger) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentRemark The same as yours]]. (Attempts to [[TookALevelInBadass use the dagger dagger]] against Major Chip Hazard)
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* Remember when Archer remarked to Major Chip Hazard that the former was "[also] programmed to learn"? We later learn that he and the Gorgonites used the felled satellite dish to shield themselves from the EMP blast. Alan even points out that was pretty smart thinking on their part.
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* Remember when Archer remarked to Major Chip Hazard that the former was "[also] programmed to learn"? We later learn that he and the Gorgonites used the felled satellite dish to shield themselves from the EMP blast. Alan even points out that was pretty smart thinking on their part.how they thought smarter, not harder.
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-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' You've got guts. Let's see what they look like. (Stabs Archer in the leg)
-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]]) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentRemark The same as yours]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' [[NotSoSimilar We're nothing alike]]!! (Punches Archer in the gut) [[ShutUpKirk You are programmed to lose]]!
-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]]) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentRemark The same as yours]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' [[NotSoSimilar We're nothing alike]]!! (Punches Archer in the gut) [[ShutUpKirk You are programmed to lose]]!
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-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' You've got guts. Let's see what they look like. (Stabs Archer in the leg)
leg with a dagger)
-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about hisinjury]]) injury]], removes the dagger) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentRemark The same as yours]].
yours]]. (Attempts to use the dagger against Major Chip Hazard)
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' (Disarms Archer) [[NotSoSimilar We're nothing alike]]!! (Punches Archer in the gut) [[ShutUpKirk You are programmed to lose]]!
-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' (Disarms Archer) [[NotSoSimilar We're nothing alike]]!! (Punches Archer in the gut) [[ShutUpKirk You are programmed to lose]]!
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** Fridge-Awesome: Whether this was intentional or not, this feels very much like an IronicEcho to the Commando Elite's motto "Everything else is just a toy." It often exudes a sense that the Commandos look down on everything else (especially their enemies) as 'less than'. In wake that he harmed his friend Archer, by calling him a "toy", Alan rightly [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech demeaned Major Chip Hazard as being "just a toy"]].
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** Fridge-Awesome: Whether this was intentional or not, this feels very much like an IronicEcho to the Commando Elite's motto "Everything else is just a toy." It often exudes a sense that the Commandos look down on everything else (especially their enemies) as 'less than'. In wake that he harmed his friend Archer, by calling him a "toy", Alan rightly [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech demeaned Major Chip Hazard as being "just a toy"]].toy"]].
* Remember when Archer remarked to Major Chip Hazard that the former was "[also] programmed to learn"? We later learn that he and the Gorgonites used the felled satellite dish to shield themselves from the EMP blast. Alan even points out that was pretty smart thinking on their part.
* Remember when Archer remarked to Major Chip Hazard that the former was "[also] programmed to learn"? We later learn that he and the Gorgonites used the felled satellite dish to shield themselves from the EMP blast. Alan even points out that was pretty smart thinking on their part.
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** And even when Major Chip Hazard [[ShutUpKirk shoots down his remark]], Archer still [[TheDeterminator gets back up]] in response.
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-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]]) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentDialogue The same as yours]].
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-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]]) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentDialogue [[NotSoDifferentRemark The same as yours]].
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* Even if it did ''[[AntiClimax not]]'' conclude with Archer directly defeating Major Chip Hazard, their final confrontation has its moments, considering it encapsulates [[CharacterDevelopment how far Archer's come]].
-->'''Archer:''' (with a [[DeathGlare cross glower]], voice dripping with TranquilFury) [[SayMyName Major Chip Hazard]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' Gorgonite Scum.
-->'''Archer:''' Leave Alan alone. [[DeclarationOfProtection Your fight is with me]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' You've got guts. Let's see what they look like. (Stabs Archer in the leg)
-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]]) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentDialogue The same as yours]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' [[NotSoSimilar We're nothing alike]]!! (Punches Archer in the gut) [[ShutUpKirk You are programmed to lose]]!
-->'''Archer:''' [[{{Foreshadowing}} I am also programmed to learn]].
-->'''Archer:''' (with a [[DeathGlare cross glower]], voice dripping with TranquilFury) [[SayMyName Major Chip Hazard]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' Gorgonite Scum.
-->'''Archer:''' Leave Alan alone. [[DeclarationOfProtection Your fight is with me]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' You've got guts. Let's see what they look like. (Stabs Archer in the leg)
-->'''Archer:''' ([[CasualDangerDialogue Rather casual about his injury]]) They're wires and metal. [[NotSoDifferentDialogue The same as yours]].
-->'''Major Chip Hazard:''' [[NotSoSimilar We're nothing alike]]!! (Punches Archer in the gut) [[ShutUpKirk You are programmed to lose]]!
-->'''Archer:''' [[{{Foreshadowing}} I am also programmed to learn]].
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** FridgeBrilliance: This ties in with how they were programmed to ''learn''. On their behalf, Archer is learning from their previous mistake that hiding won't accomplish anything. Their learning program is so powerful, it's ''overriding'' their program to hide.
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** With an {{Adorkable}} squeal of delight when she realizes she blew them up.
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** With an {{Adorkable}} squeal of delight when she realizes she blew them up.up [[MundaneMadeAwesome with little more than a tennis racket]].
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* It's brief but seeing Archer riding on Ocula make some look like a warrior riding in on battle.
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* It's brief but seeing Archer riding on Ocula make some look like a warrior riding in on battle.battle.
* "[[PostMortemOneLiner Have I got a shock for you]], ''[[SuddenlyShouting you stupid toy]]''!!"
** Fridge-Awesome: Whether this was intentional or not, this feels very much like an IronicEcho to the Commando Elite's motto "Everything else is just a toy." It often exudes a sense that the Commandos look down on everything else (especially their enemies) as 'less than'. In wake that he harmed his friend Archer, by calling him a "toy", Alan rightly [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech demeaned Major Chip Hazard as being "just a toy"]].
* "[[PostMortemOneLiner Have I got a shock for you]], ''[[SuddenlyShouting you stupid toy]]''!!"
** Fridge-Awesome: Whether this was intentional or not, this feels very much like an IronicEcho to the Commando Elite's motto "Everything else is just a toy." It often exudes a sense that the Commandos look down on everything else (especially their enemies) as 'less than'. In wake that he harmed his friend Archer, by calling him a "toy", Alan rightly [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech demeaned Major Chip Hazard as being "just a toy"]].
