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* ProchronicProduct: [[spoiler:[[ReluctantMadScientist Professor Kamale]]]] creates nuclear-powered flying machines for Neo City, which had been built during the [[{{Steampunk}} Victorian Era]].
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* IndignantSlap: Angered by his wife's callousness during the cruise, a passenger decides enough is enough when she falsely accuses Banshee of being a thief even after it had been proven her dog Wolfgang stole her jewels, and slaps her.
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In a separate event, Lord Buxton learns that William has embezzled money from the bank, and Georges is invited participate to an expedition led by the Prof. Barsac to the countries from which Azurium originates.
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In a separate event, Lord Buxton learns that William has embezzled money from the bank, and Georges is invited to participate to in an expedition led by the Prof. Barsac to the countries from which Azurium originates.
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One day, Jane receives a letter containing some this mysterious sand and decides to mount an expedition to rescue her brother, whom she now believes to still be alive...
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One day, Jane receives a letter containing some this mysterious sand and decides to mount an expedition to rescue her brother, whom she now believes to still be alive...
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:William]] still loves Jane [[spoiler:because she was the only one consistently nice towards him during his stay at Glenar Castle]].
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: BecauseYouWereNiceToMe:
** [[spoiler:William]] still loves Jane [[spoiler:because she was the only one consistently nice towards him during his stay at GlenarCastle]].Castle]].
** One of the DesertBandits who attempted to rob and murder Jane's party finally let them flee after Jane appealed to his nice nature. Said bandit only joined his chief because [[spoiler:he had saved him after William kicked him out his expedition]].
** [[spoiler:William]] still loves Jane [[spoiler:because she was the only one consistently nice towards him during his stay at Glenar
** One of the DesertBandits who attempted to rob and murder Jane's party finally let them flee after Jane appealed to his nice nature. Said bandit only joined his chief because [[spoiler:he had saved him after William kicked him out his expedition]].
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* MadeASlave: Jane is horrified when she finds out what the people of [[spoiler: Neo City]] have done to the people they've kidnapped from the neighboring villages. And moreso when she discovers that [[spoiler: her brother William]] [[BigBad is responsible for it.]]
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* MadeASlave: Jane is horrified when she finds out what the people of [[spoiler: Neo City]] have done to the people they've kidnapped from the neighboring villages. And moreso when she discovers that [[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her brother William]] [[BigBad is responsible for it.]]
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* PrivateTutor: On the boat to the Levant, the butler Chambellan is shown teaching Miss Buxton about UsefulNotes/AlexanderTheGreat's conquests.
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* PrivateTutor: On the boat to the Levant, the butler Chambellan is shown teaching a retive Miss Buxton about UsefulNotes/AlexanderTheGreat's conquests.
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* SearchingForTheLostRelative: Jane Buxton went to the Orient to seek her missing brother Georges, reported to have been shot for treason.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: George tried to explain, ''without tangible evidence'', he needed funds to research a mysterious substance able to fly, basing only on legends; surely he must have expected to ''not'' be believed at all.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeology: William claims to George he was sent there to work in a steel mine. Of course, steel is an articficial alliage of iron and carbon. Especially jarring since George had a scientific training.
* BrainyBrunette: Jane know very much in mechanics to the point to [[spoiler:jury rig a flying machine using azurium]].
* BreakingTheFellowship: After Jane revealed to Barsac her real identity, Barsac decided to separate the group, explaining he might have to execute George for treason if the circumstances called for it, and he doesn't want Jane to see this.
* DesertBAndits: Jane and Chambellan unknowingly hire such men as guide, and are saved by Sabri foiling an attempt by them to murder and then rob them, along with Jane managing to call the good nature of one of these.
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* FacelessGoons: Harry Killer's men all wear masks, except for Morilire. Captain Marsenay and Barsac attempt to use this to their advantage twice, in order to infiltrate Neo City. Morilire foils them the first time, the second try succeeds.
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* FacelessGoons: Harry Killer's men all wear masks, except for Morilire. Captain Marsenay and Barsac attempt to use this to their advantage twice, in order to infiltrate Neo City. Morilire foils betrays them the first time, the second try succeeds.
* GildedCage: After coming to Neo-City, Jane is sent in such a prison. After she started to complain about how villagers were mistreated, Harry Killer ordered her to be locked in her luxuous room. Her companons Chambellan and Sabri [[HellholePrison weren't so lucky]].
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: A raider tells to a female villager that he would have liked to be able to bring her to Neo-City with him.
* ImpoverishedPatrician: After their bank was robbed, the Buxton family ends up less wealthy and has to dismiss most of their domestics to the exception of Chambellana and Kate.
* ImpoverishedPatrician: After their bank was robbed, the Buxton family ends up less wealthy and has to dismiss most of their domestics to the exception of Chambellana and Kate.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Marsenay first sees [[spoiler: Camille]] while she's defending her village against raiders from [[spoiler: Neo City]] and becomes taken by her valour as well as her beauty. The feeling becomes mutual when he volunteers to train her people.
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* TheLostLenore: In the train, Barsac esplains to Jane that, when he was in India, his wife and daughter died because he wasn't able to have a doctor come during a tempest, commenting a flying machine could have saved their lives.
* LoveAtFirstSight: Marsenay first sees [[spoiler: Camille]] while she's defending her village against raiders from [[spoiler: Neo City]] and becomes taken by her valour as well as her beauty. The feeling becomes mutual when he volunteers to train her people. [[spoiler:They later marry at the end]].
* LoveAtFirstSight: Marsenay first sees [[spoiler: Camille]] while she's defending her village against raiders from [[spoiler: Neo City]] and becomes taken by her valour as well as her beauty. The feeling becomes mutual when he volunteers to train her people. [[spoiler:They later marry at the end]].
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* PrivateTutor: The butler Chambellan is shown teaching Miss Buxton about UsefulNotes/AlexanderTheGreat's conquests.
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* PrivateTutor: The On the boat to the Levant, the butler Chambellan is shown teaching Miss Buxton about UsefulNotes/AlexanderTheGreat's conquests.conquests.
* RapePillageAndBurn: Barsac has been sent to investigate such incidents by Neo-City agents.
* RapePillageAndBurn: Barsac has been sent to investigate such incidents by Neo-City agents.
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** What the letter said happened to Georges for treason.
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** What the letter said claimed happened to Georges for treason.
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* TheSpymaster: To say he's so ObviouslyEvil, no one suspects [[spoiler: Morillre]] of being a villain until after he's sabotaged Barsac and his men several times. And still manages to successfully pull off a double-cross after being exposed and captured by them.
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* TheSpymaster: To say he's so ObviouslyEvil, no one suspects [[spoiler: Morillre]] of being a villain until after he's sabotaged Barsac and his men several times.times, even though he was seen since Jane embarked the ship. And still manages to successfully pull off a double-cross after being exposed and captured by them.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: George tried to explain, ''without tangible evidence'', he needed funds to research a mysterious substance able to fly, basing only on legends; surely he must have expected to ''not'' be believed at all.
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** [[spoiler:Later, William push his master spy Morilire in the sky to his DisneyVillainDeath and kill, with his airplane-weapon, ''the entire population of Neo-City in the airplanes where they were'']].
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** [[spoiler:Later, William push his master spy Morilire in the sky to his DisneyVillainDeath and kill, with his airplane-weapon, ''the entire population of Neo-City in the airplanes where they were'']].
were'' simply because he wanted to use it on humans]].
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One day, Georges hears talk of Azurium - a mysterious cerulean sand that ability to enable flight. He goes to the University to discuss this discovery with several scientists, but no one believes him, with the exception of Christopher Barsac.
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One day, Georges hears talk of Azurium - a mysterious cerulean sand that with the ability to enable flight. He goes to the University to discuss this discovery with several scientists, but no one believes him, with the exception of Christopher Barsac.
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* ByTheHair: A bandit thug grabs Camille by her long hair to give his leader an upper hand in the fight with her, prompting Camille to have it cut off in the aftermath of her loss. Jane also gets pulled by the hair by one of Morilire's men a few episodes later when she and her friends are caught inside their airship.
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** [[spoiler:What Barsac wanted to do to a soldier who deserted after viewing the carnage in the desert, before being interrupted by a bombing]].
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** [[spoiler:What Barsac Marsenay wanted to do to Jack, a soldier who deserted after viewing the carnage in the desert, before being interrupted by a bombing]].Jane and the bombing after]].
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler:After being attacked by a flying bomber, Jane realizes that flying machines can also be instruments of death]].
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: A tombstone bearing Georges Buxton's name is found in the carnage site but is revealed to contain only a miniature flying machine]].
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: A tombstone bearing Georges Buxton's name is found in the carnage site but is revealed to contain only a the miniature flying machine]].machine model Jane gave him just before he left]].
* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:After being attacked by a flying bomber, Jane realizes that flying machines can also be instruments of death]].
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* TreacherousAdvisor: [[spoiler:Morilire, hired by the Barsac Expedition as guide, is later shown as a traitor after he made the troops turn in circle in the desert]].
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* TreacherousAdvisor: [[spoiler:Morilire, hired by the Barsac Expedition as guide, is later shown as a traitor spy after he made the troops turn in circle in the desert]].
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* LadyOfAdventure: Jane isn't about to let a few hundred thousand square kilometers of sand stand in the way of finding her brother. So she sets off on a grand adventure across the globe, at 14 years old.
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* LadyOfAdventure: Jane isn't about to let a few hundred thousand square kilometers of sand stand in the way of finding her brother. So she sets off on a grand adventure across the globe, at 14 15 years old.old.
* LadyOfWar: Camille, the current leader and primary defender of the Hanan Tribe.
* LadyOfWar: Camille, the current leader and primary defender of the Hanan Tribe.
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* DomesticAbuser: The unnamed overbearing woman during episode 5, who falsely accused Jane and Banchi of stealing her brooch. When Jane reveals that her pet duschehound was the culprit, the woman began throwing fruit at it, then attacked Banchi for trying to defend the poor pooch. This finally spurred her HenpeckedHusband to action, by striking her across the cheek and calling her out on her callus behavior. She walks away stunned, but by the end of the episode, Jane saw that she had given him a blackeye and a swollen jaw in retaliation.
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* DomesticAbuser: DomesticAbuse: The unnamed overbearing woman during episode 5, who falsely accused Jane and Banchi of stealing her brooch. When Jane reveals that her pet duschehound was the culprit, the woman began throwing fruit at it, then attacked Banchi for trying to defend the poor pooch. This finally spurred her HenpeckedHusband to action, by striking her across the cheek and calling her out on her callus behavior. She walks away stunned, but by the end of the episode, Jane saw that she had given him a blackeye and a swollen jaw in retaliation.
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[[IThoughtItMeant This is]] '''not''' ''Anime/NadiaTheSecretOfBlueWater'', though they share much in common as far as characters and plot points.
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Several weeks after, a letter arrives at Glenar telling was Georges was shot for treason.
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Several weeks after, a letter arrives at Glenar telling was Georges was shot for treason.
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* {{Asshole Victim}}s: [[spoiler:It's difficult to feel sorry for the denizens of Neo-City blown up by William, knowing that they remorselessly benefited from the enslavement and plunder of the neighbouring communities]].
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* {{Asshole Victim}}s: Victim}}s:
** [[spoiler:William let his spymaster Morillire die when his airship is damaged. But it's hard to feel sorry for him, since he was a traitor, a SmugSnake and a coward who threatened Jane's life a few moments earlier.]]
** [[spoiler:It's difficult to feel sorry for the denizens of Neo-City blown up by William, knowing that they remorselessly benefited from the enslavement and plunder of the neighbouring communities]].
** [[spoiler:William let his spymaster Morillire die when his airship is damaged. But it's hard to feel sorry for him, since he was a traitor, a SmugSnake and a coward who threatened Jane's life a few moments earlier.]]
** [[spoiler:It's difficult to feel sorry for the denizens of Neo-City blown up by William, knowing that they remorselessly benefited from the enslavement and plunder of the neighbouring communities]].
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* BitterSweetEnding: [[spoiler:Althrough Jane found her brother Georges alive and cleared his name, he then died with William]].
* DeathByChildbirth: Jane's mother died while giving birth to her.
* DeathByChildbirth: Jane's mother died while giving birth to her.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:William]] still loves Jane [[spoiler:because she was the only one consistently nice towards him during his stay at Glenar Castle]].
* BitterSweetEnding:[[spoiler:Althrough [[spoiler:Although Jane found her brother Georges alive and cleared his name, he then died with William]].
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** Jane's mother died while giving birth to her.
* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Morillire and several guards]] end up being thrown out of Harry Killer's airplane when the latter accidentally opens a hole in its wall with his super weapon.
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* MoralityPet: Jane is this for [[spoiler:her brother William]]. While he had enslaved people to build Neo-City and caused the death of a lot of people, he still loves her. He actually [[spoiler:chooses to sacrifice his life to save her]] at the end.
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* MoralityPet: Jane is this for [[spoiler:her brother stepbrother William]]. While he had enslaved people to build Neo-City and caused the death of a lot of people, he still loves her. He actually [[spoiler:chooses to sacrifice his life to save her]] at the end.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: William and George]] sacrifice their lives to save [[spoiler:Jane]].
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: William and George]] sacrifice their lives to save [[spoiler:Jane]].[[spoiler:Jane]] during the climax of the last episode.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: [[spoiler:William so loved Jane he named his adoptive daughter Jeanne]].
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* ReplacementGoldfish: [[spoiler:William so loved Jane so much he named his adoptive daughter Jeanne]].
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** [[spoiler:What is implied to happen to worn slaves]].
** [[spoiler:Later, William push his master spy Morilire in the sky to his DisneyVillainDeath and kill, with his airplane-weapon, ''the entire population of Neo-City in the airplanes where they were'']].
** [[spoiler:Later, William push his master spy Morilire in the sky to his DisneyVillainDeath and kill, with his airplane-weapon, ''the entire population of Neo-City in the airplanes where they were'']].
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* MoralityPet: Jane is this for [[spoiler:her brother William]]. While he had enslaved people to build Neo-City and caused the death of a lot of people, he still loves her. He actually [[spoiler:chooses to sacrifice his life to save her]] at the end.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: William and George]].
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