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Working Title: Obviously Evil: From YKTTW

Austin: On Mok, I heard he was based on Mick Jagger, not David Bowie. Or was it both?
Dentaku: The Star Wars example is really atrociously written. I could rewrite it myself, but since I'm not a fan I can't be assed.

Count Dorku: I tried my hand at rewriting it; let me know if it's OK or if I sucked.