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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie''. Or trying seriously, at that.

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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] Danzo beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie''. Or trying seriously, at that.

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* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates [[spoiler:and dead comrades]] through the Second Phase of the Kiri Exams.

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* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates [[spoiler:and and dead comrades]] comrades through the Second Phase of the Kiri Exams.
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* First Try, chapter 4 where Tetsuo ''punched Kakashi in the face'' for endangering Naruto by irresponsibly teaching the Shadow Clone Jutsu. He is [[CurbStompBattle quickly outclassed]], but goes to show [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he grew to care for Naruto]]

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* First Try, chapter 4 where Tetsuo ''punched Kakashi in the face'' for endangering Naruto by irresponsibly teaching the Shadow Clone Jutsu. He is [[CurbStompBattle quickly outclassed]], but goes to show [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments how much he grew to care for Naruto]]
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* In ''Team Tetsuo'' chapter 26, Shin ruining [[BullyingTheDragon the greedy merchant who had stifled Team Tetsuo and Zabuza's group]] and called an AngryMob on them [[UngratefulBastard after they saved his children]], with nothing but ''one phrase he wasn't sure was true''.
--->"Throw that rock and Danzo-sama will expose your involvement with the underground slave market".
** ''Then'', to make sure he'd get his just desserts, they planted a few evidence and had the townspeople of Saida find it ''and'' the ''real'' evidence of his many crimes.

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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''

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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''lie''. Or trying seriously, at that.
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* In Team 7 chapter 22, [[GuileHero Naruto]] manages to fast-talk [[{{Yandere}} Kakashi]] out of training him. The end result? Kakashi leaves on a month-long camping trip with Sasuke, Sakura has THREE tutors (Ebisu, Suzume and Kurenai) and Naruto gets to train with Tetsuo.

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* In Team 7 chapter 22, ''Team 7'', [[GuileHero Naruto]] manages to fast-talk [[{{Yandere}} Kakashi]] out of training him. The end result? Kakashi leaves on a month-long camping trip with Sasuke, Sakura has THREE tutors (Ebisu, Suzume and Kurenai) and Naruto gets to train with Tetsuo.
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* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates and dead comrades out of the Second Phase of the Kiri Exam

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* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates and [[spoiler:and dead comrades out of comrades]] through the Second Phase of the Kiri ExamExams.
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* First Try, chapter 4 where Tetsuo ''punched Kakashi in the face'' for endangering Naruto by irresponsibly teaching the Shadow Clone Jutsu. He is [[CurbStompBattle quickly outclassed]], but goes to show [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he grew to care for Naruto]]

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* First Try, chapter 4 where Tetsuo ''punched Kakashi in the face'' for endangering Naruto by irresponsibly teaching the Shadow Clone Jutsu. He is [[CurbStompBattle quickly outclassed]], but goes to show [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he grew to care for Naruto]]
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* The fact that Naruto was able to earn the respect of Konoha's shinobi forces.

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* The fact that Naruto was able to earn the respect of Konoha's shinobi forces.forces.
* First Try, chapter 4 where Tetsuo ''punched Kakashi in the face'' for endangering Naruto by irresponsibly teaching the Shadow Clone Jutsu. He is [[CurbStompBattle quickly outclassed]], but goes to show [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming how much he grew to care for Naruto]]
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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''

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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''''
* The fact that Naruto was able to earn the respect of Konoha's shinobi forces.
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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificientBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''

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* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificientBastard [[MagnificentBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''
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* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates and dead comrades out of the Second Phase of the Kiri Exam

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* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates and dead comrades out of the Second Phase of the Kiri ExamExam
* Team Tetsuo, [[MagnificientBastard Danzo]] beating [[AlphaBitch Barako]] at her own game ''without even using a lie.''
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* In Team 7 chapter 22, [[GuileHero Naruto]] manages to fast-talk [[{{Yandere}} Kakashi]] out of training him. The end result? Kakashi leaves on a month-long camping trip with Sasuke, Sakura has THREE tutors (Ebisu, Suzume and Kurenai) and Naruto gets to train with Tetsuo.

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* In Team 7 chapter 22, [[GuileHero Naruto]] manages to fast-talk [[{{Yandere}} Kakashi]] out of training him. The end result? Kakashi leaves on a month-long camping trip with Sasuke, Sakura has THREE tutors (Ebisu, Suzume and Kurenai) and Naruto gets to train with Tetsuo.Tetsuo.
* In First Try chapters 8-9, Naruto manages to get his maimed teammates and dead comrades out of the Second Phase of the Kiri Exam
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-->"I might have let you get away with that while I was at the Academy because I liked you but I'm not going to let you take advantage of my kindness in such a manner again. Allowing myself to be abused in such a manner is not behavior befitting a shinobi. Despite the fact that I am loathe to do so since [[BullyingADragon you already attacked me,]] I'm going to let you up. If you try to hit me again however, [[BewareTheNiceOnes I'll break your arm.]] Before you even think about testing this, I'm going to warn you right now that I'm not going to go easy on you because you're a girl, since that's just a bit of civilian nonsense and I've learned the hard way that [[MoreDeadlyThanTheMale girls are just as dangerous as, if not moreso than, boys.]] If you think anyone will make a fuss over me breaking your arm...Well, let's just say that you don't want to be there when they learn that the reason your arm was broken was because [[TooDumbToLive you were suicidally stupid enough to try and attack a ninja."]]

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-->"I might have let you get away with that while I was at the Academy because I liked you but I'm not going to let you take advantage of my kindness in such a manner again. Allowing myself to be abused in such a manner is not behavior befitting a shinobi. Despite the fact that I am loathe to do so since [[BullyingADragon you already attacked me,]] I'm going to let you up. If you try to hit me again however, [[BewareTheNiceOnes I'll break your arm.]] Before you even think about testing this, I'm going to warn you right now that I'm not going to go easy on you because you're a girl, since that's just a bit of civilian nonsense and I've learned the hard way that [[MoreDeadlyThanTheMale girls are just as dangerous as, if not moreso than, boys.]] If you think anyone will make a fuss over me breaking your arm...Well, let's just say that you don't want to be there when they learn that the reason your arm was broken was because [[TooDumbToLive you were suicidally stupid enough to try and attack a ninja."]]ninja]]."
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-->"I might have let you get away with that while I was at the Academy because I liked you but I'm not going to let you take advantage of my kindness in such a manner again. Allowing myself to be abused in such a manner is not behavior befitting a shinobi. Despite the fact that I am loathe to do so since [[BullyingADragon you already attacked me,]] I'm going to let you up. If you try to hit me again however, [[BewareTheNiceOnes I'll break your arm.]] Before you even think about testing this, I'm going to warn you right now that I'm not going to go easy on you because you're a girl, since that's just a bit of civilian nonsense and I've learned the hard way that [[MoreDeadlyThanTheMale girls are just as dangerous as, if not moreso than, boys.]] If you think anyone will make a fuss over me breaking your arm...Well, let's just say that you don't want to be there when they learn that the reason your arm was broken was because [[TooDumbToLive you were suicidally stupid enough to try and attack a ninja."]]

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-->"I might have let you get away with that while I was at the Academy because I liked you but I'm not going to let you take advantage of my kindness in such a manner again. Allowing myself to be abused in such a manner is not behavior befitting a shinobi. Despite the fact that I am loathe to do so since [[BullyingADragon you already attacked me,]] I'm going to let you up. If you try to hit me again however, [[BewareTheNiceOnes I'll break your arm.]] Before you even think about testing this, I'm going to warn you right now that I'm not going to go easy on you because you're a girl, since that's just a bit of civilian nonsense and I've learned the hard way that [[MoreDeadlyThanTheMale girls are just as dangerous as, if not moreso than, boys.]] If you think anyone will make a fuss over me breaking your arm...Well, let's just say that you don't want to be there when they learn that the reason your arm was broken was because [[TooDumbToLive you were suicidally stupid enough to try and attack a ninja."]]"]]
* In Team 7 chapter 22, [[GuileHero Naruto]] manages to fast-talk [[{{Yandere}} Kakashi]] out of training him. The end result? Kakashi leaves on a month-long camping trip with Sasuke, Sakura has THREE tutors (Ebisu, Suzume and Kurenai) and Naruto gets to train with Tetsuo.
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* In First Try chapter 10: Recovery, Naruto's WouldHitAGirl TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to [[AlphaBitch Sakura]]:
-->"I might have let you get away with that while I was at the Academy because I liked you but I'm not going to let you take advantage of my kindness in such a manner again. Allowing myself to be abused in such a manner is not behavior befitting a shinobi. Despite the fact that I am loathe to do so since [[BullyingADragon you already attacked me,]] I'm going to let you up. If you try to hit me again however, [[BewareTheNiceOnes I'll break your arm.]] Before you even think about testing this, I'm going to warn you right now that I'm not going to go easy on you because you're a girl, since that's just a bit of civilian nonsense and I've learned the hard way that [[MoreDeadlyThanTheMale girls are just as dangerous as, if not moreso than, boys.]] If you think anyone will make a fuss over me breaking your arm...Well, let's just say that you don't want to be there when they learn that the reason your arm was broken was because [[TooDumbToLive you were suicidally stupid enough to try and attack a ninja."]]

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