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This is discussion archived from a time before the current discussion method was installed.
From YKTTW Working Title: Mind Your Step
gumby_jd: Hmm. Perhaps this should be altered a bit to include those situations where a character is specifically told to mind their step/watch what they're doing/etc. and that telling provides a distraction causing the accident the teller was attempting to avoid. Quite common, but, as you can see, I'm a horrible writer and wouldn't be able to make it read good. :P
gumby_jd: Hmm. Perhaps this should be altered a bit to include those situations where a character is specifically told to mind their step/watch what they're doing/etc. and that telling provides a distraction causing the accident the teller was attempting to avoid. Quite common, but, as you can see, I'm a horrible writer and wouldn't be able to make it read good. :P